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What is a good way to start off my introduction for a biographical sketch?

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    Start the introduction with something that will grab the reader. It could be an unusual or very important fact about that person. For instance, an article I read recently about Michelle Obama began something like this.

    Michelle Obama's great great grandfather lived in a small white cabin as a slave on a plantation.

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    But it has to be in narrative form.
    the biographical sketch has to be about ME.

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    Then pick an especially important or unusual fact about YOU.

    This site may give you some ideas.

    http://essayinfo.com/essays/narrative_essay.php

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    June 14, 1994, the day I was born, changed my mother's life.
    would that be a goood introductionn??

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    start off your introduction with something interesting that no one knows about you.

    for ex. I would start mine off with something like this:

    Hello, my name is Anna, and I love travelling to exotic locations.

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    You could start it that way. But consider highlighting the most exotic location you've seen. Then tie that in with the rest of your essay.

    For instance, I might say --

    The awe-inspiring Egyptian Pyramids brought home to me the greatness of human ingenuity.

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    Here is another example:


    Hello my name is Anna, and the day I was born which was June 14, 1994, changed my mom's life completely. She is lucky to have me as I am lucky to have her. She has given me all the happiness I could have ever asked for.

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    Hello, my name is Anna, and I love travelling to exotic locations, such as Paris, London,etc. I love London because of its awesome boutiques.

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    I like your second one better.

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    the one that is last?

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    This one:

    Hello, my name is Anna, and I love travelling to exotic locations, such as Paris, London,etc.

    Instead of "etc." though, add a third place.

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