Restate your main idea.

Main idea: after reviewing the research, I think this organization should adopt the new policy because the benefit outweighs the risk

The research I have examined has led me to believe that the new policy should be adopted by this organization due to the substantial benefits it offers in comparison to the associated risks.

Acknowledge and thank your supervisor Ms. Lauren Douglas

I would like to express my sincere gratitude to my supervisor, Ms. Lauren Douglas, for her guidance and support throughout the process of reviewing the research. Her valuable insights and feedback have greatly contributed to shaping my opinion on the matter. Thank you, Ms. Douglas, for your mentorship and encouragement.

Can it be sumarized

I am grateful for the guidance and support of my supervisor, Ms. Lauren Douglas, during the review of the research. Her valuable insights and feedback have greatly influenced my opinion on the matter. Thank you, Ms. Douglas, for your mentorship and encouragement.

Make it a closing statement to a pitch email

In conclusion, based on my thorough examination of the research, I am confident in recommending that our organization adopts the new policy. The benefits it offers clearly outweigh the associated risks. I would like to extend my gratitude to my supervisor, Ms. Lauren Douglas, for her unwavering support and insightful guidance throughout this process. Your mentorship has been invaluable. Thank you for considering my recommendation.