Bizzy

Most popular questions and responses by Bizzy
  1. Profreading

    This is what the paper is about. Choose a recent (within the last 2 years) article written for parents, teachers, or other family members on how to optimize the development of children (any age between conception through adolescence may be used) or written

    asked on April 9, 2008
  2. proofread

    Hi, can someone proofread this for me. I'll appreciate it. Thanks in advance. The practicum site I selected is an elementary school. I will be assisting a first grade teacher during the semester. I will be helping her with her students and with other

    asked on February 3, 2008
  3. English

    Hi, I made the changes suggested on my last post for the first paragraph. I type another paragraph and I would please like it to be proofread as well. Thanks! :) The author of the article defines resilience as the individual’s capacity to minimize or

    asked on April 12, 2008
  4. Proofread.

    Hi, Can someone proofread this for me and let me know if I followed the directions for this assignment. Directions: Detailed information about the agency, an evaluation of the site and comparison of the site with experiences in the practicum setting should

    asked on February 19, 2008
  5. Can you proofread this also, please! Please!

    Having an alcoholic parent was the crisis in our family. My father began drinking when he was young in social gatherings. Once he married my mother he began to drink more often. My father and mother did not have good communication skills during their

    asked on January 14, 2008
  6. Proofread please!

    The United States, incarcerates its citizens at much greater rates than any other nation in the world (Scott, 2008). Incarceration costs in the U.S. have risen to $65 billion a year (Scott, 2008). Many crimes committed by gangs and gang members cause

    asked on April 22, 2008
  7. English

    2) What credibility did you give initially to an article drawn from the W_W_W? What are your thoughts about the practical experience versus scientific information as credible sources of information about children or families (as applied to the article)?

    asked on April 10, 2008
  8. Proofread

    From my experience at the elementary school, I have gained insight about what happens inside a first grade classroom, such as the teacher’s responsibilities, and the high demands of attention students require from their teachers. I also learned how this

    asked on May 6, 2008
  9. Essay

    Hi, I have to write a web article evaluation paper. The professor wants us to pick a casual article that has to do with child development and family studies. Then, he wants us to use scholarly sources to evaluate the article. I don't know what a casual

    asked on April 7, 2008
  10. English composition

    Hi, I have to write a reflection paper for my human development class. I am working with first graders in an elementary school and our professor wants to know this: Choose one thing about your practicum site that you think should be different. This can be

    asked on April 6, 2008
  11. English

    Hi, can someone please proofread and check my grammar. I'll appreciate it. Thanks! 3) what were the main points of the article? Provide concise summary. The author of the article defines resilience as the individual’s capacity to develop resilience in

    asked on April 11, 2008
  12. proofread

    According to CCMS, the small size of this school helps the downtown urban community meet their needs, in particular at-risk students from low-income households because the students are given more individual attention by faculty members. As a small charter

    asked on March 24, 2008
  13. can someone proofread this ASAP! Please!

    In a marriage, I believe that a husband should show emotional concerns to his wife. For instance, husbands should feel free to express the love they have for their wives. In today’s society according to Charles Colson, most men are still uncomfortable

    asked on January 14, 2008
  14. English

    Can I get this proofread please? The hypothesis of this experiment claimed the apterous mutation would be recessive. The results from all eight lab sections supported the hypothesis, but unfortunately the results from lab section seven did not support it.

    asked on April 15, 2008
  15. English

    Hi, can someone proofread this and let me know if there are any grammatical mistake. I'll appreciate it. Thanks. This experiment was preformed to determine if Drosophila fruit flies inherit apterous (ap) or a wild type (+/+) phenotypes. The wild type is

    asked on April 13, 2008
  16. Proofreading

    Our professor provided us a content guide for this particular essay. Pasted below is one of his guidelines. 1. Describe the process you used for finding a web article suitable for this assignment. What advise would you give to a parent on finding an

    asked on April 9, 2008
  17. Proofreading

    Hi, This is my introduction paragraph for an essay I am writing. I am not really confident on my grammar and sentence stucture. I want to make sure the introduction sounds smooth and formal. I would like to have someone's feedback on it. Thanks! The topic

