1. English

    I need a good hook for an essay. The essay's about being a peer for the children at my school who are mantally disabled. My 1st paragraph is about what I do in the class, 2nd is about the kids, & 3rd is about special olumpics. Help PLEASEE!!!??
  2. peer reviewing essay

    Hi, I have two assignments I have to submit to my AP US History teacher for next year by June 2nd. The first part is to explain why I should be in the class in a one page essay with size 11 font and 1.5 spacing. Could someone please read through my essay
  3. Example Essays

    Mkay, I have a five paragraph essay due by tommorow. Its to be an example essay, but I don't have a idea OR a plan on what to write. I am confused {confuzzled} and am looking for a fairly easy example essay to write. I will need to use the Seven Sentence
  4. English

    Im not sure where to find a website that can help me write a "hook" in my 1st paragraph in my essay please
  5. English Essay

    I'm writing an essay for To Kill A Mockingbird and the claim I came up for my essay is "Children are never too young to understand the realities of life." I'm writing the extended paragraph right now where I have to come up with a good example from the
  6. Language Arts

    I have to write a personal essay and I was wondering if someone could peer revise my first paragraph: The school bell rang. Clusters of children jumped off playground equipment and sped through the schoolyard. I clung to my father’s leg even tighter. He
  7. English-Ms. Sue

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  8. English

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  9. Literature

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  10. English

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  11. Quotes in essays

    I want to put a quote at the very beginning of my essay. How do I go about doing that? Should it be the same or a smaller font than the rest of my essay? I'm planning on putting the quote, then starting a new paragraph to begin the actual essay. Should I
  12. Social studies

    i need to make an essay about two stories 1st- the tell tale heart 2nd- the speckled band, sherlock holmes story the only problem is the essay needs to be about what they have in common and what differences they have and mix it into paragraphs any help?
  13. English

    Writing an argument essay on why Michael Jackson is the worlds greatest entertainer of all time. Some counter arguments I thought of are how people can say he was "back in his time" but not anymore, and i can back it up with stating facts. I have written
  14. writing (persuasive essay)

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  15. English

    As a general rule, where in your essay is it best to place your thesis statement? A. In the first, introductory paragraph of the essay B. Anywhere at all, because the best thesis statement is implied, not specified C. In the second or third paragraph of
  16. English

    Can someone give me or tell me how I can go about writing a good attention getter 1st sentence for my 5-paragraph essay on the book The Crucible? Thanks
  17. essay

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  18. english

    you are to write a one or two paragraph essay on a topic of your choice. can i get some guidence and maybe a couple of good topics i should write about. i don't even know how to write a one or two paragraph essay. like how long should the intro be and the
  19. english

    I am writing a five paragraph essay for my freshmen comp. class on the difference between High school and college. I don't know where to start, so far i have this as an introductory sentence. Can you please tell me what i should change, and help me on to
  20. English

    What 3 elements and introductory paragraph in an essay have? 1 hook 2 thesis statement 3????????
  21. personal essay

    i finished writing my intro and i'm working on writing my second paragraph in which i have to narrate my story as if i was telling it to another person. Here I go: For eight years, i was born and raised in India. My family and i lived in an four story
  22. world issues- amazon deforestation

    Hi. I was assigned an essay that I have to get done by 2morrow. It is about Amazon rainforest deforestation. I have to sum everything up into 3 paragraphs. 1st paragraph- tell what's happening here; I already did this. 2nd & 3rd paragraphs- describe how
  23. 7th Grade English

    I have this project for english about the PTA Reflections. Ok you see we have to write a 5 paragraph essay in which I discuss what you believe diversity means. Be sure yo have a topic sentence for each new paragraph, and provide supporting details. Please
  24. Question about college application

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  25. ms.sue english check

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  26. english

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  27. english

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  28. Math ?

