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This is about my cousin that is looking for a job and her previous jobs were cashier and sale clerk. I know she is a perfect match for the job that is opening where i work for a boss's assistant and i have to persuade my cousing to apply for the job, although she doesn't think she is capable.
Any luck finding a job yet? Consequently, that's why I'm e-mailing you. I just heard my company; ABC Enterprise is posting a Boss's Assistant position. I beleive you would be a perfect match for the position. By the waay, I know for a fact, that my boss is looking for a person with customer service and a retail background. Your personality is always positive; you know how to respond to customers, a real people person. I know you are a well organize, self-motivated person. You also have a strong sense of responsibility and a desire to get things done properly, along with being a reliable team player. You demonstrated all the above qualificiations last year, when you held the huge benefit for your girlfriend. You put alot of hard work and took on a big responsibility to organize this benefit. This turned out to be a huge success because of you. Honestly my boss could use a person like you. I think this position is a great opportunity for you to use your skills and begin a new career that will benefit you personally and professionally. Call me tonight.
This is much better than your other paragraph. Your content is very good. However, you need to run it through a spell check to correct the typos and misspelled words.
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