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It was a bright sunny day and we were playing in the playroom (attic of our grandmother's house) when I lost my pretty new earrings and bracelet. I told my older brother Themnoer. My 11-year-old brother heard me telling Themnoer and he climbed up on a chest and said, "We all need to find Nela's earrings and bracelet. We need to look for it. We will find it..." I giggled. He stopped and looked at me, then added, "It's not because we are searching, but because we are looking." This caught everyone's attention, and they all burst into laughter.
"You talk too much, Gevin. So much so that you don't know what you're saying. Please consider that there is really no difference between the words 'searching' and 'looking'," Themnoer said. We then could hear grandmother coming up the stairs, I frowned when the door opened and grandma came in " to get your things it is time to go home" she said "I will clean up and look when I find them I will send Then to your uncle's place.
It was a bright, sunny day, and we were playing in the playroom (attic) of our grandmother's house when I lost my pretty new earrings and bracelet. I told my older brother, Themnoer. My 11-year-old brother overheard me and climbed up on a chest. He said, "We all need to find Nela's earrings and bracelet. We need to look for them. We will find them..." I giggled. He stopped and looked at me, then added, "It's not just about searching, but about truly looking." This caught everyone's attention, and they all burst into laughter.
"You talk too much, Gevin. A lot, to the point where you don't understand what you're saying. Please consider that there is no real difference between the words 'searching' and 'looking'," Themnoer said. We could then hear grandmother coming up the stairs. I frowned as the door opened and grandma walked in. "It's time to go home. I will clean up and look for your things. If I find them, I will send them to your uncle's place," she said.