Posted by fanggirl.rockrchik on Friday, December 21, 2012 at 2:53pm.
You need to focus your thoughts: what about the shooting? Security? Mental Illness treatment? gun control? GI Joe walking the halls?
Without focus, your article will never be sharp.
We will be happy to critique your thoughts, but we are not so keen on having opinion surveys here.
Oky, I understand. Thank you.
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