the old mans fingers were trembeling most terribley as they

fumbled with the rapper. "we don't have a hope, really" he
whispered, giggling a bit


8 errors

- 3x spelling

- 5x punctuation and grammar

The old man's fingers were trembling most terribly as they

fumbled with the wrapper. "We don't have a hope, really," he
whispered, giggling a bit.

8 errors corrected:

- 2x spelling (trembeling -> trembling, rapper -> wrapper)
- 6x punctuation and grammar (1. "we don't have a hope, really" -> "We don't have a hope, really." 2. "giggling a bit" -> "giggling a bit.")

please re write it correctly

The old man's fingers were trembling most terribly as he fumbled with the wrapper. "We don't have a hope, really," he whispered, giggling a bit.

The old man's fingers were trembling most terribly as they fumbled with the wrapper. "We don't have a hope, really," he whispered, giggling a bit.

8 errors:
- 3 spelling errors
- 5 punctuation and grammar errors