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Homework Help: writing sentences and paragraphs

Posted by Shawna on Sunday, January 8, 2012 at 11:19am.

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Anna, I am so happy you’ve moved back to Burlington from Bay view, Ohio! Especially since there are many more job oppurtunities here for you to discover. In fact just yesterday I was talking with my boss at Metropolitan Music Company , Mr. Juzek, and he was speaking of needing an assistant. He desperately needs someone to assist him with the growing demand in orders for violins and supplies within our company. The position requires the ability to process incoming orders, making sure shipments of products and supplies go out in a timely manner and taking care of travel plans for when Mr. Juzek travels to trade shows. He needs someone who is organized, patient and who can keep up with the pace of the incoming orders. As you’ve shown on various occasions at your previous workplace, you have the patience, organization, and ability to always work quick and efficiently and problem solve without hesitation. I sincerely believe this position is perfect for you and I believe you’re just what my boss is looking for in an assistant. I highly recommend you apply for this position as it can open many doors for your future, it can also provide you with stability and a steady pay with benefits, which is something I know you’ve been wanting for a long time. I will make sure to put in a good word to Mr. Juzek for you and hope to see your application in our office very soon.

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