I urgently need you to revise these sentences. I thank you very much for your help 1) They prophesy that Banquo will be father to a line of kings. The witches also tell him that no man born of woman
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PLEASE HELP ME QUICK I NEED IS NOW Read the sentences from a student's essay about "the treasure of lemon brown Greg's father sat endlessly lecturing him on Greg's need to improve his grades. Greg had his mind on other things. What is the best way to
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Business communication
Revise the sentences using concrete words 1.She makes good grade
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Help english
Revise the sentences. (1) Revise the following sentence so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions: Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight.
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Physics
(PLEASE HELP ME URGENTLY) The electrical resistances of the element in a platinum resistance thermometer at 100°C, 0°C and room temperature are 75.000W, 63.000W and 64.992W respectively. Use these data to determine the room temperature. (PLEASE HELP ME
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english
Which of the following sentences is written in active voice? a. The decision was made to revise the original proposal. b. A market analysis was conducted to determine the project’s need. c. The project was developed after months of planning. d. The
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Business English
Exercise Guideline:Assume that your readers are at about the 10th grade level in education. Revise these sentences for easy communication to this audience. 1. we must terminate all deficit financing. 2.we must endeavor to correct this problem by expediting
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conclusions - check answer
Which of the following is a true statement about writing introductions of rough drafts? A. Do not worry about the central point of your essay; it will happen later on as you revise your paper. (MY ANSWER) B. Pay close attention to the correct spelling of
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english
Beginning writers tend to overuse _______, which quickly become monotonous A. long sentences B. complicated sentences C. short, simple sentences D. complex sentences
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Enlish
In revising his essay, Silvio realizes that there are some paragraphs in which the topic sentence doesn't support the thesis. What can he do to correct this? A. Add transitions where needed B. Revise his thesis to include all the points made by the
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English 1
DOES THIS SOUND GOOD? Revise the sentences below to improve fluency. Specifically, add variety to the sentence types, and use transitional words so that sentences flow smoothly. 18. Summer is my favorite season. I enjoy the warm weather. School ends. I
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Whad do you think I should do? 1) I graduated with honours in modern languages and I know how important memory is in learning a foreign language. 2) The headmaster of the school I'm teaching at has warned me
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eng/135
Revising Messages: Conciseness Revise the following sentences, using shorter, simpler words. 9. The antiquated calculator is ineffectual for solving sophisticated problems
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Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework
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english check answer plz !
i think its A. but i also got C. As you are reading your research paper aloud,you notice that all your sentences start the same way. What should you do A.revise some of the sentence so there is variety. B.read the sentences with a more engaging voice C.add
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Enlish
In revising his essay, Silvio realizes that there are some paragraphs in which the topic sentence doesn't support the thesis. What can he do to correct this? A. Add transitions where needed B. Revise his thesis to include all the points made by the
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English
I urgently need you to revise the following sentences I have to include in an email. 1) Thank you for answering my last email and letting me know you are going to find another theme for our Comenius project with your French partner. 2) As I'm holding a
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English
I urgently need to include the following details in a letter. Ms. Sue, could you please check them? 1) As I'm planning all the details for our preliminary meeting I urgently need to know when you are arriving here and if you need any help to arrange your
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English
1. Sentences with ________ are wordier because they have an additional helping verb and sometimes the word by. Sentences with ___________ are more clear and concise. (For both choices they only have passive and active voice so ik think option 1 is passive
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English
I urgently need to revise this paragraph about a program called "Lost". 1) Lost was first transmitted (broadcast) by ABC in 2004. It was soon very popular because of its unusual plot. 2) Lost is the story of the survivors of a plane crash in the Pacific
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English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences (instructions), please. 1)Explain to a friend of yours who has never flown what he/she should do before boarding a plane. 2) Talk about the place where you live using the following grid: . – What is your town
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English
I urgently need to revise these sentences. Could you please help me? 1) In my family we are six of us: my father, my mother etc. 2) I like very much playing instruments. I don't like doing shopping. I like lots of sports. 3) My mum usually cooks breakfast
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I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) Some pupils haven't received any emails from their partners yet. Could you spur them to answer? 2) As you suggested, I've asked my students, who haven't got a partner yet, to forward their emails
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English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. 1) Do you intend to start the project before Christmas? 2) I need to know which and how many students you are going to involve. 3) What do you think of our proposal of including 20 students from year 11? 4) I
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Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. 1) I'm pleased to read that English is and will remain the lingua franca of the project. For this reason, we'd like to vary a few sentences in your application form. In particular, this sentence: 2)
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English
The following items are run-on sentences. Revise each item either by making two complete sentences, or by adding a conjunctive adverb or semicolon. Change the punctuation and capitalization as necessary. Make all corrections on the sentences below. I was
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english
Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate the other? The hurricane destroyed some oil rigs. Fuel prices rose.