    asked on April 9, 2008
  18. biology

    Hello, I have a question. For one molecule of glucose are there six CO2 molecules released during cellular respiration? I'm looking at the kreb/ citric acid diagram and I'm not sure if it is four or six CO2 molecules being released. I'll appreciate your

    asked on March 6, 2008
  19. English Composition

    Hi, can someone proofread this and let me know what my weaknesses are on my thoughts or sentence structure. Based on the article I read I believe that the bases of wars are a result of people’s lack of understanding, appreciation, and respect for other

    asked on February 3, 2008
  20. Proofreading

    Hi, can someone please proofread this for me? Topic: Explain why dating is not an effective method for screening out future divorces especially those that take place early in marriage Dating is not an effective method for screening out future divorces

    asked on January 17, 2008
  21. Proofread Please!

    From my experience at the elementary school, I have gained insight knowledge of what happens inside a first grade classroom, such as the responsibilities that are involved with being a teacher, and the high demands of attention that is needed from

    asked on May 6, 2008
  22. English

    5) What are your overall conclusion about the article? Also give two original examples of how the information in the article could be applied to real life on to working with children in the home and the second to working with them in community settings

    asked on April 15, 2008
  23. English grammar

    I would recommend parents to use articles that are written by college professors, a doctor in education, or a specialist in child development, since these are more credible articles than articles written by parents or family members.

    asked on April 14, 2008
  24. Proofread

    Can someone proofread this for me please? Thanks. Under the Youth PROMISE Act, communities facing the greatest youth gang and crime challenges will come together to develop a compressive plan for implementing evidence-based prevention and intervention

    asked on March 11, 2008
  25. proofread

    Instructions for this essay assignment (relection paper). For this paper, you should think about what you want to get out of your practicum experience. The 90 hours you spend at this site should be an opportunity not only for you to give something to the

    asked on February 4, 2008
  26. sentence stucture

    Hello, I'm trying to proofread my 8 page paper and I have come up with some uncertainties about some of my sentence structure. These are the some of the sentences I am not sure are correct or perhaps needs improvement. 1)People most often look for social,

    asked on January 19, 2008
  27. English

    Hello, I have to write a an essay that begins with a speech discussing the role of mate selection process in testing the compatibility of potential mates. I don't know if my methaphor is okay? Marriage can be described as the hardest class one will ever

    asked on January 19, 2008
  28. sentence stucture

    I'm reading this sentence in my head because I'm in the library. I can't read it out loud. Does this sound right to you? I'm not sure? According to the theories on mate selection, researchers have developed the idea that most people select their mates

    asked on January 17, 2008
  29. English/Government

    Hi, I am stuck on a assignment for class. I have to write a social policy paper. I have to find a piece of legislation and find out its purpose and other information about it. I also have to include research about this bill. I went to Thomas.loc.gov/ I

    asked on March 8, 2008
  30. Sentence structure

    1)Voltaire presents his ideas of injustice through comedy by exaggerating the aristocrats’ life style. In this sentence do I include an "s" after style? Also, which is correct in this sentence, "life style" or "lifestyle". 2)Voltaire’s representation

    asked on January 21, 2008
  31. Proofreading

    Discuss arguments in favor of and against using this model as a national perspective on preventing divorce.

    asked on January 17, 2008
  32. Composition

    Once the crisis has happened already, the Tertiary Prevention type helps the couple from reoccurring the crisis. Can someone tell me what is wrong with the sentence above. I have a green underline under the word "reoccuring" from microsoft word. I don't

    asked on January 17, 2008
  1. Proofread Please!

    The experience did alter my career goals, but I feel that the experience I gained is still very valuable even though my career goals have changed. What I have learned through this experience can be applied to other aspects of my life. If I become a parent

    posted on May 6, 2008
  2. Proofread Please!

