1. com155

    Can you check my paragraph for grammar errors, strong topic/concluding sentence,and any other recommended feed back? Paragraph two was more effective than paragraph one because it contained sentence variety and rhythm. Paragraph one consisted of short
  2. Health (Ms. Sue)

    Write about a real or imaginary situation in which you used or could use three or more of the life skills discussed in this chapter to improve your health. (Or) Write about a time when your family made a group decision on something you were going to do,
  3. Math

    An open box is to be made from cutting squares of side s from each corner of a piece of cardboard 25" by 30". a.Write an expression for the volume, V, of the box in terms of s. b. Graph V(s) using your graphing calculator. Identify the domain and range of
  4. Misplaced Modifiers or Parallel Sentence

    How do I re-write the following? Another advertisement for Drakkar Noir Cologne shows a man dressed in black with two attractive blonde women, standing on either side of him, staring at him like innocent and naive young girls. While flipping through a
  5. ,language

    If the end mark is correct,write correct.if it is not correct,write the sentence with the correct end mark. 1/what should I draw! The answer:not correct,,What should I draw? 2/think of something funny? The answer:not correct,,,Think of something funny.
  6. French, foreign languages

    Hi the following sentences are basically unscrambling them in the first place and then putting the sentence in order. If when looking through my unscrambled sentences and you see something wrong with the grammar or something of that nature that does not
  7. 7th grade Language (probably easy to answer)

    In the sentence ' Andy has driven many types of vehicles that have various controls.' What would many types, be? (Adverb,verb,pronoun,ect.) Also... In the sentence ' The car has a lot of blind spots which make it difficult to turn safely.' What would lot,
  8. English

    Scarlet Letter Chapter 9 1.The subject of the main clause in the sentence beginning "If the latter possess native sagacity . . . " (line 68) is (A) "latter" (line 68) (B) "he" (line 70) (C) "revelations" (line 76) (D) "qualifications" (line 80) (E "soul"
  9. Help Please-Question

    Which sentence is a comma splice? A. While the lawyer prepared the case, her assistant checked the report she found no mistakes. B. Because all the members were early, the meeting got underway ahead of schedule. C. Dr. Matheson,speaking as head of the
  10. English 4

    1. Which of the following displays a correct use of pronouns? A. Soung spent more money than me B. Jamal was as interested as her C. Claudia has always been better at math than I. 2. Read the following sentence and determine which sentence in each set of
  11. Language Arts

    May some one check my answers please for Lesson 18: Adventures and Imagination Unit Test: questions 10 - 16 10. Complete the sentence with the word or phrase that has the most positive connotation. When we saw her barefoot and wearing flowers as a crown,
  12. Algebra

    A taco stand sells tacos for $3.35 easch. The stands expenses for the day are $210. Define our variables and write an inequality to represent the amount of tacos they need to sell per day to make a profit, and then solve the inequality. Provide your
  13. Computer Programming

    Hoe do I write a program to Create a C++ console application that uses cout to display a box of asterisks?
  14. Language Arts

    Having some trouble on the comma rule with the word "usually". If it is used in the beginning of the sentence would you put a comma after it? For instance, in the sentence, "Usually castles sat on a hilltop and had high stone walls." Would you put a comma
  15. Pre-Algebra

    1. Write the fraction 8/9 as a percent. Round to the nearest hundredth of a percent where necessary. A. 88.89% B. 1.13% C. 44.44% D. 66.67% 2. Write 0.063 as a percent. A. 0.63% B. 6.3% C. 63% D. 630% 3. A study in your town found that 54 in 1,762 people
  16. English

    In the following sentence, which of the following is used as a gerund or gerund phrase? A:overjoyed B:about discovering*** C:discovering D:was overjoyed What function is the gerund serving in the sentence below? Swimming was my sister's best sport in high
  17. math

    An open box is to be made from a flat square piece of material 20 inches in length and width by cutting equal squares of length x from the corners and folding up the sides. (a) Write the volume V of the box as a function of x. Leave it as a product of
  18. Literature

    'Pick a special day of the year. Write down atleast two things that you might see, hear, taste, smell, or touch on that day. Try to find images that reveal what you feel at this moment, on this day. Now write a haiku about your special day.' I reallyyy
  19. english

    Change the italicized clause to a nominative absolute. Rewrite the entire sentence in the box below. As the hurricane season was over, people returned to the cottages on the beach. as the hurricane season was over is italicized.
  20. question