    I have a dilemma; my English professor doesn’t give us our grades so I currently don’t know what percent I am at in the class. I really need to know since I need to know if I’ll be passing or not. He doesn’t grade anything with percent’s, and
  29. English

    Ok so I have to do a comparative essay on a book and a film (I chose The Hobbit) .This is a comparison essay exploring to what degree an inherent film is discussed and how it relates to an aspect of the human condition. So my theme is revenge and the
  30. Essay Help

    Could you please help me form an introduction paragraph for my essay? It's a comparison and contrast essay, where I am comparing two songs. I need help! Thank you.
  31. SS8R: National Convention: The Female Voice Essay

    I have this assignment for my Social Studies class about the National Convention. Well most of you know about the National Convention thing since you watch Republicans or Democratic. The essay is focusing on First Lady Michelle Obama and Ann Romney. They
  32. english

    What's a surprising statement about William Shakespeare that can be used as a hook in an essay? I can't seem to find any and my essay is starting to sound quite repetitive lol.
  33. English

    What is a PERFECT essay about Sandy Hook Elementary School?
  34. English

    A body paragraph in an essay is one that: A. expounds upon the thesis of the essay. B. brings closure to the piece. C. features footnoted information. D. introduces the ideas that will be covered in the essay. A
  35. Conversational Essay

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  36. read essay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    read my essay and tell me if its good Industrialization, which followed the Civil War, had a big impact in the United States. The workers suffered a great deal. They worked hard and lived in poor conditions. Children also suffered; children had no
  37. English

    i have to do an essay analysis and it's asking me for the topic sentence, style of essay, supporting points, and a paragraph response. I have a few questions. 1. how do you find the topic sentence? 2. what's style of essay, and how do you find that? 3.
  38. ENGLISH Correcting #5,6,8 & 9

    5)Both Ada and Phil are evaluating their thesis statement, topic sentences, and evidence. If Ada finds that her essay doesn't have a thesis statement identifying the topic of the essay, Ada will reread the essay and decide what the main point of the essay.
  39. Essay

    What main points do you think I should include in my essay ("Why I should be in this advanced class")? I've written most of it. The topic was so general that I am not sure that I've hit all the points I should have. Could you provide some points that you
  40. geography

    what will be a good hook for an essay about ancient india and the caste system? help
  41. english help please!!

    What does the hook of a paragraph do? It concludes the essay. It grabs readers' attention. It proves a difficult point. It continues an argument is it b pls help
  42. Reading

    Hi, Can someone tell me a good hook for a compare and contrast essay. Topic:- IPOD Vs. IPHONE, Thanks!!
  43. English - Macbeth

    I have a little trouble understanding my essay question. This question is: Is Macbeth a tragic hero according to the classical definition of the term or is he merely a monster? Does Shakespeare succeed in creating sympathy for Macbeth? To repsond to this
  44. History

    I have to write an essay about if I think Columbus Day should be celebrated or not. I have decided to take the approach talking about how he really wasn't the first to discover America, unlike kids are taught in elementary school. The problem is, who
  45. Literature

    I'm writing an essay comparing the class system in Brave New World to the class system in our society...I know exactly what my body paragraph will be about but I'm having trouble writing an introduction...can someone please point me in a good direction.
  46. Essay

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  47. Exposition: How-to Essay (Writeacher)

    I have been assigned to write a 3-paragraph how-to essay. Should I number each paragraph? If not, why?
  48. Literature

    This essay should have 5 paragraphs. In the 1st paragraph it must contain: Attention-grabbing beginning. Description of issue. Opinion Statement. In the 2,3, 4 paragraph should contain: Different reasons for each paragraph. Evidence to support. In the 5th
  49. English 8R - Business Letter Assignment Help!

