Hi, I need help with a paper I wrote on an analysis of an advertisement. This is the ad i analysed facebook.cm/video/video.php?v=176110229125188
Could someone please tell me the Ethos and Pathos for this ad ?
My ethos was - The text embellishes character by aiming at stay home dads, who might be divorced, and/or laid, off, who might portray single parent household. The text also establishes character by throwing a male figure in the kitchen taking the traditional female role by packing lunch for their kid. (Professor comments - can you add more details to support your point.)
Pathos - This document evokes emotion to both parents and their children. This is an effective piece in terms of making a desirable product for the child and creating the situation of many modern families in which dads are doing more. (Professor comments - Explain how the details evoke emotions. Show how the emotion is created.) He also said that I could add a lot of details so it be be more than a paragraph. Please can anybody help ? I need at least a paragraph for both Ethos and Pathos. Your help will be appreciated. Thank You so much.
writing english - Ying, Monday, March 18, 2013 at 11:43pm
they would not allow me to post link that's y i shortened the link. Please use facebook(dot)com you don't have to sign in to view the video
writing english - Writeacher, Tuesday, March 19, 2013 at 7:40am
When your prof says to "add more details," he/she is telling you NOT to assume that your reader has seen the video. If I have not seen the video, how in the world would I even know what you are writing about?
writing english - Ying, Tuesday, March 19, 2013 at 1:47pm
Please don't be like that. I have posted the link to the ad. All i asked was for a little help with the assignment which I have completed. So you can at least tell that I have tried.