    Which sentence has a preposition-related error? 1.There was a fight between the two men. 2.The Cerritos Center is near to my office. 3.They gave a party for Mary and me. 4.The report was sent to everyone except her. One of those sentences has TWO
  21. english - essay writing

    is it ok to use the word 'you' in a persuasive essay? As in: "Where else do you see desperate ladies act like crazed maniacs for a sad 15 minutes of fame, or as they’d like you to believe the love of.." yes sounds good so far thanks halida. =) could you
  22. Math

    I am in 7th Grade and have some holiday homeworks. Please help. 1. Write all the algebraic identities. 2. Write the statement & proof for remainder theorem & factor theorem each. 3.Write all the quadrilaterals and their properties. 4. Write the formulae
  23. LANGUAGE ARTS

    Choose the sentence that provides an accurate contrast-based context clue for the italicized word.(1point) He usually only treated people with cruelty, so I was surprised when he showed “compassion” for the crying child.*** I was tired of being
  24. Science

    Respected teachers, I have got assignment that i have to write about 7 scientists i am in class 6 and we have to write 1 page for 1 scientist we have to write about their life style and what they invented and how they were great and i know names of some
  25. English

    1. Anne's diary was published under the title of The Diary of a Young Girl. 2. Anne's diary was published under the title The Diary of Young Girl. (Which one is correct? Do I have to write 'of' or not"?) 3. Did you write today's diary? 4. Did you write a
  26. Grammar

    Students are often confused about the use of the words good and well in their writing. Write a 100-word passage to Susan Anker, the author of the course’s textbook, in which you describe five details from her book that are good and five details about the
  27. conditional sentence

    1. If the sound system hadn't failed, last night's show would have been better. a. this is a correct sentence using the 2nd conditional form b. this is a sentence using the 3rd conditional form Answer a. 3. if the club's manager agrees, they'll play a few
  28. Algebra

    jake goes to the grocery store and buys 3 apples. 2 cans of soup, and 1 box of cereal. the apples cost $0.89 each; the soup costs $2.98 per can; and the box of cereal $4.99. write an equation that represents the total cost c of jake's purchases.
  29. English/Writing

    I have to use all these words in one long sentence and the sentence has to make sense. Its on Essay Analysis...HELP>>> here are all the words analyse review comment coherent order clear balanced logical convincing for against pros cons breakdown
  30. English III

    Okay so I am reading the book The Scarlet Letter and it is like really boring, so far. I am about a chapter in and my homework is really hard! I have to read a sentence the packet gives me and interpret the darn thing. It's driving me insane because these
  31. 8th Grade History

    which group best fits this sentence: groups: African Americans, Asian Americans, Mexican Americans, Native Americans Sentence: Many members of this group turned dry, barren lands into profitable farms. Others worked in lumber mills, canneries, and mines
  32. English

    1. Working outside is very hard for the people here. 2. Working outside is very hard to the people here. [Are both okay? Can we use 'for' and 'to' in the sentence? In each sentence, what is the part of speech of 'here'? Is 'here' an adverb or an
  33. English

    1. I try not to stress out when things go wrong. 2. He went bald. 3. She went mad. ------------------- In Sentence 2 and 3, 'bald' and 'mad' are adjectives, so 'went' means 'became.' What about in Sentence 1? Does 'go' mean 'become'? Is 'wrong' an
  34. English

    1. How do you pronounce "Shrek", the movie title? 2. Then come to Peter's on Saturday, 12 o'clock. 3. Then come to Peter's at 12 o'clock on Saturday. (Is Sentence 2 grammatical? What about Sentence 3?)
  35. english

    What should you do to the following sentence to avoid using a double negative? Even with glasses on, she didn't never see well. A. Leave the sentence as is. B. Even with glasses on, sue didn't ever see well. C. Even with glasses on, she never saw nothing
  36. Translating a sentence into a one-step equation

    Translate this sentence into an equation. The difference of Victor's height and 13 is 60 Use the variable v to represent Victor's height.
  37. Translating a sentence into a one-step equation

    Translate this sentence into an equation. Gail's savings increased by 17 is 46. Use the variable g to represent Gail's savings.
  38. English

    1. You should pay attention to me. 2. You should draw attention from the audience. 3. You should get attention from the classmates. ------------------- Are they all grammatical? Do we have to use only 'to' in Sentence 1? Do we have to use 'from' in
  39. Grammar: PLEASE HELP

    What's the difference among a simple sentence, complex, compound, and compound-complex. I always have a difficult time knowing which is which, except simple sentence of course, that one is easy
  40. Nouns, Pronouns, Adjectives, and Verbs