    I have this assignment for my English class. We have to write a business letter to a someone, it can be famous or not. The best part is that we can actually send it to them. So I choose Obama. It's a two paragraph letter. The 1st paragraph, we have to
  50. English

    I need help with starting my essay. These are the organization of my essay. I am not sure what to put for paragraph #2. *Broad subject-My name *Limited Topic for thesis statement-Learning to cope with my height *Main Idea about this topic- Advantages of
  51. 10th grade english

    Write an essay comparing Baldwin's account of the Titanic with Rosenthal's account of his visit to Auschwitz.In your paragraph, explain how the tone and purpose of each essay is different. Support your argument with at least one example from each essay.
  52. english

    Which of the following techniques would be best used to present constructive feedback on a draft of an essay to a peer? A. Rewrite sections for your peer B. Only write notes on the things you like about it C. Point out the negative aspects so your peer can
  53. English

    Which of the following techniques would be best used to present constructive feedback on a draft of an essay to a peer? A. Rewrite sections for your peer B. Only write notes on the things you like about it C. Point out the negative aspects so your peer can
  54. English - ms. sue

    thanks ms. sue for reading story yesterday, i need help writing essay that be on Wat expense be paid by beings & by society 4 their unhesitating approval of tradition or brutal social rituals. Do there be rituals that have outlasted their initial
  55. ESSAY WRITING

    I have to do an essay analysis and it's asking me for the topic sentence, supporting points, and a paragraph response. I have a few questions. topic sentence, how do you know which is the correct one? supporting points, is it in your opinion? and how would
  56. english

    I need help with this assignment I need to satarize something from the 21st century and exaggerate it. I have no Idea how to start it, I wanted to do something about parenting. Thanks Look at the differences between teenagers clothing in the 80's and
  57. EDU 490 Interdisciplinary Capstone

    Shelby teaches 9th grade Social Studies at a small high school in the rural plains of Kansas. Most of her students are farm kids who will end up working their parents’ farms for the duration of their time in Kansas. In order to make use of the abundant
  58. English

    Need help with my story. Please check if my Anecdote is story or merely a report,second paragraph anazlyze the anecdote, explaining how illustrates the thesis. How can I make my essay 1000 words long? Thank you. sorry its kind a long questions. My quote is
  59. english

    Could I get like a character essay outline? Like what I should have in my 1st, 2nd, 3rd, sentence, etc. How to start it off and flow towars the end? Thanks!
  60. COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY-Please Proofread

    1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising,
  61. Probability

    A large governmental survey of dental care among children 2 to 17 years old found the following distribution of times since last visit to the dentist: (1st column)Time since last visit (1st column)6 months or less (1st column)>6 months but no more than
  62. ESSAY

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  63. Social Studies

    HELP!! I am writing an essay about comparing and contrasting slaves and indentured servants, and I need help coming up with a conclusion paragraph!! Anyone have ANY IDEAS?!?!?!?!? Your concluding paragraph should not introduce any new information. It
  64. english

    Hi. Can you help me with my homework? I have to write a 5 paragraph essay that is due to tomorrow. It is about: should us 5th readers have fun Fridays. But what I mostly need help is how to write a 5 paragraph essay. Thank you for your help. Have a nice
  65. english

    Question: 2 of 5: Which topic would a writer be least likely to ask a peer reviewer to comment on?Select one of the options below as your answer:A. use of subordinate clauses within the essay B. personal experiences used to support a pointC. how the body
  66. band essay?

    I have to write an essay on why I deserve a scholarship for our band class trip to Puerto Rico, I was wondering what English teachers would be looking at/for in this essay and how long it should roughly be
  67. Literature Essay (Writeacher)

    Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I
  68. Literature Essay (Writeacher)

    Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I
  69. High School English

    I have to write an essay comparing how fear is used in Lord of the Flies and Animal Farm. It is going to be in class tomorrow on my final exam. So far I have my three paragraphs: Fear of outside sources/unknown, fear of self, and fear of others. I have
  70. literture

    look around at your local community, how easily do disabled people get around. what needs to be chnged. i need to write a persuasive essay, about this, like what needs to be changed to make it easier for disabled people to get around. please just give me
  71. Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)

    Write a 3-paragraph Biographical Essay. Discuss your experiences with summmer: the things you enjoyed and the things you missed about school. I am beginning to simplfy my writting, as Bob suggested. However, I am going to sumbit the only the first
  72. fourth grade writing

