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The mist rolled through the trees in the small woods of the woodcutter. Regen was busy chopping log after log, his long black hair flying lightly in the wind. As he carefully stripped the bark with his dark brown eyes, he examined each log before throwing it into a pile. He wiped the sweat off his brow with his long, brown leather sleeves and sat down to rest, thinking to himself. "Poor Nubluta," he thought. "I hope she isn't mad at me for chopping down her beautiful trees."
Suddenly, he heard a noise in the woods and stood up to investigate. A man stumbled out of the trees, muttering angrily. The man had long golden hair down to his shoulders and large blue eyes. He walked slowly with his white hand on his face, which was smeared with blood. His dark brown clothes were also stained with blood. He walked forward, muttering angrily. "Ugly Nubluta, how she grows fatter by the minute. Fatter than all the beasts who eat skulls," he muttered.
The woodcutter looked at the man, and the man looked at him. "What do you want?" asked Regen as he put his axe down. "Revenge on Nubluta," said the man, clenching his fists in anger. "I'll kill her."
"You cannot," said Regen, "but why do you want revenge? What has she done?"
"She made me lose my companions; now I cannot find them. She will pay," said Ronever.
"Forget about it. I will get you a bandage," said Regen. "Then you can find your group."
"Do you not know who I am?" cried Ronever. "I am Ronever, the greatest thief in Aerd's history. Well, maybe not the greatest, but a great thief. Hunaruan, the lord of Lafniap, is hunting after me and my gang. How dare you?"
Then suddenly Ronever threw his dagger at Regen, who stumbled over a rock as the knife sunk into his arm. Ronever ran into the woods laughing. Regen slowly rose up and began walking to his small hut, blood dripping from his arm. He grasped the handle of the small brown wooden door as Ronever came from behind laughing. Regen suddenly turned around and saw Ronever holding a large rock above his head. Regen pulled the dagger out of his arm and began to lean against the door with the dagger in his hand. Ronever screamed as he jumped upon Regen and swiftly bashed his head. Regen fell to the ground as blood streamed from his head.
"Take my pain," said Ronever smiling.
Then he picked his knife up off the ground, looked at Regen's still body, and smiled. "That's one bum down," he thought. "Now, I'll find my gang."
Regen ran up onto the woodcutter's stump and looked down into the prairie below. He smiled at the sight of it and sighed. "When we take this kingdom for ourselves, I'll come here every month with whoever else wants to come," he thought as he looked over the prairie below. "Comea" he corrected himself.
Then he looked along the small creek and saw his friends in the distance. Danbar and Rabnad, the twins, could be seen running back and forth frantically searching for him with their dark green eyes and long black hair that flew lightly in the wind. A little way from them could be seen Zabrag and Garbaz, the other twins that looked just like Danbar and Rabnad. They all wore rich silk robes that matched their hair.
Ronever laughed as he began to run down the hill into the prairie. "They look like kings running around the creek with their robes flying behind them," he thought as he ran down laughing. He ran down to the foot of the hill and began to run along the creek. He was smiling and laughing as he began splashing the water.
"Over here!" he cried. "Over here!" He began to wave his arms back and forth. Danbar looked up, smiling, and began to run towards him.
"There you are," he said. "We must've searched everywhere for you."
"Scum!" he cried as he punched Ronever flat on the face. Ronever looked at Danbar with a look of surprise on his face.
"What was that for?" he asked as he got up and took a step away from Danbar.
"You have made us search this whole prairie because of your stupidity," replied Danbar.
"What?" cried Ronever. "I've done nothing wrong. It was that woodcutter, but I stole something from him. It was my first theft, and this is how you treat me?"
"Well, what was his name?" asked Danbar. "And what did you steal?"
"Oh, well, his name was, uh, Nubluta," lied Ronever. "Some witch. I want revenge on him. He gave me this wound," Ronever pointed to his wound, "and I stole some meat from him. He had a whole barrel of it behind his house. I couldn't take the barrel, but I got a few bags of it." Ronever stopped and pulled out two bags from his backpack. "Here," he said. "Taste it."
Danbar took a piece of the "meat" out of the bag then threw it to the ground. "You fool!" he cried. "You think I eat bark? You are the dumbest thief in the history of Aerd. Bark, huh?"
"I'm sorry," said Ronever. "I thought it was meat."
"It's okay," said Danbar. "Maybe next time, taste it before getting it. If you can't tell meat from bark, come. The others are waiting."
Danbar turned and led the way up the creek and into a small pile of shrub Ronever saw that they had made a hut-like shrub pile in the corner sat Rabnad Zabrag and Garbaz. They looked exhausted they looked up at Ronever a look of anger on their faces.