    Which of the following statements is true regarding sentence components? A. Every sentence must have an object. B. The object can be a noun or a verb. C. Often the subject will act upon the object. D. The predicate can be a noun or a verb.
  41. Speech

    Please help me write an eight sentence paragraph that fully develops the topic. 1. Getting along with other people is important in my work. What exactly does "getting along" involve? What goals would "getting along" help you to meet your work goals? How
  42. English

    I have to write a thematic essay and a characteristic essay. I have a few questions in the writing. I am in grade 11 right now. 1) what should I include in the introduction? Whenever I write anything about the story, my tutor says that is summarizing and I
  43. Physics...Friction

    A 75 kg box slides down a 25 degree ramp with an acc. of 3.6 m/s2. find mu,k between the box and the ramp. Write down Newton's second law for the direction of motion. "a" is the acceleration. Mg sin 25 - M g cos 25 *mu,k = M a The first term is the weight
  44. elementary

    write a problem write a word problem involving the number of pages in a book.then write the numerical expression that you would need to use to solve your problem.
  45. science

    A mixture of sugar and water can be separated by ______________. Choose ALL that apply. (2 points) Box 1. using a magnet Box 2. boiling the mixture Box 3. evaporating the mixture Box 4. using a filter I picked "Box 2" and "Box 3"
  46. English

    Which Sentence sounds better: (Also pick one word in the parenthesis that correctly fits in the sentence.): 1. Joseph Paul DiMaggio was one of the greatest baseball players. 2. Joseph Paul DiMaggio was one of the greatest baseball players (of/in) his era.
  47. algebra

    The temperature F, in degrees Fahrenheit, that corresponds to a temperature C, in degrees Celsius, is given by the equation F = (9/5)C + 32. If you graph this equation for 0 < (the sign has a _ below it to mean or equal to) C < (the sign has a _
  48. sentence correction

    I don't see anything wrong with this sentence: It will be greatly appreciated if the bill is paid by check when possible. You're right; there's nothing wrong with this sentence. But you can make it much better by putting it in the active and not passive
  49. English

    1.Tiny Tim was destitute. His clothing was in tatters. Which sentence combines the two sentences using a past participle? Tiny Tim's tattered clothing showed he was destitute. THIS ONE Tiny Tim was destitute, and his clothing was in tatters. Tiny Tim's
  50. english

    1) When Congress passed the Federal ReserveAct of 1913, it gave the Federal Reserve Board afree hand in steering the economy. (2) The President, while charged with appointing the chair and board members, has no direct role to play in the Board’s policy
  51. Reading

    1) Identify the dependent clause in this sentence: The mother dog left her bed as soon as the puppies were asleep. a) As soon as the puppies were asleep b) Left her bed as soon as c) The puppies were asleep d) The mother dog left her bed 2) Which sentence
  52. History

    Read the sentence. The printing press helped people to ___________. Which option correctly completes the sentence? find employment hand copying books from Latin to native languages understand their religion by reading affordable printed Bibles learn and
  53. English

    Scientists report (1) that creatures living in the deep sea are in danger of starving to death. The underlined part of sentence 1 is what kind of clause? adverbial clause adjectival clause noun clause Independent clause My answer is independent because if
  54. HISTORY

    Explain what traces the rise of Japan from an isolated society to a major industrial and imperial power. Please help. I need to write a paragraph on this. As you know, don't write me a paragraph. But please answer my question, without links, enough so
  55. English

    Choose the contraction in parentheses ( ) that correctly completes the sentence . 1/ She (don't, doesn't) know what to expect in the United States . Answer: doesn't 2/ Fortunatley, her aunt and uncle ( haven't, didn't) forgotten to meet her plane. Answer:
  56. Environmental Science

    Here is a sentence that says: In bodies of water polluted by phosphorus, algae can form large floating mats, called algal blooms. What substance causes an alfal bloom to form? (I don't understand the sentence) That's "algal bloom" See:
  57. Language help

    (Singing loudly in the shower) is what Jessica loves to do every morning. a. gerund phrase b. participial phrase c. appositive phrase *** d. prepositional phrase (Sam and Dean were shocked to find they both enjoyed playing soccer.) a. subordinate clause
  58. Lingusitics

    Hello everyone!! For these six sentences, I have to explain what determines whether the sentence is grammatical or not 1) Both the students were studying. 2) The students were both studying. 3) They were both studying. 4) *Both they were studying. 5) Both
  59. Fluid Mechanics

