Posted by Ellie on Thursday, November 10, 2011 at 12:38pm.
aussi aider à = delete the "aider" = j'aide aussi à, etc.
I corrected this before. You are using Present tense and I doubt you wish to say "I clean YOUR room?" = ...je nettoie ma chambre = I clean my room
même si je le faire = if I have just done it? = si je viens de le faire
Did you not see my earlier corrections? Here's another one I already did = la salle is feminine so rangée must also be feminine
And I did this one as well (I HATE repeating what I've already done) = tous mes maquillage tous is plural, mes is plural so maquillage must ALSO be plural
impeccable must ALSO be plural because you have a compound subject (already mentioned earlier)
j'ai le désordre compulsif obsessif la haine pagaille. = BOTH désorder and pagaille mean "disorder" and what is hate doing in there? (SAME question earlier)
OKAY. I'm stopping right here. Please make all the corrections on the OTHER post because I see exactly the same thing as the first post.
Sra (aka Mme)
Here's yesterday's:
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1320859641
Sra (aka Mme)
sorry i did not see the one that you have already corrected so i reuploaded it
thank you for correcting it
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