Select the sentences that contain extra words and could be written more concisely.%0D%0ASelect 4. %0D%0AResponses%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AA%09I would like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called "The Beat Goes On".I would like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called "The Beat Goes On" .%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AB%09Over the weekend, my football team won our scrimmage, which improved our overall record to 8-1.Over the weekend, my football team won our scrimmage, which improved our overall record to 8-1.%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AC%09The old rusty lawnmower was covered with dirt, and many of the parts were rusty.The old rusty lawnmower was covered with dirt, and many of the parts were rusty.%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AD%09I sent an email, and the email said that I had not received your product yet.I sent an email, and the email said that I had not received your product yet.%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AE%09Of all the living creatures, whales are the largest animals on earth.Of all the living creatures, whales are the largest animals on earth.%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AF%09Life jackets are essential when swimming in the ocean.Life jackets are essential when swimming in the ocean.%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AG%09My mother is a packrat, keeps everything, and throws nothing away.
A%09I would like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called "The Beat Goes On".I would like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called "The Beat Goes On" .
D%09I sent an email, and the email said that I had not received your product yet.I sent an email, and the email said that I had not received your product yet.
G%09My mother is a packrat, keeps everything, and throws nothing away.
The sentences that contain extra words and could be written more concisely are:
A. I would like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called "The Beat Goes On". (redundant use of "that is called")
D. I sent an email, and the email said that I had not received your product yet. (repetitive use of "email")
The sentences that contain extra words and could be written more concisely are:
A) I would like to begin my performance by singing a song that is called "The Beat Goes On".
- It can be written more concisely as: "I would like to begin my performance by singing a song called 'The Beat Goes On'."
D) I sent an email, and the email said that I had not received your product yet.
- It can be written more concisely as: "I sent an email stating that I had not received your product yet."
G) My mother is a packrat, keeps everything, and throws nothing away.
- It can be written more concisely as: "My mother is a packrat who keeps everything and throws nothing away."