    Consider the 2D, incompressible, steady flow between parallel walls, the bottom wall is stationary and the top one is moving at a constant velocity Uw. The pressure is constant. Assuming the flow is fully developed (i.e. independent of x), we can write
  60. Lingusitics

    "It is a widely held view in syntax that the constituents we have been calling noun phrases (NPs) are actually determiner phrases (DPs). In this view, all nouns are inside a DP, and if a sentence does not have an overt determiner, the head of DP will be a
  61. Written communication

    How can I re-write this sentence? Each advisor was contacted by his students. Assignment: Inclusive Language:Making Language Nonsexist http://www.jiskha.com/search/search.cgi?query=Each+advisor+was+contacted+by+his+students All advisors were contacted by
  62. 5th grade math

    Rachel has a box of cupcakes that she wants to share equally with her 5 friends. Write an expression to represent the problem.
  63. GRAMMAR

    PLEASE CORRECT THE ANSWERS ACCORDING TO THE QUESTION BELOW. WRITE ONE COMPLETE SENTENCE FOR EACH WORD TO SHOW CLEARLY HOW IT DEFFERS IN MEANING FROM THE OTHER WORD IN THE GROUP. 1)price: the price of the apple in the market was $10 per Kg. 1)prize: I got
  64. English

    1. Where is the restroom? 2. Where is a restroom? [Can we use both expression? Do you use only #1? Does the restroom mean the specific restroom? Or is 'the restroom' in generic use? Or does the restroom mean the specific restroom near here, which people
  65. English

    1. Where is the restroom? 2. Where is a restroom? [Can we use both expression? Do you use only #1? Does the restroom mean the specific restroom? Or is 'the restroom' in generic use? Or does the restroom mean the specific restroom near here, which people
  66. essay writing

    Hello. Below is a sentence in my essay for school: Lolling in lounge and other chairs gathered around the pool, alleviating water slides down the throats of loving relations. I was curious if this was written correctly because 'alleviating water' comes
  67. English

    The noise from the ducks in the pond was soothing. I have to Underline each independent clause and subordinate clause twice then tell if the sentence is simple, compound, complex, compound-complex 1.The noise from the ducks was soothing=indep clause in the
  68. English

    1. Write down the name of the building with a question mark. 2.Write down the name of the building marked with a question mark. 3. Write down the name of the building having a question mark. 4. Write down the name of the building which has a question mark.
  69. english

    In the following sentence, what word does the participle phrase modify? Everyone in the annex heard her screaming loudly -Everyone -Annex -Heard -Her** Which sentence contains are participle phrase? -She wants so spend time writing. -Her job is giving the
  70. algebra

    simplify the following radical expression: 3 sqrt (-27) a) -3 b) 3 c) 0 d) no solution exists do i write the sqrt like this or do i write like this sqrt () 3 -27 please show me the correct way to write it thanks
  71. English

    1. Write down the ideas of your favorite teacher. 2. Write down your feelings about your favorite teacher. 3. Write down how do you feel about your favorite teacher. 4. Write down your idea about a teacher you like. =============== Would you check
  72. English

    Thank you, Writeacher. Here are some other sentences I need you to check. 1) Your paragraphs show a poor knowledge of grammar as well as of word accuracy (correctness, property) and cohesion. 2)The choice of tenses is often wrong since you mixed present
  73. three language sentence

    daily language practice-correct the sentences and rewrite them correctly on the lines. circle subject and underline predicate. Finally, circle the correct type of sentence. The number of corrections is in parentheses. Ex: He discovered the dog in it's
  74. college algebra

    What is the answers and break down of them, Typing hint: Type x 2 as x^2 (shift 6 on the keyboard will give ^) 1) Solve the following quadratic equation by factoring: a) 7 010 2 xx =++ Answers: Show your work here: b) Solve the quadratic equation using the
  75. English

    Hello. I will be grateful for some grammar help. 1)Which tense is correct in the context: "they will get the documents ready by Friday" or "they will have got the documents ready by Friday"? Are both structures possible? 2)Is it possible to use "after" in
  76. ELA

    A clause from sentence (i) has been turned into a(n) _______ in sentence (ii). (i) Since she knew what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting.  (ii) Knowing what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting.  A. phrase B. compound
  77. English

    Hello. I would be very grateful for your help. 1) Please help me with articles. I'm writing about a particular company. Should I use the definite article or no article in the following context: "(the ?) costs are likely to be higher than (the?) revenues".
  78. English

    Which is a simple sentence? 1. Given the time of day,we were lucky to find a taxi. 2. Shelia used the lawnmower and Jacob drove the tractor. 3. Eventually she will. 4. Jennifer and Brian gave money to the orphanage. Would number 4 be an example of a simple
  79. Help!

