aturday morning, the shopping center buzzed with activity as people went in and out of stores.
Which change would make the language in the sentence more precise?
(1 point)
Responses
replacing Saturday morning with earlier
replacing Saturday morning with earlier
replacing went with dashed
replacing went with dashed
replacing shopping center with building
replacing shopping center with building
replacing buzzed with moved
replacing buzzed with moved
The change that would make the language in the sentence more precise is to replace "buzzed" with "moved".
To make the language in the sentence more precise, you could consider replacing "Saturday morning" with a more specific time reference. For example, you could replace it with "8:00 am" or "9:00 am" to provide a clearer picture of when the activity was taking place.
So, the correct choice would be:
replacing Saturday morning with a more specific time reference (e.g., 8:00 am, 9:00 am, etc.)