posted by Henry2 on .
I urgenlty need you to chekc these sentences. Thank you.
1) As you are a scholar with an in-depth knowledge of Clil within a Comenius project, I would like to have your opinion about the objectives we should include in the project.
2) Could you let us have a look at your school's science project, which has been internationally recognized?
3) By the way, I wonder if your school would be interested in joining our partnership.
If "Clil" is an acronym or initials for something, then put all the letters in caps -- CLIL. You still haven't told me what this stands for!
All else is fine.