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It was 1509, the day she met Elijah. His brother was compelling townees to be on the lookout for their Father. And Elijah was exploring the large town when he bumped into a pale Blonde woman with reddish cheeks. He was starstruck by her beauty. "Oh my! I'm so pardon me should've been looking where I was going I-I am so sorry." said the trembling girl Blonde. He just looked at her favoring her soft but sharp voice she looked at his face to see if he would yell at her. It was common for men to get angry fast. He chuckled a little bit " It's okay, miss..." "Alice," said the Young woman. "Right, Miss Alice" He smiled at her making her blush. Alice was one catch-feeling most men's tiniest things would make her fall for them even more. " I'll see you around... oh, I didn't quite get your name." after a pause, "Elijah," he said. " Goodbye, Elijah." she started to walk away but Elijah had other plans. " Are you married?" he asked curiously " I'm not married. " she answered as she blushed. "in that case, I would like to invite you to my family's ball, it is at 10 pm sharp." she blushed harder and said, " If I'm free I will come." They smiled at each other and parted ways.
When Alice arrived at the ball, Elijah noticed her when she walked in. He goes up to her and kisses her on the hand. " Welcome, Alice." " Well, thank you for having me." said the Blonde. Before another word was spoken a Tall, Handsome man walks into the ballroom everybody focuses on him even Alice. Elijah let out a low and small sigh. The man walked up to Elijah " This is my brother Niklaus." she smiled and Blushed as he kissed her hand, but the moment was, cut short as someone across the room made a hand gesture for Klaus to come over to where they were as if they had something to tell Klaus urgently. " Excuse me," Klaus said as he walked past them both. She looked back as he walked away. Elijah felt out of place and second best to Klaus after witnessing this. Alice noticed his facial expression and felt wrong. "Your brother seems nice," said Alice hoping to change the vibe. " Yes, he's always had his ways with the ladies," said Elijah putting on a fake smile. "You're nice too," said Alice as she smiled at him he smiled back and said, "There is more here I would like to show you if you like to come me upstairs." She followed him upstairs to his and his family's house.
After giving her what felt like a house tour, they stop by Elijah's bedroom " This my room." Alice and Elijah step into the room, where Alice sees an Amazing view through the window in the room. "Wow, what a nice view!" she says as she starts smiling. He smiles back at her and looks at each other for a while until she expresses. "You know you are the nicest I've ever met, there's is something different about you... like your mysterious." "I could say the same about you when I first saw you." They both look at each other and step closer, Elijah touches a strand of her Blond, curly hair, and they look at each other for a minute they both come closer enough to lock lips and share a long fiery kiss. Elijah wraps his hands around her hips, pulling apart slowly with his hands still around her hips. They look at each other then they kiss again. Out of nowhere, they hear a loud bang! Elijah removes his arms around her waist another smash, which makes the whole house shake they started to hear screaming. Alice was about to go up the window to see what was, going on before she could get close, a wooden chair comes flying towards the window making it break the waves of glass started bolting a peace hits Alice on her rosy cheek cutting it, a much bigger shard hits her stomach.
It was the year of 1509, on a day that would be forever etched in her memory - the day Alice met Elijah. His brother was fervently enlisting help from the town's residents to search for their missing father. As for Elijah, he was meandering about the bustling town, teeming with life, when he unwittingly collided with a demure blonde lady. Her cheeks were reddened with embarrassment, and her fair skin seemed to glow in contrast. The sight of her exceptional beauty left Elijah absolutely captivated.
"Oh my! I'm so... pardon me, I should've been looking where I was going. I-I am so sorry," stammered the flustered blonde girl. Her voice was delicate yet strong, a harmonious mix of grace and power that Elijah appreciated. Anticipating harsh words, she hesitantly glanced at his face, for it was common in those times for men to become angry quite easily.
To her surprise, Elijah merely chuckled, his laughter genuine and without malice. "It's okay, miss..."