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Writing
31. I had hoped the police would blame Bruce, not ___. __ me __ myself __ mineself __I 32. Some interviewers ____ have a clear sense of what they want in an employee, ask very tough questions. __ who __, who __ which __ that 33. A venture capitalist has to
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I still have more sentences to check. I really hope you can revise them, too. 1) Revise all your sentences orally. 2) Bring the government down (and bring down the government) 3) He stopped to take on the students (to take the students on is possible?) 4)
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English - help needed
Posted by annie on Wednesday, October 13, 2010 at 4:29pm. Are the following sentences semantically / gramatically correct? 1)Alert the supervisor to any defective material found. 2)Some equipment have been taken away for inspection. After inspection,
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English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you very much! 1) On my first days of holiday I read a book, tidied my room and helped my mum to make buiscuits for all our family. 2) On Christmas Eve I went to the gym to do my callisthenics practice.
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English
In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.) Revise the
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English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences, too. I made some variations, but I have to be sure that everything is OK. I don't know if sentence 1 can make sense. 1) Two philosophical positions, which remain unreconciled in Hamlet's monologue, are
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English
I urgently need you to help me,write five sentences about why you think knowledge of English language registers will be important in accounting and finance.
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Foreign languages
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) We are leaving for Rome tomorrow morning at 7.30 am. 2) We are meeting at the entrance of the bypass (ring road/orbital road) at 7.15 3) The bus journey will last about six
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English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences, please. 1) The ghost of Hamlet’s father appears in front of him and Horatio because he wants to explain how he was killed and who killed him. 2) The play ends with the deaths of Laertes , the King, Queen
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English
I urgently need to revise a few sentences containing reflexive pronouns. I really hope you can help me. 1) I was last proud of myself when I won a swimming competition. I (once) blamed one of my friends for telling me a lie. 2) I depend on my parents.
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English
Sentence number 5 was incomplete. I think I should leave out "in part two". I urgently need you to have a look at these other sentences, too 1) I hope you can help me find a Scottish school which is interested in a partnership with our school. 2) In the
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Art
Writeacher, I urgently need to revise these sentences. I really hope you can help me. 1) Ads can change and can wash the minds of children. Some years ago people used to switch channels to avoid ads, but we do it less and less 2) Nowadays most people
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Art
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you very much. 1) In the past when adverts came on TV the majority of people used to turn down the volume or to switch channels (or switch over to another channel). However, they don’t do this now. 2)
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Writing
Part III: Revision In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.)
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English
I'll revise the sentences and then I'll post them back to you. Can you please suggest a site where all reporting verbs (to be used in indirect speech, especially when giving instructions or advice) are listed? I don't want to use "tell, ask" all the time.