    Through this experience I learned that one of my strengths as a professional is my ability to motivate children to learn or to behave. When a child did not want to finish his or her math class work, I used positive words to get the child to finish his or

    posted on May 6, 2008
  3. Proofread Please!

    I have realized that I get very overwhelmed when I cannot manage teaching a large group of students and that is one of my challenges that I face. I try to address this problem by teaching small groups of children at a time or I divide the students and have

    posted on May 6, 2008
  4. Proofread Please!

    I also learned how some children think positively and others think more negatively. For instance, when I would try to explain a subject to a child who thinks negatively, he or she will tell me that he or she cannot do it. The other children who think

    posted on May 6, 2008
  5. Proofread Please!

    Another goal I set out for this experience was to learn how children think and learn around this age. Also, how they interact with others socially. I learned many ways to motivate children to learn. The teacher uses many rewards like, small toys, stickers,

    posted on May 6, 2008
  6. Proofread Please!

    My goals were to learn more about this career and to discover whether teaching is something I want to pursue in the future. Based on the current budget cuts, teaching does not seem like an appealing job at the moment. I do enjoy spending time with children

    posted on May 6, 2008
  7. Proofread please!

    Thank you for your time. :)

    posted on April 22, 2008
  8. English

    Thank you! =)

    posted on April 15, 2008
  9. English grammar

    Thank you!

    posted on April 14, 2008
  10. English grammar

    According to Garmezy, a researcher of resilient individuals explains resiliency by the presence of “protective factors,” those qualities or situations that help alter or reverse expected negative outcomes.

    posted on April 14, 2008
  11. English

    "in" before fact on the last sentence.

    posted on April 13, 2008
  12. English

    Thank you for your suggestions. They are very helpful! :)

    posted on April 12, 2008
  13. English

    Our professor wants us to summarize a web article that is casual, one that would be read by non-child development people.

    posted on April 12, 2008
  14. English

    W_W_W*e-bility* com/articles/child_resiliance*php *= dot

    posted on April 12, 2008
  15. English

    The author provides many examples that explain the three main resources of resilience. She also mentions how children who are younger will experience the “I HAVE” resource more frequently compared to an older child. As children age, they rely more on

    posted on April 12, 2008
  16. Proofread

    Oops, I didn't put my name on the above post. Sorry about that.

    posted on April 10, 2008
  17. English

    Hi, can I get someone's feedback on my response on the question above. I want to make sure I answered the question fully, correctly, and clearly. Thanks!

    posted on April 10, 2008
  18. Proofreading

    When I initially viewed the article I gave it some credibility since the article contained a description about the author who wrote it. The description includes a picture of the author along with detailed information of the author’s professional history.

    posted on April 10, 2008
  19. Proofreading

    When I initially viewed the article I gave it some credibility since the article contained a description about the author who wrote it. The description includes a picture of the author along with detailed information of the author’s professional history.

    posted on April 10, 2008
  20. Proofreading

    Thanks for your comments. I thought I copied and paste what I had for the two questions above, but the post is blank. I'll post it again. Resilience during childhood is one of the most important qualities a person can have, because it helps with difficult

    posted on April 10, 2008
  21. Profreading

    I'm not sure if I answered his questions for the second part fully and correctly? I'll appreciate your feedback on that as well. Thanks! :)

    posted on April 9, 2008
  22. Profreading

    Resilience during childhood is one of the most important qualities a person can have, because it helps with difficult life experiences, such as lonely times, frustrating times, and unfair times. For this reason it is vital for parents to help build their

    posted on April 9, 2008
  23. Proofreading

    I'm not sure if I answered his questions for the second part fully and correctly? I'll appreciate your feedback on that as well. Thanks! :)

    posted on April 9, 2008
  24. Proofreading

    Resilience during childhood is one of the most important qualities a person can have, because it helps with difficult life experiences, such as lonely times, frustrating times, and unfair times. For this reason it is vital for parents to help build their

    posted on April 9, 2008
  25. Proofreading

    This is what the paper is about. Choose a recent (within the last 2 years) article written for parents, teachers, or other family members on how to optimize the development of children (any age between conception through adolescence may be used) or written

    posted on April 9, 2008
  26. Proofreading

    Thank you for your help!

