Yes, the sentence makes sense. It is a birthday wish expressing well-wishes and blessings for Deseray on her 23rd birthday.
What about this
Happy 23rd Birthday Deseray. I hope you have a blessed exciting birthday. God Bless you.
Yes, the revised sentence also makes sense. It conveys the same message of well-wishes and blessings for Deseray on her 23rd birthday, but with the correction of "blessed" (instead of "bless") to appropriately describe the type of birthday desired for her.
Yes, the message you shared makes sense. It is a birthday greeting or wish for someone named Deseray, who is turning 23 years old. The sender is expressing well wishes and blessings for a happy and exciting birthday. The mention of "God Bless you" suggests a wish for spiritual blessings as well.