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Art
Could you please revise the following sentences? Thank you. Shall I consider both sentences as correct? 1) I was having dinner / I had been having dinner when the telephone rang. 2)He told me he had lost his car keys and that he wanted me to go and pick
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you very much. 1) Think about a TV programme among the ones analyzed in class. Briefly describe what it was about, what was happening in it and if you would recommend it. 2) Give a brief definition of the
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English
Revise the following sentences to remove all pronoun errors. 41. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork. 42. When a teacher writes an exam, they think about what aspects of student learning they want to test.
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grammar
Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate to the other. People know they are going to have to retire; they often do not save enough money to do so comfortably. (this one is my answer, but I like the second one better)
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grammar
revise the following sentences to eliminate faulty sentence structure, making them clear and grammatically need help with the following sentences: An effective Web site is well designed, provides useful information, and links are given to other relevant
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English
I forgot to include the following sentences. Could you please check these other sentences, too. 1) Rewrite the exercise three times after learning the use of reporting verbs. 2) Revise carefully the verbs followed by the infinitive and the gerund in your
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English
Writeacher, I urgently need to email the our partner the following things, to make sure he will make the changes. 1) As there are several pages to check , I won't be able to revise everything by this evening. 2) I made just a few changes in the linguistic
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English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. In particular, I don't think sentence 2 is grammatically correct. Thank you. 1) In "Macbeth", as in many of his comedies and tragedies, Shakespeare offers a profound reflection on a theme which is both modern
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English
I urgently need you to help me express the following sentences. Thank you. Express your agreement (?) with the statements listed below (Or Agree with..) 1) My friend doesn't like Maths. I've been to Spain. I got a bad mark in my exam. I haven't got any
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English (Writeacher)
How should I revise these sentences so that they are not as long but still are three sentences? "Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the
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English
Writeacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you. I need you to check if the instructions are correct. 1. Complete the sentences with the correct form of the verb in brackets. 2. Turn the sentences into the passive. Mention the agent
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences. I included my doubts in parentheses. Thank you. 1) The bride, as red as a rose, has entered into (?) the hall (OR the hall /without into) 2) The ice split as (?) the sound of thunder and the helmsman steered
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English
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. I thank you very much for your help 1) They prophesy that Banquo will be father to a line of kings. The witches also tell him that no man born of woman can hurt him. 2) What does Shakespeare say (write) in the
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English
I urgently need your to revise these statements. Thank you. 1) Our science teachers are enthusiastic about the idea of carrying out a common science project in English with both your and the French school. 2) However, the head of our science department
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grammar
Part III: Revision In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.)
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English
A friend of mine wrote these sentences as part of a test. She told me the correct phrases should be: glow up together have/host a party become/be friends send e-mails write letters go on a blind date talk on the phone Actually, I don't know the meaning of
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ENGLISH
Formal essay topic sentence guidelines: 1.) Topic sen. must be debatable, or, at the very least, worthy of discussion. They should not present straight facts with which most people would readily agree, nor should they be general statements about life. 2.)
