Ann wishes you to correct her spelling errors and make it sound professionally written
I am very pleased with this Story it is retold. But I would like to read more of it and who is the author of this retold story. As in fact the story is very good and well written it has all the the facts and details. It's the greatest story I've ever heard. It is actually happened back in those days by barbarics wanderer world but still today there's some barbarics not as bad today as they used to be.
sincerely Ann Chook
I am extremely pleased with this retold story. However, I would like to read more of it and learn about the author who penned this version. The story is exceptionally well-written, containing all the necessary facts and details. It is truly one of the best stories I have ever come across. This narrative is based on events that occurred in a world inhabited by barbaric wanderers, and though there are still remnants of such barbarism today, they are not as prevalent as in the past.
Sincerely,
Ann Chook