In five sentences how do you think their goal is good. write in second person pronoun
My life goal is to become a successful hairdresser and someday, open up my own salon. I need to create a strategic plan in order to make my dreams come true. It has to be realistic. Some obstacles I may come across could be that I don't have enough money to have my own salon, there are too many salons in my area so I may not get a lot of customers, I can't afford to pay my workers and buy all kinds of products, etc. I would need to have a savings account ahead of time. So, while I'm working at someone else's salon before opening my own in the future, I'll need to save up a lot of money in order to make my dreams come true years down the road. Also, if there are too many salons in my area, I could make sure mine is the best of the best or, I could still live in my county but maybe create my salon in a county near me as long as it isn't too far of a drive.