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English
I urgently need to know your opinion on this: Complete the sentences with the missing phrases: 1) g..... u.... together. 2) b....... friends 3) ......... on the phone 4) h......... a party How would you complete the phrases? Where .....live now? Where do
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English
I urgently need you to check these few sentences. Thank you 1)Alonso is desperate because he thinks his son drowned. (I'm not sure whether it is a simple past of drown, or the past partiple, to be drowned?) 2) At the end Prospero and Antonio are
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English
I urgently need you to check these two sentences!! Thank you. 1) Do you need a detailed presentation of the school? 2) The other schools I worked for have always paid (rewarded/remunerated) both my involvement and transtlation activities (?) before and
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English
I urgently need you to revise this email. Thank you very much in advance. 1) My science colleague is willing to work on a project in English concerning ecology with some of her students in the years 10-11. 2) Though we haven't got a bilingual branch at the
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English
I urgently need you to revise this paragraph on dinosaurs. I need to simplify it using synonyms. 1) Whatever killed off (synonym??) the dinosaurs almost certainly had a bearing (I need a proper synonym) on the rest of the mass extinction, which was on a
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English (Writeacher)
How should revise these sentences so that they are still three sentences? "Ten years after the Trojan War, Odysseus departs from the goddess Calypso's island and arrives in Phoenicia, ruled by Alcinous. Offering Odysseus a ship to return him to his
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you. Rephrase the following sentences: 1) Hamlet is debating whether it is better to act or to abstain from action. 2) Hamlet is wondering (or he wonders?) whether it is better to act or not to act. 3) He
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English
Hello, I have to revise these sentences for dangling modifiers and I wanted to see if I did it correctly. First sentence: Flying over the oak tree, the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised it to: Damagins his crops, the
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English
I urgently need to check this paragraph. I need to revise word choice, punctuation, sentence connectors and grammar. I really hope you can help me. 1) The 18-th century novels represent the contemporary middle-class and its virtues and features; so the
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you very much. 1) I received the address of your school from a university student I met during my summer vacation in Madrid. 2) We are currently looking for a school interested in joining us in a
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grammar check
Please check and let me know which ones are wrong Thank you Tom 31.I had hoped the police would blame Bruce, not ___. _x_ me __ myself __ mineself __I 32.Some interviewers ____ have a clear sense of what they want in an employee, ask very tough questions.
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Language
Revise the following sentences so you could present them in a report to your Learning Coach. Be sure to remove any informal language and use jargon where appropriate. Today I learned some sick stuff about volcanoes! The hot, dangerous stuff comes outta the
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English
I left out a few more sentences I urgently need you to check. 1) Cowardice is the ability to stay alive and bear the pain of human condition. 2) What does the Latin term quietus mean? (I don't know how to express this) 3) A quietus was a statement which
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English
I forgot to include the following four sentences. 1)In my village there isn't a market. There is one in the next village called "Piave" and it is held on Monday mornings. 2)My parents always complain about my untidiness 3)I do the washing-up using a
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English
Can you please check these sentences for me? Thank you very much. 1)Another important theme is that of equivocation.The witches confuse good and bad (better evil). They are unable to distinguish between good and evil. 2) Closely connected to the theme of
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Art
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you. 1) Focus on Richardson’s Pamela and answer briefly the following questions. 2) What does Pamela recount to her mum in letter XV? 3) What does Mr B accuse her of and how does she apologize herself
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Language Arts
Use the fallowing sentences and use vivid verbs and adjective to rewrite the sentences. The sentences that I'm having problem with is : I play video game. Could anyone give me idea on how to improve that sentences? Thanks
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college english
I have to revise sentences to eliminate illogical or overused coordination. Are the following sentences correct? Thanks! The object of fencing is to be the first to touch the opponent five times, and a "president," who is sometimes assisted by a number of
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English
I urgently need to know if the following sentences are all possible. Thank you. 1)I didn't know your address but I manged to/was able to/ (but not could) find you. 2) When I was young, I was able/could play the guitar quite well. 3) I called Mary many
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences, please. 1) How long have you know Peter? I' ve known him for two years, since I moved to Paris. 2) We'll arrive late unless we take a taxi. 3) We won't start dinner until/as long as your father doesn't arrive.
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English
Here are some more sentences on school rules I'd like you to revise. Thank you very much for all. 1) You are not allowed to change your sitting order unlesstold by your tutor. You have to sit in the same place when you are in the linguistic laboratory.(how
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English
I urgently need you to check these few sentences, Writeacher. Thank you very much. 1) I'm happy (pleased) to read (know) that you have found colleagues interested in setting up an email partnership among our students. 2) My students are all looking forward
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you. 1) I sort my rubbish into three separate containers at home. One is for paper; one is for plastic and one is for regular kitchen rubbish. 2) Then, I put my sorted rubbish (litter/trash) into the
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English
I urgently need you to revise this short summary. Thank you. 1) Robinson travelled twice two Africa. On his first voyage to Africa they were caught in a storm but they eventually saw a boat, jumped onto it and saved their lives. 2) On his second voyage he
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English / Grammar
I need help with the following grammar exercise. Rewrite the following sentences, focusing on the grammar area specified above the sentence. If the sentence is already correct, write No Change. Punctuating Sentences The goose bit the mailman on the leg.
