Homework Help: English

Posted by Sara on Sunday, May 2, 2010 at 3:31pm.

Happiness: What is happiness?

This is what a poet says:

Happiness is a butterfly
which when pursues is just beyond
your grasp...
but if you will sit down quietly,
may light upon you.

This is what I say:

Happiness is the crisp autumn breeze
Which when ignored blows harder and harder....
but if you hold your arms out wide may embrace you with love.

What do you say:

May I please know if my poem sounds good, and I'll appreciate it if you could also create one for me to hear and comment. Thank you very much:-)

English - SraJMcGin, Sunday, May 2, 2010 at 6:55pm
Or you could omit "with love."

Sra

Answer this Question

Related Questions

English-Happiness - I'm doing a short poem on Happiness. I'm going to ...
math - my teacher gave us a question that says: compute the correlation ...
college_ethics applied - Match the following definitions of happiness to the ...
psychology and the pursuit of happiness - Write a 700- to 900-word paper ...
Psychology - The authors of your textbook describe the American emphasis on the ...
poetry - what is a good metaphor for what happiness is? i am writing a quality ...
Art and Humanities: Twentieth Century and Beyond - Prepare and conduct ...
English lit - I need to write a explication about this poem, can you help? A ...
English - We usually think volunteer work takes up a lot of time. But just a ...
English - 1. It can give you happiness when you give happiness to others. (What ...

For Further Reading

First Name:
School Subject:
Answer: