1. English

    Need help fixing a run on sentence. I moved to the United States when I was young ut was easy to learn English, my parents were already here, they knew English already.
  2. English

    Can anyone help me to outline the article, "What $1.2 Trillion Can Buy-NYTimes"? I'm not allowed to post website,but the article can be googled. I'm not quite sure which sentence among the article is the the thesis. thanks
  3. Foreign languages

    I left out this sentence. Thank you. Complete the sentences with the correct form of the past simple, past perfect or past continuous.
  4. english 101

    Confidentiality be observed at all times , so the nurse should not discuss clients when the conversation can be overheard by the others. observed-be-can be-by hi.I am not sure, but observed is wrong in this sentence
  5. Grammar

    I has to revise the following sentence naomi winned, why d you leave me like this! naomi soon began to cry.naomi lucas yelled Its okay youwill be just fine
  6. English

    I'm writing an essay about the positive effects of homeschooling, but I'm having trouble writing my introduction. Can anyone help me with writing a good, eye catching first sentence? Thanks!!!!
  7. pronouns

    rewrite the first sentence of ch.2, section 5 of the text in your own words. identify commonly used pronouns. explain why using pronouns may help make your writing more effective.
  8. English

    1. Do you like vanilla-flavored ice cream? 2. What if they were made from cow droppings? (What is the tense of Sentence 2? Is #2 in the past tense or the present tense?)
  9. English

    Andy and Kate are really good singers. They can dance well,too. --------------------------- What does the first sentence above mean, #1 or #2? 1. They are prefessional singers and they sings well. 2. They are not professional singers. They just sing songs
  10. Language Arts

    Underline the main verb in each sentence. Write present, present participle, past, or past participle to label the main verbs. 1. Randy's class studies world history. - underlines class studies and this is present participle 2. The students are reading
  11. math!

    A rectangular box is twice as long as it is wide. The height of the box is 3 feet less than the width. If the box is x feet wide, what polynomial represents its volume in cubic feet? A. 4X-3 B. 2X(cubed)+6x(squared) C.2X(squared)-6X D.
  12. help!! organic chemistry

    Write the mechanism for the reactions of 1) (E)-3-hexene and bromine and 2) (Z)-3-hexene and bromine in dichloromethane. Assign R,S configuration for each of the products and determine whether they are related as enantiomers or identical. I know how to
  13. world history

    Are there similarities between the Qin–Han transition and that of the Sui–Tang? Between Han and Tang expansion and contraction?
  14. trig 30

    Please help I need to solve the following question for x, where 0<x<2pi. and then write a general solution for the equation. The question is 2cos^2 x + cos x =1. I need to solve this using radian measurement. I solved it using algebra and was told I
  15. Further Mathematics

    Box X contains 8 oranges of which 3 are Bad and Box Y contains 5 pears of which 2 are bad. A fruit is drawn from each box. a) What is the probability that both are not bad? b) What is the probability that one item is bad and one is not? c) If one fruit is
  16. grammar

    Hi I will appreciate if someone can help me with my homework: I have to write sentences using USED or DIDN’T USE. The teacher write sentences about Ana and then he said START TO WRITE SENTENCES WITH USE. He wrote: 1. I don’t work long hours any more.
  17. Us history

    Woodrow wilson was determined to " strike a new note in international affairs... to see that sheer honesty and even unselfishness... should prevail over nationalistic self-seeking in america foreign policy." evaluate in respect of a neutrality in ww1
  18. Math

    Simultaneous equations- The tickets for a sports club disco cost £2 for members and £3 for non-members. a)The total ticket money collected was £580. x tickets were sold to members and y tickets were sold to non-members. Use this information to write
  19. algebra--miss sue

    I need to find and write the equation for the problem. Layla wants to but a smart phone online using a $50 discount coupon along with a 20% discount on the original cost of the phone. Layla can spend up to $150. Write an inequality to find the original
  20. trig

    8. Write the equation for simple harmonic motion given that the amplitude is 5 centimeters and the frequency is 2/ ð cycles per second. Assume that the maximum displacement occurs when t = 0. a. y = 5sin4t b. y = 5cos2t c. y = 5cos4t d. y = 5sin2t 9.
  21. Grammar

    Please help me recorrect these two sentences under the rule of puctuating sentences. Or atleast give me an idea of how are they suppost to sound. (1) When the garage door was closed. My answer:The day that i had forgotton my house key was when the garage
  22. Math (check my work)

    Angle A measures (x + 13) °. Angle B is complementary to angle A and measures (2x +23) °. a. Write and solve an equation to find the value of x. Not sure how to write the equation but the value of x = 18 b. What are the measures of angle a and angle b?
  23. English

    Which of the following is a good test-taking strategy for short-answer questions? 1.If you don’t know the exact answer, don’t write anything. 2.(If you don’t know the exact answer, write down whatever you do know.) 3.Make your answer as short as
  24. Lifeskills

    Need help people making a resume for hw assignment!!? okay so I'm in 9th grade and have life skills .we have to make our own resume on the job we want. i want to study criminology and become a detective so i have to write stuff sorta pertaining to it. like
  25. English expression

    1. Paying attention to punctation marks, write the following sentences in short words. 2. After you read the following passage, mark appropriate punctuation marks. After that write them again. 3. After you read the following passage, using short words,
  26. math

    Write the first five terms of the sequence defined recursively. Use the pattern to write the nth term of the sequence as a function of n. (Assume that n begins with 1.) a (subtext) 1 =4,a (subtext) (k+1) =−a (subtext) k a. a (subtext) n
  27. Grammar

    The patient was admitted to the floor for abdominal pain and diarrhea, initial diagnosis was a possible small-bowel obstruction. A) complete sentence B) fragment C) run-on Seems like C would be the best answer as a run-on
  28. Grammar and Composition

    I don't understand how I can use 'largess' in a sentence properly. It means giving of gifts(generously). So could I just say: There is a large amount of largess at holiday times? it doesnt' sound right
  29. History

    Explain how attacks by abolitionists strengthened sectionalism in the south. Provide Support. All I need is the main idea. If you could just provide a sentence or two about this, or just help me find what I'm looking for by linking an article or something,
  30. math

    The minimum daily values (MDVs) for certain foods are given. They are based on a 2,000 calorie per day diet. Find decimal and fractional notation for the percent notation in each sentence.
  31. english

    where is the thesis sentence in This question expresses a commonly held(by women)negative sterotype about guys of the male gender, which is they cannot find things around thehouse, especially things in the kitchen.
  32. grammar

    A compound ________ is 2 or more simple sentences/complete thoughts (independent clauses) connected by a comma and a conjunction (e.g., and, or, but) or by a semicolon and no conjunction. A) clause B) phrase C) sentence I answered c
  33. ELA

    Which italicized word in the sentence is an adjective? A)Evening bats feed GREEDILY on insects. ** B)They appear in the sky just AFTER sunset. C)These bats are among the SMALLEST of the species. D)Their fingers RESEMBLE those of human's.
  34. Grammar

    Returns now complaining of increase in depression over the past several months, resulting in an emergency room visit. A) complete sentence B) fragment C) run-on Who returns is my first thought, I answered it as B..
  35. Grammar and Composition

    Can someone please give me an example of a sentence using the word: impale? It means to pierce or fix with something pointed. The robber was about to impale the old lady, but the police made it just in time. does that make sense?
  36. ELA

    Read the sentence. The old farmhouse sat at the end of the _______ road. Which word describes the road in the most negative manner? 1. (Desolate) 2. Quiet 3. ancient 4. Lonely Ms.Sue is this right
  37. Language Arts

    Which persuasive technique is used in the following sentence from the selection? So if you have any sense at all, avoid Storm Fever. A. Appeal to authority B. Appeal to reason C. Repition D. Rhetorical question Is the answer B?
  38. Shurley English

    I'm having kids who just finished second grade code sentences in their SummerBridge books in the Shurley style. We're having trouble with the word "my." How would this sentence be coded? "Roberto's is my favorite restaurant." Thanks
  39. English

    Which sentence contains an indirect object? a. The radio warned us of the storm. b. The police gave everyone three hours to evacuate. c. Carl remained at home on the island. d. He escaped the storm in a boat.
  40. English

    The significance of the birds red feathers which is the prominent color of doodle's blood when he was found under the red nightshade bush. Help me reword this sentence it doesnt make sense...
  41. English

    Do you want to lose weight? Just wear FatSox. These special socks will suck the fat out of your feet as they sweat. After use, just take them off and wash the fat away. It's simple and easy. (In this passage, what does "It" refer to in the last sentence?)
  42. English (Urgent)

    Hi I'm writing an essay about No-No Boy. Does the following sentence sound alright, if not how do I make it sound better. I need help soon please! Two significant problems in this novel for him is overcoming self blame along with dealing with culturally
  43. English

    Identify the sentence that contains NO errors in punctuation or use of italics. a. Who has my copy of "The Waste Land"?*** b. Vera said, "I left it in the classroom". c. "Are you sure"? Byron asked. d. "I am absolutely positive." Vera replied.
  44. English

    How should I revise this sentence? "Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the inhabitants of the peculiar island."
  45. English

    Is this a good topic sentence for a paragraph? In A Raisin in the Sun, Lena Younger is the nurturing, morale character who keeps the Younger family in line and earns your respect in the story.
  46. English

    The topic sentence of a body paragraph: A. introduces the thesis statement. B. outlines one thesis point. C. is developed during the proofreading step. D. summarizes the essay’s main points. D
  47. 7th grade English

    Explain whether the following statement is a fact or an opinion: "Capitalism is a better system of government than communism." Give reasons for your answer. Isn't this sentence an opinion because it uses the word "better"?
  48. math

    The minimum daily values (MDVs) for certain foods are given. They are based on a 2,000 calorie per day diet. Find decimal and fractional notation for the percent notation in each sentence.
  49. English

    Which of the following italicized words is correcly capitalized? 1) The most beautiful "State" is Hawaii. 2) Jim must drive to the "North" to study the northern lights. It must be #2, I don't believe state is capitilized in this sentence.
  50. SCIENCE

    i am doing a project on pneumonia. i need to answer the following questions in a proper sentence. 1. does pneumonia affect both men and women? 2. what are the chances for survival. 3. what is the % of population affected? 4. is the disease on the increase
  51. English

    How can I rewrite this sentence using parallel structure? The stirring closing paragraph is the formal pronouncement of independence and borrowed from the resolution of independence adopted by congress July 2, 1776.
  52. PARTS OF SPEECH

    Choose the sentence in which the verb is a linking verb. A. He works at a gas station. B. He has walked to work from his house. C. His hours are long and busy. D. His boss pays him well.
  53. Urgent 8th Grade Language Arts

    How is the word street used in the sentence below: Street cleaners can often be seen on our block in the very early morning. adjective*** adverb noun pronoun Am I right Ms.Sue?
  54. speech

    whats a good title for the daliy struggles a person with diabeties have? the thing with this sentence is it doesnt fit with what im suppose to do my topic on because my topic has to be on how to make the world a better place we need.... ( well that's how i
  55. language arts

    I've got one more collective noun question to make sure I'm understanding correctly. In the sentence, The jury (was, were) answering questions to stay on the case. Would the correct choice be were because questions is plural? Thanks...
  56. English/ Help

    It was a perfect day for a boat ride on a lovely river.? Which of the following parts of speech is the word "lovely" in the sentence above? A. Coordinating conjunction B. Prepositional object C. Adjective D. Adverb I think A
  57. math

    The minimum daily values (MDVs) for certain foods are given. They are based on a 2000 calorie per day diet. Find decimal and fractional notation for the percent notation on each sentence. a)
  58. english

    I am a bit confused about what type of sentence this would be.... Hurricane Katrina destroyed many homes in New Orleans it destroyed many business, too. Chose from: correct, fused, comma splices and fragment
  59. English

    Could you please help me put this sentence together People could be at a borderline into having a stroke or even having heart problems, which is some reason peoples arteries could be getting clogged up, is because of what most people eat which is fast
  60. khan

    examples of sentence structures http://www.arts.uottawa.ca/writcent/hypergrammar/sntstrct.html http://wwwnew.towson.edu/ows/sentencestruct.htm
  61. language arts

    Which persuasive technique is used in the following sentence? The movie was advertised as "full of adventure." Isn't it. appeal to emotion appeal to reason repetition rhetorical question Someone help me please. I'm struggling. Thank you!
  62. English

    What attitude does the writer of the following sentence seem to have towards gun control? What words convey that this attitude: The anti-gunners are constantly lobbying congress, whining about people killing Bambi.
  63. english

    1.From a very young age I had aversion 2.to water when I was it. First of all i can't understand the whole sentence and the question is that in each line an omission is there in 1 and 2.plz help me i think that 1.had_a_aversion/had _strong_aversion 2.water
  64. English

    8. Due to the cold, the young man walked spryly across campus. Which of the following options is the meaning of "spryly" as used in the sentence above? A Stiffly B. Staunchly C. Easily D. Briskly I thank D is the correct answer
  65. English Pronouns

    Identify the pronoun which has an unclear antecedent in the following sentence, if one exists. After you give the balls to the players, let me take a look at them. a. you b. me c. them d. all pronouns have clear antecedents How do I answer this question? I
  66. Law enforcement

    Which of the following is NOT considered a 'criminal proceeding' critical to the process? a.the trial b.a juvenile detention hearing c.sentence hearing d.questions asked of a probationer concerning their probation status
  67. Grammar

    She is a pleasant 18-year-old female who states that she was at a pub where she was eating and actually fell while holding a tray and rolled her ankle. A) complete sentence B) fragment C) run-on Seems to me to be a run-on because of all the ands..
  68. english

    Life is full of choices, so I must learn to make good ones. What is your question about this sentence? More on identifying verbs? If so, there are three of them. Tell us what you think, and we'll give you feedback. ?? Cynthia, that is an excellent idea,
  69. chemistry

    One mole of solid NH4Cl (s) isvheated in a closed box to decompose it partially according to the following reaction: NH4Cl (s) <=> NH3 (g) +HCl (g) A) calculate Kp of the above system at the temperature of the experiment if the partial pressure of
  70. trigonometry

    A box of 200kN is placed on a smooth inclined plane 28° with the horizontal. To prevent the box from sliding down the plane, a rope is tied to it and fastened to a peg on the top of the incline as shown. Determine the pull on the string assuming that the
  71. Physics

    Two children are playing a game in which they try to hit a small box on the floor with a marble fired from a spring-loaded gun that is mounted on a table. The target box is 3.46 m horizontally from the edge of the table. Bobby compresses the spring 0.97
  72. Physics

    A 50 Kg box rests on a horizontal surface. The coefficient of Static friction between the box and surface is 0.30. The coeffient of Kinetic friction is 0.20. What is the frictional force on the box if a 140 N horizontal push is applied to it. If a 175 N
  73. math

    A certain brand of cereal costs $3.25 per box before sales tax is added. When you buy 5 or more boxes of this cereal you receive 1 additional box for free. What is the average cost per box of cereal for 6 boxes before sales tax are added ? Please helpp
  74. English

    I have to write a argment Paper and it is based on Native Americans traditional culture and beliefs are or are not valuable in today's world. I want to write a paper on how Sioux, Kiowa, and Cheeroke related. I don't know it this is a good thesis: Native
  75. english

    List the characters in the story. Write one to two sentences on the defining characteristics of each one, providing at least one citation to illustrate your comments. Why do you think the story is called "A Very Old Man with Enormous Wings" rather than "An
  76. writing

    i have a writing topic i have to write a 3 paragraph essay on it. The topic is: "Think about other animal stories you have read or seen. What purpose do such stories often serve? Are they written merely to entertain, or to teach a lesson? Write a (minimum
  77. math question

    how do i do a problem like this becuase i got it wrong on my study guide and i want to know how to do it? A number cube is rolled 450 times.The number 3 comes up 67 times. a.What is the theoretical probability of rolling a 3? write your answer as a
  78. physics homework 1

