This is what i wrote for last question on the language arts quiz and i want to make sure the claim is valid:
Example: This art kit i bought is the worst! The paint brushes seem to have been dyed and whenever i use them, it leaves a black liquid causing the paint to turn a darker shade! And when i use the water colors, After drying, It makes the paper wrinkle and have a brittle feel to it.
I feel like it should be a different claim and/or maybe it should have more added to the claim.Can someone tell what mistakes i made in this claim?