Can you rate my writing 1-10? Also tell me if there is any mistakes like spelling, puncuation, and other things like that. "In Edgar Allan Poe’s story “The Tell Tale Heart”, Poe builds suspense through his thoughts and his actions, leaving the reader wondering if he will get away with the crime he committed. In the beginning of the story, Poe was taking care of an old man with a blind eye, who he wanted dead because his eye was “evil”. He killed the old man and felt proud for a while but then he started to feel guilty and eventually confessed to the police of the crime he committed."
I would rate your writing a 7 out of 10. Overall, your writing is clear and conveys your thoughts effectively. However, there are a few punctuation and word choice errors in your passage.
Here is a corrected version:
"In Edgar Allan Poe's story "The Tell-Tale Heart," Poe builds suspense through the protagonist's thoughts and actions, leaving the reader wondering if he will get away with the crime he committed. At the beginning of the story, Poe takes care of an old man with a blind eye, whom he wishes to kill because he deems his eye as "evil." He eventually murders the old man and feels a sense of pride initially, but later guilt sets in, leading him to eventually confess to the police about the crime he committed."
In this version, I have made some minor changes in punctuation and word choice to improve clarity.