"Alice," she introduced herself, her eyes glistening with relief.
"Right, Miss Alice," Elijah replied, smiling warmly at her, which caused an involuntary eruption of pink on her cheeks. Alice was prone to catching feelings, even the tiniest of gestures from men she admired would make her fall for them even more.
"I'll see you around... oh, I didn't quite catch your name," Alice coyly remarked.
After a brief moment, Elijah responded, "Elijah."
"Goodbye, Elijah," Alice bid him farewell, as she began to depart. But Elijah was not ready to let her go just yet.
"Are you married?" he asked, his voice thick with curiosity.
Blushing furiously, Alice replied, "I'm not married."
"In that case, I would like to invite you to my family's ball. It's this evening, at 10 pm sharp."
Alice's face grew even redder, and she managed to say, "If I'm free, I will come." They exchanged knowing smiles before they finally went their separate ways.
Once Alice appeared in the grand entrance of the ballroom, her ethereal beauty quickly caught the attention of Elijah. He approached her with confidence, took her hand in his, and gently placed a kiss on her delicate fingers. "Welcome, Alice."
"Well, thank you for having me," she replied, her blonde hair cascading around her shoulders like a golden waterfall.
Before they could continue their conversation, a tall, handsome man strode into the ballroom with an air of authority, capturing the attention of everyone present. Even Alice couldn't help but be captivated by this imposing figure. Elijah, on the other hand, let out a low, barely audible sigh, feeling the sting of being overshadowed.
As the man sauntered over to them, Elijah introduced him with a forced smile, "This is my brother, Niklaus."
Alice blushed yet again as Niklaus took her hand and kissed it with undeniable charm. However, their moment together was fleeting, as an urgent gesture from someone across the room beckoned Niklaus away.
"Excuse me," he said, his voice deep and commanding, before disappearing into the throngs of people.
Alice couldn't help but follow him with her gaze as he departed, leaving Elijah feeling both forsaken and second-best to his popular brother. Sensing the rising tension, Alice quickly tried to alter the atmosphere.
"Your brother seems nice," she said, hoping to put Elijah at ease.
"Yes, he's always had his way with ladies," Elijah admitted, his smile still rather forced.
"You're nice too," Alice added, now genuinely smiling at him. He returned her smile and inclined his head, inviting her, "There is more I'd like to show you if you'd care to accompany me upstairs."
With curiosity piqued, Alice followed Elijah as they ascended the grand staircase, leading to the bedrooms of the majestic family mansion.
Once upstairs, Elijah guided Alice to his personal chamber, the door creaking open to reveal an opulent bedroom. "This is my room," he said, gesturing for her to enter.
As Alice set foot inside, her eyes instantly gravitated towards an enormous window, framing an exquisite view of the moonlit grounds below. "Wow, what an amazing view!" She exclaimed, her eyes sparkling with admiration.
At this, Elijah couldn't help but smile again, his mood lightening considerably. They stood there, gazing deeply into each other's eyes, a sense of unspoken connection between them.
"You're one of the nicest people I've ever met, Elijah. There's something... different about you, like you're mysterious," she confessed.
"I could say the same about you, Alice. From the moment I saw you, I knew you were different too."
As the shared understanding settled between them, Elijah moved a strand of her curly blonde hair with the lightest touch. Then, unable to resist the magnetism any longer, they drifted closer until their lips locked in a passionate, fiery kiss. His hands found her hips, pulling her even closer as the world around them seemed to fade away.
Their intimate moment was violently interrupted as an ear-shattering crash reverberated throughout the house, quickly followed by another. The entire mansion shook, and the sounds of panicked screams filled the air. Alarmed, Alice rushed to the now-damaged window, only to be met with a wooden chair hurtling through the glass.
As shards erupted and flew through the room like deadly glitter, a piece struck Alice on her rosy cheek, causing a crimson line to emerge. Another, much larger shard found its way to her abdomen, piercing her with an agonizing force.