Posted by ELINA on Friday, June 12, 2009 at 8:10pm.
please do help me.I worked on this really hard
Having a low income, teaching school, and meeting Henry VIII were not his major accomplishments. What were Erasmus's main achievements? What did he do that made him famous?
Didn't his writings try to convince people to reform the Catholic Church from within?
This article may give you some ideas.
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I got as a humanist and reformer Erasumas harshly disapproved what he thought were the balances of the Roamn Catholic until his death he disagrred to many of the beliefs of church which influenced the reformation movement to Protestant religion. he wrote the praise of fooly and handbook of christian knight.
Please add to it, or take some unimportant things out, rephrases it to make it llok good
please do tell me if this is good or Not
What do you mean by "disapproved of the balances of the Roman Catholic?"
Do you mean Roman Catholic Church?
Do you mean he disagreed WITH many of the beliefs ?
You need some capitalization and correct "Fooly" in the last sentence.
yeah by diasapproved I meant criticized
Please add to it,i need help:-(
What are the "balances?"
I thnk like the rules they had in the church which luther thought weren't fair or right
You're right about the church rules. But balances is the wrong word in this sentence.
then what would be the best word to put in that sentence?
so would i say specific rules
Erasmus was a humanist and a reformer. Erasumas harshly disapproved what he thought were the specific rules of the Roman Catholic Church. Until his death he disagreed to many of the beliefs of the church which influenced the reformation movement to Protestant religion. He wrote the praise of folly and handbook of christian knight.His writings tried to convince people to reform the Catholic Church from within.
Is this good.?
Much better! :-)
It's almost perfect except for capitalizing the names of the books.
Now -- I have a question for you. Is English your first language?
The reason I ask is that you've omitted a couple of articles (the, a, an) -- which is typical of people who do not usually speak English at home.
english is my 2nd language.
Thanks for answering my question. Now I understand you better. I've worked with a young Korean woman for several years and although her spoken and written English are nearly perfect at a college level, she still sometimes misuses the articles.
Keep up the good work, Elina! You are a very conscientious and hard-working girl! :-)
thank u Ms Sue, with your help anything is possible in life :-)
You're welcome, Elina.
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