"What is it now" asked Zabrag "wine that is blood or maybe chicken that is a rock"
"Well at least we could drink the blood" said Ronever " did we"
"No" Danbar "who would drink blood now Ronever you are going to speed back up to that Woodcutter's house and find some real food not bark and rocks"
"But he's a witch" said Ronever "he'll kill me"
"Men aren't witches" said Garbaz with a look of anger on his face he arose and clenched his fists "now go get us food"
Ronever turned away and began to run up towards the Woodcutter's house. He looked up at the hill ahead he could see the Woodcutter's stump he smiled as he reached the foot of the hill. He sighed and began to climb to the top of the hill as he neared the top he began to fancy what might happen.
"Maybe he's up there with his axe waiting for me to come so he can whack my head off or maybe he's waiting by the door so he can stone me" he shivered at the very thought of it.
The mist drifted through the trees in the small forest where the woodcutter worked. Regen was busy chopping logs, his long black hair blowing lightly in the wind. As he stripped the bark with his dark brown eyes focused, he examined each log before tossing it into a pile. Wiping the sweat off his brow with his long, brown-leather sleeves, he sat down to rest and started thinking about Nubluta. "I hope she isn't angry with me for cutting down her trees," he thought.
Suddenly, a man stumbled out of the woods, muttering angrily. The man had long golden hair down to his shoulders and large blue eyes. His face was smeared with blood, and his clothes were stained with the same. Regen watched as the man walked forward, muttering. "Ugly Nubluta, how she grows fatter by the minute. Fatter than all the beasts who eat skulls," he muttered.
Regen looked at the man and asked, "What do you want?". The man replied, "Revenge on Nubluta. I'll kill her."
Regen tried to reason with him, "You cannot. But why do you want revenge? What has she done?"
"She made me lose my companions. Now I cannot find them. She will pay," said the man named Ronever.
Regen offered to help and said, "Forget about it. I will get you a bandage. Then you can find your group."
Ronever, outraged, said, "Do you not know who I am? I am Ronever, the greatest thief in Aerd's history. Well, maybe not the greatest, but a great thief. Hunaruan, the lord of Lafniap, is hunting after me and my gang. How dare you?"
Without warning, Ronever threw his dagger at Regen, hitting him in the arm. Regen stumbled over a rock, and Ronever took the opportunity to attack him. Regen fell to the ground, and Ronever picked up his knife and left.
Later, Regen's friends searched for him, and Ronever lied to them, saying that he had stolen meat from a witch named Nubluta. He gave them bark instead of meat, and they sent Ronever back to find real food.
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The mist drifted through the trees in the small forest where the woodcutter worked. Regen was busy chopping logs, his long black hair blowing lightly in the wind. As he stripped the bark with his dark brown eyes focused, he examined each log before tossing it into a pile. Wiping the sweat off his brow with his long, brown-leather sleeves, he sat down to rest and started thinking about Nubluta. "I hope she isn't angry with me for cutting down her trees," he thought.
Suddenly, a man stumbled out of the woods, muttering angrily. The man had long golden hair down to his shoulders and large blue eyes. His face was smeared with blood, and his clothes were stained with the same. Regen watched as the man walked forward, muttering. "Ugly Nubluta, how she grows fatter by the minute. Fatter than all the beasts who eat skulls," he muttered.
Regen looked at the man and asked, "What do you want?". The man replied, "Revenge on Nubluta. I'll kill her."
Regen tried to reason with him, "You cannot. But why do you want revenge? What has she done?"
"She made me lose my companions. Now I cannot find them. She will pay," said the man named Ronever.
Regen offered to help and said, "Forget about it. I will get you a bandage. Then you can find your group."
Ronever, outraged, said, "Do you not know who I am? I am Ronever, the greatest thief in Aerd's history. Well, maybe not the greatest, but a great thief. Hunaruan, the lord of Lafniap, is hunting after me and my gang. How dare you?"
Without warning, Ronever threw his dagger at Regen, hitting him in the arm. Regen stumbled over a rock, and Ronever took the opportunity to attack him. Regen fell to the ground, and Ronever picked up his knife and left.
Later, Regen's friends searched for him, and Ronever lied to them, saying that he had stolen meat from a witch named Nubluta. He gave them bark instead of meat, and they sent Ronever back to find real food.
Ronever ran up to the woodcutter's house, but he was afraid that the witch, Nubluta, would kill him. He climbed up the hill to the woodcutter's stump and looked down at the prairie below. He smiled as he looked over the prairie and thought, "When we take this kingdom for ourselves, I'll come here every month with whoever wants to come," but then he corrected himself, "Comea."
He looked along the small creek and saw his friends in the distance. Danbar and Rabnad, the twins, with their dark green eyes and long black hair, were running back and forth frantically searching for him. A little way from them could be seen Zabrag and Garbaz, the other twins that looked just like Danbar and Rabnad. They all wore rich silk robes that matched their hair.