    posted on April 9, 2008
  27. Proofreading

    oops I caught a spelling mistake. *interested in this topic...

    posted on April 9, 2008
  28. Proofreading

    The ---- stand for the website google

    posted on April 9, 2008
  29. Proofreading

    Resilience during childhood is one of the most important qualities a person can have, because it helps with difficult life experiences, such as lonely times, frustrating times, and unfair times. These reasons make it vital for parents to help build their

    posted on April 9, 2008
  30. proofread

    or should I say this instead of my last sentence above. As a small charter school, CCMS promotes a tight-knit family environment where teachers help bring parents, families, and the community inside the students’ educational circle.

    posted on March 24, 2008
  31. Proofread

    Thank you! Yes, this is the Youth PROMISE Act.

    posted on March 11, 2008
  32. Proofread.

    okay thank you. I have to go to class right now. I'm late. I will fix the rest of the paragraphs with your suggestions later. Thank you so much!! =)

    posted on February 19, 2008
  33. Proofread.

    It doesn't allow me to paste my example. I don't know why?

    posted on February 19, 2008
  34. Proofread.

    Is it where I typed teacher has a group?

    posted on February 19, 2008
  35. Proofread.

    The children in the class I am working are told what the consequences are for bad behavior. For example, the teacher will give her students warnings and then she’ll eventually give her students red slips which takes away the child’s play time at recess

    posted on February 19, 2008
  36. Proofread.

    The school I am doing my practicum is very different compared to The New City School. It has a large playground and a smaller one for the kindergarten students. The large playground contains a lot of free space for the children to run and play. It also has

    posted on February 19, 2008
  37. Proofread.

    From what I learned from The New City School the school lacks rewards and punishments for the students. The students there are not given any grades, homework assignments, stickers, certificates, stars, and do not have clear consequences for bad behavior.

    posted on February 19, 2008
  38. Proofread.

    During the tour I noticed the area where the children eat contained three types of trash cans, one for cans, paper, and plastic, the other one for food waste, and they also had a regular trash can. The school wants to teach all the students to be

    posted on February 19, 2008
  39. Proofread.

    Based on the tour I was given, I noticed that the students in the primary classrooms did not have any desks. They were sitting on a dirty rug on the floor. The students in grades three to five were sitting on small tables together. The students in grades

    posted on February 19, 2008
  40. Proofread.

    The lectures in the classrooms are bilingual. The teacher will switch languages each day. For instance, each subject will be taught in Spanish one day and English the next day. Gradually the students whose first language is English will learn and

    posted on February 19, 2008
  41. Proofread.

    The classrooms at The New City School are limited to 20 students. There are about 10 teachers in the school. The ratio of children to teachers is 20:1 in grades K-8. The school provides teacher assistants in the elementary classes so that the

    posted on February 19, 2008
  42. Proofread.

    The staff, Board of Directors, and parents have developed a new curriculum and renovated an abandoned building into a school that now holds 190 students from kindergarten to eighth grade. The building was formally a medical clinic in 1948. The three story

    posted on February 19, 2008
  43. Proofread.

    The New City School’s mission is to provide a healthy, thoughtful, and intimate environment to students, emphasizing community building over competition; as well as a high quality, free, and public education alternative to the community. The NCS was

    posted on February 19, 2008
  44. Proofread.

    I am trying to copy and paste it. I tried to past the whole essay, but it wouldn't let me. Then, I tried to paste it by sections, but now it will not allow me to continue pasting it. I'm going to try it again. In response to your question above, can I say

    posted on February 19, 2008
  45. Proofread.

    I'm having trouble posting my essay. I get a message that says Homework Help: Error(s) You are not allowed to post internet addresses. I am not posting internet addresses. I don't know why I am not being allowed to post.

    posted on February 19, 2008
  46. Proofread.

    Their academic program is based on the work of several important learning theories.

    posted on February 19, 2008
  47. Proofread.

