Homework Help: English 7 - "Dear Reader" Letter Check

Posted by Laruen on Thursday, June 7, 2012 at 10:16pm.

Can you check my letter. It's a project for English. We are making our writing portfolios. I'm almost done I just have to do this.

Dear Reader,
This year I done some great improvement as a writer. I add great vocabulary in my pieces. When I'm reading, it improve my writing. I learn new vocabulary words while I'm reading. I improve a little when editing, but so far it's going good.
My favorite writing piece I done this year is my reflection essay "Vive la difference". This was one of the best pieces I ever wrote. The theme for the reflection this year was "Diversity Means...". The reason why it's my favorite piece is because I worked really hard in this piece. I bring the essay alive & explains how marvelous & a terrific program it is. I also include how we make a difference in our community.
In 8th grade I will continue to improve my editing skills. I'll try not to go off topic when writing (which happens sometimes). I will read more and more in order for me to improve my writing skills.
My 7th grade English teacher, Mrs. Langenmayr is the BEST English teacher!!! She makes learning in this class FUN! Throughout the school year I read some interesting stories and learn some news things in this class. I did very well on the NYS ELA Exam (hoping I got a 4) thanks to Mrs. Langenmayr. I already know I'm going to do well in my English final. I'm looking forward for next year (hoping I'll be place in honors).

Sincerely,
(my name)

English 7 - - Ms. Sue, Thursday, June 7, 2012 at 10:25pm
Did you proofread your first paragraph?

Here are the corrections for it:

This year I made some great improvement as a writer. I added great vocabulary words to my essays. When I'm reading, it improve my writing. << This sentence makes no sense. I learned new vocabulary words while I read. I improve my editing a little. So far it's going well.

The rest is better, but still you can improve it.
English 7 - - Laruen, Thursday, June 7, 2012 at 10:26pm
ok

Thank You! :)
English 7 - - Ms. Sue, Thursday, June 7, 2012 at 10:37pm
You're welcome.

I goofed -- it should be I improved my editing . . .
English 7 - - Laruen, Thursday, June 7, 2012 at 10:43pm
yup because it's past tense, it's something i already did

thanks! ;)
English 7 - - Kaylee, Friday, June 8, 2012 at 7:32pm
I think this is a really good piece of writing.
English 7 - - ts, Sunday, June 24, 2012 at 9:55am
Greetings,

"Healing By Spiritual Doctors" is a book written by T.S which is now available at Apple stores for only $6.99. This book talks about women role throughout the history of creation and the fact that how powerful or known men have tried to buried their influence throughout the history so that their clear voice not be heard.

After 30 years of research in the science of universe,the writer of this book is trying to show the true role of women in the universe and find their roles in healing! In this book you will see how women as Medium, can heal themselves or others by spiritual doctors. This is a gift from god and the pure spirit who are the guidance of our women Medium. This is the book that need to be read by all women so they learn their inner ability and be able to help our society and humanity!
Hope you too hold our hands and be our guidance in this matter.

Sincerely with love,
Taghi Salahshour
English 7 - - ts, Thursday, June 28, 2012 at 7:14am
Greetings,

"Healing By Spiritual Doctors" is a book written by T.S which is now available at Apple stores for only $6.99. This book talks about women role throughout the history of creation and the fact that how powerful or known men have tried to buried their influence throughout the history so that their clear voice not be heard.

After 30 years of research in the science of universe,the writer of this book is trying to show the true role of women in the universe and find their roles in healing! In this book you will see how women as Medium, can heal themselves or others by spiritual doctors. This is a gift from god and the pure spirit who are the guidance of our women Medium. This is the book that need to be read by all women so they learn their inner ability and be able to help our society and humanity!
Hope you too hold our hands and be our guidance in this matter.

Sincerely with love,
Taghi Salahshour

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