I don’t think that missing out on the good is worth getting rid of the bad. If I had the choice I would much rather continue living in this world than live in Jonas’s world. A much better alternative would be to work to get rid of the bad things and keep the good. I believe that this world is much better than Jonas’s world because while this world has the capacity to be terrible it also has the capacity to be amazing, something that Jonas’s world cannot have. A world without love, joy, or the ability to even care about other people is much worse than anything else.

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I would much rather stay in this world than live in Jonas's world, as this world has the potential to be both good and bad, whereas Jonas's world cannot have love, joy, or the capacity to care for others. Instead of getting rid of the bad, I think it would be better to work to keep the good and get rid of the bad.