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Prompt:
Your city is considering whether to implement a ban on all single-use plastic bags. Write a letter to your city newspaper that fairly presents both sides of the policy so that citizens are better informed and can decide whether to support the policy.
Response:
The city should implement a plastic bag ban because it would deter people from thoughtlessly using disposable bags that are harmful to the environment. Every year hundreds of millions of bags end up in the Atlantic Ocean, causing harm to countless marine species. The problem is, many plastic bags contain lead, which is toxic to animal life. A common argument against the banning of plastic bags is that they are easy to recycle, and therefore not harmful to the environment, but come on, are people actually recycling them? Not really. There's a study that said only about 12 percent of them were recycled. The rest are being tossed out, which is no good for the oceans.
To the Editor:
The debate over whether to implement a ban on all single-use plastic bags in our city has certainly become a pressing issue in our community. As responsible citizens, it is crucial that we consider both the advantages and disadvantages of the policy in order to make an informed decision on whether to support it.
On one hand, proponents of the ban argue that eliminating single-use plastic bags can significantly reduce waste and protect our environment. They cite the detrimental effects plastic bags have on marine life and straining of our landfills. Furthermore, since these bags often contain toxic substances, like lead, they can also pose harm to the health of our wildlife.
On the contrary, opponents of the policy assert that there are alternative solutions to mitigating the environmental impact of plastic bags. They point out that single-use plastic bags are recyclable and can be repurposed for other uses, reducing the need for additional resources. However, it is essential to acknowledge that a study showed only 12 percent of these bags are being recycled.
It is important for us, as a community, to weigh the pros and cons of a plastic bag ban carefully. By considering both the environmental benefits and the potential challenges of implementing such a policy, we can engage in a constructive dialogue and make an informed decision about whether to support the ban.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]