Responses

A Dumbledore, Albus. Teaching Wizardry. Hogsmeade: Magic Wand 2017.
Dumbledore, Albus. Teaching Wizardry. Hogsmeade: Magic Wand 2017.

B Flit, Scott. “Charms.” The Daily News 30 June 2015: 10. Web. 18 May 2014.Flit, Scott. “Charms.” The Daily News 30 June 2015: 10. Web. 18 May 2014.

C “The Magic of Pumpkin Pie.” Witch Weekly 20 Nov. 2018: 34-35. Print.“The Magic of Pumpkin Pie.” Witch Weekly 20 Nov. 2018: 34-35. Print.

D McGonagal, Minerva. Magic Muffins. Dia Alley, UK: Random, 2016. Print.McGonagal, Minerva. Magic Muffins . Dia Alley, UK: Random, 2016. Print.
Question 2

Which revision corrects the error in formatting identified in the question above?
Responses

A McGonagal, Minerva Magic Muffins. Dia Alley, UK: Random, 2016. Print.McGonagal, Minerva Magic Muffins . Dia Alley, UK: Random, 2016. Print.

B Flit, Scott. “Charms.” The Daily News 30 June 2015: 10. Web. 18, May 2014Flit, Scott. “Charms.” The Daily News 30 June 2015: 10. Web. 18, May 2014

C Flit, Scott. “Charms.” The Daily News 30 June, 2015: 10. Web. 18 May 2014.Flit, Scott. “Charms.” The Daily News 30 June, 2015: 10. Web. 18 May 2014.

D “The Magic of Pumpkin Pie.” Witch Weekly 20 November 2018: 34-35. Print.“The Magic of Pumpkin Pie.” Witch Weekly 20 November 2018: 34-35. Print.

E Dumbledore, Albus. Teaching Wizardry. Hogsmeade: Magic Wand 2017.

Dumbledore, Albus. Teaching Wizardry. Hogsmeade: Magic Wand, 2017.

why

The correct format for citing a book in MLA style is to separate the publication year with a comma from the publisher name. So, in the given response option, a comma is placed after the publisher name "Magic Wand" to separate it from the publication year "2017".

The correct revision that corrects the error in formatting identified in the question is:

E Dumbledore, Albus. Teaching Wizardry. Hogsmeade: Magic Wand 2017.