I just need one more proofread.. My question is when two people have the same last name, how would you attribute them.. IE Tom and John Hoyer.. and if you see any other mistakes feel free to address by any means..

Hoyer died on at the Warner Barry Pavilion, a long-term care facility. He never recovered from the stroke he suffered just once week before winning the Democratic primary on March 21, 2006. He never made another public appearance. After he retired, Democratic Party leaders eventually picked his son, Tom Hoyer, to replace him on the ballot.

“He dedicated his life to his family and gave generously of himself as an elected official,” said Tom, Hoyer’s son and elected successor. “His love for this county knew no bounds, and he will be deeply missed.”

Please proofread your first two sentences.

Omit: eventually

Your attributions of father and son are fine.

Thank you Ms. Sue for all your help.. silly mistakes.. hehe

You're welcome, Blaze. :-)

To attribute two people with the same last name, you can use their first names or their full names for clarity. In the example you provided, you have mentioned Tom Hoyer and John Hoyer. However, you have not provided any context or content where it requires specific attribution. If you are referring to them in separate sentences or paragraphs, you can simply use their first names or full names for clarity. Here is an example using their full names:

Hoyer died at the Warner Barry Pavilion, a long-term care facility. John Hoyer never recovered from the stroke he suffered just one week before winning the Democratic primary on March 21, 2006. He never made another public appearance. After he retired, Democratic Party leaders eventually picked Tom Hoyer, his son, to replace him on the ballot.

If you have any specific sentences or content that you believe might need clarification, please provide that information, and I will be happy to help you further. Regarding mistakes, I see a few suggestions for improvement:

1. Change "just once week" to "just one week".
2. In the second paragraph, change "Democratic Party" to "the Democratic Party".
3. Consider adding a comma after "deeply missed" to signify the end of the quotation.

I hope this helps! Let me know if there's anything else I can assist you with.