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English
Writeacher, Can you please check these sentences. I urgently need to know the difference in meaning among the various sentences. 1) She often makes herself pasta. (= She often makes pasta for herself) She often makes pasta herself. (= She often makes pasta
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English
Can someone please help me urgent. I need to rewrite theses two sentences and eliminate unethical aspects. The service contract...on the whole...applied to upgrades. 2. All our costs were within fair-use guidelines. 1. Upgrades were applied to the service
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English
I urgently need you to revise these questions as a post-reading activity. Can you please check the questions? 1) Jamal is planning a trip around the world on his motorbike with his friend Simon. Possible question: Is Jammal travelling alone/on his own? 2)
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English
Writacher, I urgently need you to check these sentences. Thank you very much. 1.The new teacher arrives on Tuesday for his first lesson. 2.We are meeting our friends in the square at 3 o’clock and then we are going to the disco together. 3.Tomorrow it
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English
I urgently need help with a couple of sentences. Can you also check my previous post. I need to prepare the letter for tomorrow. Thank you. 1) The lady at the bottom left of the photo (is "in" the bottom a mistake when describing a photo?) 2) How long is
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English
I urgently need help with a couple of sentences. Can you also check my previous post. I need to prepare the letter for tomorrow. Thank you. 1) The lady at the bottom left of the photo (is "in" the bottom a mistake when describing a photo?) 2) How long is
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English
I urgently need you to revise this paragraph. Thank you very much in advance. 1) Dickens goes on to describe its residents. They look like one another and they are condemned to do the same monotonous work day after day with no possibility of escaping their
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences, please! 1) My favourite places are the woods (??).I live in a little village surrounded by a hilly landscape. 2) More than one thousand people live there (or here?). 3) I'd prefer to live in Milan even if (??)
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english
I having problems these sentences on sentence fragments and run-on sentences, including both fused sentences and comma splices and how to revise them and explain the choices that have been made. This is the sentence: When I was in high school I never
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences. 1) Tourists spend their holiday in bed and breakfasts and go to restaurants. 2) I like the countryside because the air is cleaner and the atmosphere is quieter.There is always something to do, like going for a
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences, too. Thank you. 1) Hi Andrew, how are you? I ‘m very well because I spent a very beautiful weekend with both my family and my friends. 2) On Saturday morning I played tennis with my father whereas in the
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foreign languages
I need you help to revise a few sentences on history. Thank you, Writeacher. 1) The Eighteenth Amendment to the Constitution, which was imposed (??) in the twenties , prohibited the manufacture, consumption and import of alcohol. 2)This drastic step (also
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english
revise the following sentences to eliminate shifts in tense, mood, voice or person. 7. The flight attendant said, "please turn off all electronic devices," but that we could use them again after takeoff. 8. The real estate market was was softer than it has
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university of phoenix
I have to Write several sentences describing a recent interaction with a friend or family member about personal finance or credit cards. This interaction may be imagined or real. Use at least five different pronouns, adverbs, and adjectives in your
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English
Writeacher, here are my sentences on phrasal verbs I urgently need you to check. Thank you. 1) I can’t get around to thanking you for your hospitality.I’ll get back at you for being so rude to me. 2) When will you get around to clearing your room?He is
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English
I urgently need you to check these sentences for me because I made some variations. Thank you very much. 1) The head of our science department would like to discuss the theme in further detail with you before deciding which students to include in the
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English
Could you please revise the following sentences, please? 1) As a matter of fact, two among our science teachers are willing to partake in the project where English would be the lingua franca. 2) Translate the following words into English, then choose two