essay+ can some edit my paragraph?Thanks!

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  1. World war one! thanks!

    Right before the war Imperialistic, territorial, Nationalism and economic rivalries had been intensifying among Germany, France, Great Britain, Russia, and Austria-Hungary. The Balkan war was from 1912 to 1913; all the major powers increased in size as

    asked on March 6, 2007