Ronever laughed as he began to run down the hill into the prairie. "They look like kings running around the creek with their robes flying behind them," he thought as he ran down laughing. He ran down to the foot of the hill and began to run along the creek. He was smiling and laughing as he began splashing the water. "Over here!" he cried. "Over here!" He began to wave his arms back and forth. Danbar looked up, smiling, and began to run towards him.
"There you are," he said. "We must've searched everywhere for you."
"Scum!" he cried as he punched Ronever flat on the face. Ronever looked at Danbar with surprise on his face.
"What was that for?" he asked as he got up and took a step away from Danbar.
"You have made us search this whole prairie because of your stupidity," replied Danbar.
"What?" cried Ronever. "I've done nothing wrong. It was that woodcutter, but I stole something from him. It was my first theft, and this is how you treat me?"
"Well, what was his name?" asked Danbar. "And what did you steal?"
"Oh, well, his name was, uh, Nubluta," lied Ronever. "Some witch. I want revenge on him. He gave me this wound," Ronever pointed to his wound, "and I stole some meat from him. He had a whole barrel of it behind his house. I couldn't take the barrel, but I got a few bags of it." Ronever stopped and pulled out two bags from his backpack. "Here," he said. "Taste it."
Danbar took a piece of the "meat" out of the bag, then threw it to the ground. "You fool!" he cried. "You think I eat bark? You are the dumbest thief in the history of Aerd. Bark, huh?"
"I'm sorry," said Ronever. "I thought it was meat."
"It's okay," said Danbar. "Maybe next time, taste it before getting it. If you can't tell meat from bark, come. The others are waiting."
Danbar turned and led the way up the creek and into a small pile of shrubs. Ronever saw that they had made a hut-like shrub pile in the corner where Rabnad, Zabrag, and Garbaz were sitting, looking exhausted. They looked up at Ronever with a look of anger on their faces.
"What is it now?" asked Zabrag. "Wine that is blood, or maybe chicken that is a rock?"
"Well, at least we could drink the blood," said Ronever. "Did we?"
"No," replied Danbar. "Who would drink blood? Now, Ronever, you are going to sprint back up to that Woodcutter's house and find us some actual food, not bark and rocks."
"But he's a witch," said Ronever. "He'll kill me."
"Men aren't witches," said Garbaz with a look of anger on his face as he arose and clenched his fists. "Now, go get us food."
Ronever turned away and began to run up towards the Woodcutter's house. He looked up at the hill ahead and could see the Woodcutter's stump. He smiled as he reached the foot of the hill, then sighed and began to climb to the top of the hill. As he neared the top, he started to fancy what might happen.
"Maybe he's up there with his axe waiting for me to come so he can whack my head off, or maybe he's waiting by the door so he can stone me," he shivered at the very thought of it.
There are several errors in the given text that need to be fixed. Here are the corrections:
1. In the sentence "Poor Nubluta," he thought, "I hope she isn't mad at me for chopping down her beautiful trees," the pronoun "she" is incorrectly used. It should be replaced with "he" since Nubluta is referred to as a woodcutter.
Corrected sentence: "Poor Nubluta," he thought, "I hope he isn't mad at me for chopping down his beautiful trees."
2. In the sentence "He walked forward, muttering angrily. 'Ugly Nubluta, how she grows fatter by the minute,'" the pronoun "she" is again incorrectly used. It should be replaced with "he" since Nubluta is referred to as a woodcutter.
Corrected sentence: He walked forward, muttering angrily. "Ugly Nubluta, how he grows fatter by the minute."
3. In the dialogue between Ronever and Regen, there is a lack of quotation marks to indicate the spoken words. Quotation marks should be added to make the dialogue clearer.
Corrected dialogue: "You cannot," said Regen, "but why do you want revenge? What has she done?"
"She made me lose my companions; now I cannot find them. She will pay," said Ronever.
4. In the sentence "Ronever screamed as he jumped upon Regen and swiftly bashed his head," the word "bashed" should be replaced with "bashed in" to indicate that Ronever struck Regen's head forcefully.
Corrected sentence: Ronever screamed as he jumped upon Regen and swiftly bashed in his head.
5. In the sentence "Regen pulled the dagger out of his arm and began to lean against the door with the dagger in his hand," the word "dagger" is repeated unnecessarily. It should be removed to avoid redundancy.
Corrected sentence: Regen pulled the dagger out of his arm and began to lean against the door with it in his hand.
6. In the sentence "Regen slowly rose up and began walking to his small hut, blood dripping from his arm," the word "rose" should be replaced with "got up" for clarity and to avoid repetition of the word "rose" used earlier in the sentence.
Corrected sentence: Regen slowly got up and began walking to his small hut, blood dripping from his arm.
These are the main errors that needed to be fixed in the given text.