    Read this sentence from "Kids in Action: Dalie Jimenez." "She decided to lobby to restore funding.” In which of the following does the word restore have the same meaning as in the sentence above? A. Renee was hired to restore the antique paintings in the
  80. english

    Can you please tell me if the sentence in quotation marks is the topic sentence? I read paragraph one and paragraph three, I believe that paragraph one was a very effective paragraph. "It touches a few very interesting points about why someone should
  81. English

    Which of the following statements is true regarding sentence components? A. Often the subject will act upon the object B. The predicate can be a noun or a verb. C. Every sentence must have an object. D. The object can be a noun or a verb. I think the
  82. English

    Well, I admit that junk food’s unhealthy. However, people have a right to make healthy or unhealthy choices. --------------------------- Is this sentence acceptable? Can we use 'healthy choice' or 'unhealthy choice' as in the sentence?
  83. verbs

    The verb in this sentence. describes an ongoing action 1. Jack stopped to call a friend. 2. What are you doing? Answer 1 The verb in this sentence describes a habitual or repeated action A. I was hoping to hear from you. B. This guy makes his own
  84. writing skills

    A clause from sentence (i) has been turned into a(n) _______ in sentence (ii). (i) Since she knew what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting. (ii) Knowing what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting. A. relative pronoun B.
  85. writing skills

    8. A clause from sentence (i) has been turned into a(n) _______ in sentence (ii). (i) Since she knew what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting. (ii) Knowing what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting. A. compound predicate B.
  86. Eng

    A clause from sentence (I) has been turned into a (n) _____ in sentence (ii). (i) Since she knew what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting. (ii) Knowing what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting. A. compound predicate B.
  87. Technical writing

    Identify each as fragment, run-on, comma splice, or sentence. Edgar Allen Poe invented the convention of the solution that is overlooked. Because it is so obvious. Select one: a. fragment b. run-on c. comma splice d. correct sentence A
  88. English

    1. Many animals are dying. 2. Many animals are dying out. (What is the difference between the two sentence? What is the meaning of 'out' in Sentence 2?)
  89. Writing

    How do you start a thesis sentence with the subject on computers? Is this sentence a thesis? Computers are becoming more useful.
  90. sentence structure

    What is the subject and predicate of this sentence? "There are children waiting." Is it "children are waiting" or "there are"?
  91. spanish

    How do I translate my spanish Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. First of all you need to determine the vocabulary in the sentence. When you actually post some work here we can help you use the dictionary. The very BEST way is to look up
  92. Math

    Hi, I have to write a research paper and I decided to write about the history/importance of imaginary numbers. I don't know how to get started though, can you please help ! By the way I know how to write a research paper so don't give me the links about
  93. English

    1. The earth goes around the sun. 2. The eatth moves around the sun. 3. The earth goes round the sun. 4. The earth moves round the sun. (Which one do I have to use?) 5. Many boys were sitting around the lake. 6. Many boys were sitting round the lake. (Do I
  94. Social Studies

    I have to define the word Kinship, come up with a couple synonyms, use it in a sentence, and then draw a picture to resemble it. For the definition I got: the relationship amoung family members For the synonyms I got: bond, family, relation I need help
  95. algebra

    Write a formula to express the following sentence as an equation: The sale price us 25% off the original price. Use S for sale price and P for original price to express S as a function of P.
  96. Physics

    At the beginning of a new school term, a student moves a box of books by attaching a rope to the box and pulling with a force of 92 N at an angle of 30 as shown in the figure below. The box of books has a mass of 22.0 kg, and the coefficient of kinetic
  97. c programming

    a student designed a program to accept the age of an employee and then compute the employees retirement year and display the same in a statement on the screen required. a) write out the pseudo-code for the program above b) write the algorithm, c) flowchart
  98. Pscyhology help again

    Hellok, my question was misunderstood, I know how to write a book report, I have to write a review on a movie with psychological issues. I chose the movie I am Sam, but my problem is do I mainly write about the mental retardation, the lawyer that has
  99. english HELP ASAP

    the directions say : For each sentence, find the infinitive phrase and write it in the blank on the left. Then tell whether it is used as a subject, direct object, predicate nominative, object of a preposition, or appositive. the sentence is The Legion of
  100. math

    An open box is to be made from a flat square piece of material 20 inches in length and width by cutting equal squares of length x from the corners and folding up the sides. (a) Write the volume V of the box as a function of x. Leave it as a product of