    A 4.67-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.446. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  79. Chemistry

    Consider the titrtation of 25.0mL of 0.0100M Sn2+ by 0.0500M Ti3+ in 1 M HCL, using Pt and Saturated Calomel Electrodes to find the endpoint. F=96486.7 Cmol E0 Sn4+/Sn2+ =0.15V E0 TI3+/TI+ = 1.28 Esce = 0.241V R=8.3141 J K Mol (a) Write the balanced
  80. Chem -Bob Pursley Please Help!

    Chlorine dioxide decomposes to chlorine and oxygen according to the following mechanism: ClO 2 → ClO + O (fast) ClO 2 + O → ClO 3 (fast) ClO 3 + ClO → Cl 2 + 2 O 2 (slow) (a) What is the overall reaction? (b) What is the molecularity of each step?
  81. math

    a woman wants to construct a box whose base length is twice the base width. The material to build the top and bottom is $ 9/m ( squared) and the material to build the sides is $6m/ ( squared). If the woman wants the box to have a volume of 70 m cubed,
  82. Math

    posted my last question wrong. 1) The slope of a line is 3/4, the line passes through the point(4,7). Where does the line intersect the y-axis? 2) If x/y=z, and x*y*a=0, which of the following variables have to=0? Assume each of the variables is = to a
  83. math-probability

    A factory produces fuses, which are packaged in boxes of 17. Three fuses are selected at random from each box for inspection. The box is rejected if at least one of these three fuses is defective. What is the probability that a box containing two defective
  84. Story problem help Damon

    Stan bought 3 boxes of fruit loops and 2 boxes of kix for $15.05. One box of fruit loops cost $0.60 more than one box of kix. How much does one box of each type of cereal cost
  85. Physics (46)

    A 4.67-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.446. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  86. physics

    A 3.50-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.330. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  87. physics

    A 6.01-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.291. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  88. Physics

    A 4.51-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.382. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  89. physics

    really confused, A 2kg box is sliding east at 50m/s on a frictionless floor when it collides with a 4kg box sliding east at 10m/s. After the collision, the 2 kg box is sliding east at 20m/s and the 4kg block is sliding east at 25m/s. Calculate the
  90. physics

    A 4.85-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.440. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  91. physics

    A 9.90-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.372. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  92. Physics

    A 2.20-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.480. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  93. physics

    A 9.90-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.372. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, (b)
  94. Physics

    A 8.70-kg box is sliding across the horizontal floor of an elevator. The coefficient of kinetic friction between the box and the floor is 0.400. Determine the kinetic frictional force that acts on the box when the elevator is (a) stationary, N (b)
  95. macroeconomics

    As an economist, you have been asked to write a letter to a meeting of international professionals to explain the differences between microeconomics and macroeconomics and to provide real-world examples. Please write a letter of 4–6 pages including, but
  96. Computer Science

    I posted this question before. The assignment was: write a Java method if the first parameter is less than the second parameter add the two and print the result ten times. How do I write the result 10 times as a loop? This is what I've got but I have a ton
  97. algbra 1b

    can someone tell me if i have the answer correct a. Suppose a market research company finds that at a price of p = $40, they would sell x = 27 tiles each month. If they lower the price to p = $15, then more people would purchase the tile, and they can
  98. math

    Joe works on an assembly line that fills boxes with various toy trinkets. Every sixth box gets a red ball and every eighth box gets a blue whistle. How often does a box get both a red ball and a blue whistle? Hint least common multiple Can someone please
  99. calculus

    An open box is to be made from a 21 ft by 56 ft rectangular piece of sheet metal by cutting out squares of equal size from the four corners and bending up the sides. Find the maximum volume that the box can have.
  100. calculus

    A box of rectangular base and an open top has a surface area 600 cm2. If the height of the box is equal to its width, find the dimensions that give a maximum volume.