can you chage this up a bit but keep it the same size
can you change this up a bit
The reasoning supporting the claim is flawed. Although studies show higher fines reduce speeding, doubling fines does not guarantee improved safety. The argument assumes all can afford larger fines, overlooking potential consequences such as resentment among offenders.
Could you please modify this while keeping the same length?
The support for the claim is flawed. While studies indicate that higher fines can decrease speeding, it is not guaranteed that doubling fines will enhance safety. The argument overlooks the fact that not everyone can afford larger fines and fails to consider potential consequences, like offenders' resentment.