Hi friends, I would love you can help me with my homework and to tell me if there are mistakes. Thanks
Dear Mark,
I hope you are well. Thanks for your last email. It sounds as if you have a great time with your parents. I'm writing to tell you about my new apartment in Trujillo and how I’m settling in my new life.
As you know I have moved six months ago. Living in a different place, it has been stressful for me. Everything is new and my neighbors are not friendly. I suppose it’s because they have a lot of children running around their apartment. Last week I came across some toys in the laundry room.
Personally, I think Trujillo is a nice place and there are a lot of places where you can go walking. My apartment is located close to the river bank, so every day I can enjoy the stunning sunset. The food in Trujillo is truly diverse but the most popular and affordable is Shambar.
By the way, I would love to visit you in summer and look after the puppies while you are in the field.
Well that’s all for now and I can’t wait to see you in summer,
Bye for now
Liz
In the 1st sentence in the 2nd paragraph, remove the word “have” since the verb needs to be simple past.
In the 1st sentence in the 3rd paragraph, replace “you” with “I” since the second-person pronoun is out of place.
You might also explain what Shambar is!