    Could someone give me some good pointers on how to write a good essay. Or give me a good website that gives advice only. I don't want anyone to do it for me. I just want to do a really good job on my first essay.
  73. English Essay Title

    What would a good essay title be if I'm writing an essay about a character in a book who is torn between two conflicting forces?
  74. Essay

    I am writing an essay and want to know, how many years do we spend in school? Starting from kindergarten to the end of high school.
  75. English

    Which of the following is a good rule to follow when proofreading an essay? A. Scan the essay twice, once for organization and once for surface errors. B. Ask your best friend to critique your essay. C. Use the computer's spell-check and grammar-check
  76. English+Essay

    I have to write an essay, but I have no idea how to start it. It says that my essay has to be MLA formatted, and only 3/4 to 1 page long. 2 page is the longest it can be and must be double placed. Using MLA format, there's is no way for me a write a proper
  77. composition

    In Weeks 9 and 10, you will develop an essay using definition as the rhetorical strategy. This week, you will complete your essay. Review the criteria for a definition essay. Continue with the essay you started in Week 9. Expand your definition by
  78. Business

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  79. English L.A.

    Which of the following best describes an expository essay? a. An essay that uses casual, conversational language. b. An essay that tells a story about a real-life experience. c. An essay that explains an idea by breaking it down. d. An essay that uses
  80. Literature/ficional essay

    i have to write a fictional essay focused on character motivation this is my plot:You meet someone who looks very jovial and happy and you fall in love only to realize that there are innumerable problems in his life. You feel cheated and think he has
  81. educational technology

    what are the dehumanizing effects of war in violence, poverty and sex exploitation of women and children? please answer this question: what are the dehumanizing effects of war in violence, poverty and sex exploitation of women and children? thanks in
  82. World Lit.

    I am about to write an essay on How does the rulling government affect the daily lives of those in afghnistan? (in a Thousand Slendid Suns). what is a good thesis statement and a hook for this.
  83. English essay

    I am not very good at writing essays and I am having trouble with my first paragraph of a persuasive essay on smoking. Could you please give me feedback on what i could fix to make it better? thank you! We’ve all seen them, the person that is smoking in
  84. English--Essay help

    I'm in need of some help. What do you think would be a good thesis statement for and essay on abortion pro-life? I have thought about this for at least an hour now, and can't come up with anything that is somewhat good....Ideas would be greatly appreciated
  85. Literature

    I have to write a persuasive essay on the topic of school uniforms. This is what I have written; Please tell me how I can fix it, and give me some feedback. Thanks School Uniforms---Good or Bad? “This sucks!” This phrase could be heard throughout the
  86. English

    I have a question regarding my intro paragraph for my essay, this is MLA format. If I have a quotation at the beginning of my essay and it is longer than 4 lines, what I say next following the quotation, the first sentence, does it have to be indented?
  87. Chemistry/English

    In chemistry we are writing a paper about an inventor.. We have to have some back ground info.. what they invited. how there time affected there inventions and if there inventions where a great success and so on so forth. What would be a good way to set
  88. Expositon: How-to Essay

    I have been assigned to write an how-to essay that consists of 3 paragraphs. Should I number each paragraph?
  89. English essay

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  90. persusasive essay

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  91. psychology

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  92. Essay

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  93. English

    Can someone read my eight sentence paragraph. A high school diploma is very important to me. With a high school diploma I can show my children that your never to old to go back to school. Which will set a good example for my children to show them they need
  94. Essay on Marriage and Living Together

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  95. Social Studies 7R - DBQ Essay

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  96. Three Posts Below

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  97. Essay need editing and suggestions

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  98. essay writing

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  99. Essay#4 CONCLUSION

    In conclusion, I believe the University of Maryland offers a wonderful opportunity for me for me to experience a mix of quality education and a richly diverse environment. At the University of Maryland, I expect to be involved in a wide variety of clubs
  100. English!

    i need help finding couple of The Qualifications Necessary to Success in Life for my essay...i got 2...which are good attitude and good education(in the "good education" paragraph i added jobs and money)...thnx!