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  1. English (Writeacher)

    How should I revise these sentences so that they are not as long but still are three sentences? "Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the

    asked by Victoria on May 5, 2014
  2. English (Writeacher)

    Do you think I should revise the first sentence? Also, am I using the dash properly? "Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the inhabitants of the

    asked by Victoria on May 5, 2014
  3. English (Writeacher)

    How should revise these sentences so that they are still three sentences? "Ten years after the Trojan War, Odysseus departs from the goddess Calypso's island and arrives in Phoenicia, ruled by Alcinous. Offering Odysseus a ship to return him to his

    asked by Victoria on May 5, 2014
  4. English (Writeacher)

    Do you think I should revise anything? I have been given a limit of only three sentences to summarize the information below, but I don't want to seem wordy. "Ten years after the Trojan War, Odysseus departs from the goddess Calypso's island and arrives in

    asked by Victoria on May 5, 2014