Dear Hiring Guy,
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides. I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting online and I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position of summer custodian. I believe I would be a suitable candidate for this role due to my passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and positive demeanor. Additionally, I am highly motivated to work in order to save up funds for a new game system. I have attached my resume for your review and would greatly appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across the job opportunity for a summer custodian at your establishment and I am writing to express my interest in applying. I strongly believe I would be a suitable candidate for this role for a few reasons. Firstly, I have a genuine passion for amusement parks, making me enthusiastic about contributing to the upkeep of such an environment. Secondly, as I do not have any academic responsibilities during the summer, I would be fully committed to fulfilling the responsibilities of the position. Lastly, I am an individual who exudes positivity and possesses a strong work ethic. The job requirements seem manageable, and I am confident that I can excel in this role. Additionally, I am actively seeking employment to save up for a new gaming system. I have attached my resume for your review, and I eagerly await your response regarding the next steps in the hiring process.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I came across your job posting online and would like to express my interest in the summer custodian position. My passion for amusement parks, availability during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and positive personality make me an ideal candidate. I believe that my strong work ethic and dedication will ensure that I excel at this job. Additionally, I am motivated to earn some income to save up for a new game system. I have attached my resume for your reference. I look forward to discussing my qualifications further at your convenience.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener