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In addition, the Nurse uses her power of intimidation to threaten the men of indefinite incarceration.

Does this sentence make sense? I'm saying that the Nurse intimidates men to stay committed in the institution.

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    I would get rid of a couple of words there. I would say, In addition, the Nurse intimidates the men by threatening them with indefinite incarceration.

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