    As a small charter school, The Nxx Cxx School promotes an individualized approach to education.

    posted on February 19, 2008
  48. Proofread.

    The school consist of 190 elementary and middle school students. According to NCS, the size of this school helps the urban community meet their needs, in particular students from families whose second language is English and students from low-income

    posted on February 19, 2008
  49. Proofread.

    The Site I visited is The Nxx Cxx School (NCS) located in downtown Long Beach; it is a K-8 public charter school. Their education program emphasizes bilingualism and multiculturalism, creative expression, reasoning, health and community engagement.

    posted on February 19, 2008
  50. proofread

    oh. I didn't get what she meant on that part. I understand now. Thanks.

    posted on February 4, 2008
  51. proofread

    I eliminated a lot of words. I tried, I don't know what to do.

    posted on February 4, 2008
  52. proofread

    Thank you both for your suggestions. I appreciate it. I reposted the essay.

    posted on February 4, 2008
  53. proofread

    I'll would like someone to proofread this for me. Thanks in advance.

    posted on February 4, 2008
  54. proofread

    My first goal is to finish the 90 hours of work by the deadline by ensuring that I get a minimum of 6 hours of work completed for each week during this semester. My second goal is to learn more about this career and to discover whether teaching is

    posted on February 4, 2008
  55. proofread

    In this experience I hope to help assist the teacher and make the children’s learning environment more productive. For instance, I can help the teacher by checking homework and grading tests or checking other student assignments. Also, I can help the

    posted on February 4, 2008
  56. proofread

    I am hoping to gain experience working with children and becoming a good professional. This experience can provide some growth in my working skills, help me work well with others and independently. For instance, I can learn how to adapt to new situations

    posted on February 4, 2008
  57. proofread

    I expect my involvement at this site will assist me by giving me an insider perspective of what it is like to be a first grade teacher and what skills are required for this position. The practicum experience will provide insight of the skills, attitudes,

    posted on February 4, 2008
  58. proofread

    I believe my training in the field of Human Development will be useful in my practicum site because the children there are developing into future adults. The course I took called, Human Development 307I Childhood through Adolescents, explains the cognitive

    posted on February 4, 2008
  59. proofread

    The practicum site I selected is an elementary school. I will be assisting a first grade teacher during the semester, helping her with her students, and other teacher responsibilities. This practicum site was selected because being a first grade teacher is

    posted on February 4, 2008
  60. proofread

    My first goal is to finish the 90 hours of work by the deadline by ensuring that I get a minimum of 6 hours of work completed for each week during this semester. My second goal is to learn more about this career and to discover whether teaching is

    posted on February 3, 2008
  61. proofread

    In this experience I hope to help assist the teacher and make the children’s learning environment more productive. By helping the teacher she can have more time to teach her students while I help her do some of her responsibilities as a teacher. For

    posted on February 3, 2008
  62. proofread

    I am hoping to gain experience in working with children and also becoming a good professional from this experience. I hope to show some growth in working with others or independently. For instance, I hope to be able to adapt to new situations or changes

    posted on February 3, 2008
  63. proofread

    I expect my involvement at this site will assist me by giving me an insider perspective of what it is like to be a first grade teacher and what skills it takes to be a good teacher. It will help me get some insight of the skills, attitudes, knowledge, and

    posted on February 3, 2008
  64. proofread

    I imagine my training in the field of Human Development will come into play in the work I will be doing, because I will be working with a group of people who will be developing into future adults. I imagine the course I took called, Human Development 307I

    posted on February 3, 2008
  65. English Composition

    Thank you. So, was that the only sentence that I need to work on?

    posted on February 3, 2008
  66. English Composition

    All humans have one commonality which is death. In order to survive in this world we need to have food, be healthy, and stay safe from violence.

    posted on February 3, 2008
  67. Sentence structure

    can I say aristocrats instead?

    posted on January 21, 2008
  68. sentence stucture

    Thank you both for your help! I appreciate it. =)

    posted on January 19, 2008