1. english

    I think that paragraph 3 is more effective than paragraph 1 because it is structured in a better manner and has better rhythm than paragraph1. It also has better structures sentences than paragraph 1. For example in paragraph 1 sentences like, ‘My Aunt

    asked by rene on November 18, 2010
  2. English

    3. PART B: Which phrase from the text best supports the answer to Part A? A. “intending any mischief” (Paragraph 8) B. “came to do Midas a favor” (Paragraph 8) C. “the stranger gazed about the room” (Paragraph 9) D. “glistened upon all the

    asked by Im back on May 9, 2020
  3. English

    How do the styles and themes of “Theme for English B” and “Ballad of Birmingham” compare? Answer this question in at least a paragraph and make sure to cite examples from the text. Answer:

    asked by Liz on May 13, 2012
  4. English

    4. PART A: Which of the following best identifies a theme in the text? This is for the story the golden touch By Nathaniel Hawthorne A. Greed can have dire consequences. B. Love others more than you love yourself. C. Nature should be valued over riches. D.

    asked by Im back on May 7, 2020
  5. English

    1. Part A How is this expert of an expository essay organized? A) cause and effect B) compare and contrast C) problem and solution D) chronological order Part B Which paragraph from the excerpt best shows how the essay is organized? A) Paragraph 2 B)

    asked by Koala on December 7, 2018
  6. English/Writing

    5. Choose one of the topics listed below and write a five-sentence paragraph using chronological order to arrange the details of the paragraph. a. Signing on to my homepage is simple. b. Writing a paper takes patience and time. c. Let me explain how to

    asked by jackie rios on November 9, 2010
  7. English

    This article is Legend of Oedipus by Commonlit Staff One question asked me what the theme of The Legend of Oedipus I said free will and fate part B is asking for a quote the choices are A. “Many years later, Oedipus is told by a drunk that Polybus is not

    asked by HAHAHA on April 1, 2020
  8. ENGLISH--HELP

    Every sentence in the paragraph below violates some principle of good persuasive writing. Revise the paragraph, following the directions at the end of each sentence; use your imagination where necessary. Type the revised paragraph in the text box provided

    asked by Liam on April 12, 2012
  9. AP English Literature

    After jack proposes to Gwendolen, he is interviewed by Lady Bracknell to interpret whether he is a suitable marriage possibility for Gwendolen. This encounter with Lady Bracknell reveals all of the following except - Victorian Beliefs - Lady Bracknell's

    asked by Brighton on April 21, 2017
  10. English

    Can you please help me express these concepts in a simpler way? Thank you. 1)What do you call mistakes concerning the agreement of subject and verb? (Just grammar mistakes?) You have shifted from the past to the present when 2) In your paragraph you failed

    asked by Henry2 on July 5, 2011
  11. English

    I urgently need to change question 1 not including the adjective "Victorian". Can you help me? 1) Discuss the meaning of the adjective "Victorian" and outline the main values on which Victorian society was based. 2) Analyse (or outline)the main values on

    asked by Henry2 on June 24, 2011
  12. English IV Sr. Paper

    I need help with my thesis statement. So far I have: Emily Bronte was an unusual writer from the Victornian age, and her novel full violent romance. You have to have: General subject: Emily Bronte Limited Topic: Wuthering Heights Specific Focus: Victorian

    asked by Jessica on July 6, 2007
  13. Health

    Read the passage below, and then answer the questions that follow. "As Marty pulled away from the curb, he thought about Sina's answer. He didn't understand it. Her response was ambiguous. Marty thought that maybe she wouldn't skip school with him and his

    asked by Anonymous on October 17, 2013
  14. Com170

    • Then, on the same document, write a one paragraph analysis of about 150 words, in which you do the following: o Identify which of the two selected paragraphs was more effective, focusing on the writing elements rather than the opinions presented. o

    asked by Nicole on December 6, 2010
  15. english

    When an author writes a/an _______ question in a paragraph, he or she intends to answer it in the balance of the paragraph

    asked by cinnimon on January 8, 2015
  16. English

    Can you please check if these are correct? Thank you. 1) Outline briefly what the Romantics showed an interest in and what they reacted against. Refer then to how they viewed nature and man, with particular reference to childhood. 2) Describe how Kurtz's

    asked by Franco on February 7, 2011
  17. Spanish

    Write a short paragraph explaining some details about school practices and/or activities in schools in the Spanish-speaking world. I am a bit confused about what they mean for the activities, do they want after school Spanish activities or what?

    asked by Anonymous on November 14, 2017
  18. English

    Every sentence in the paragraph below violates some principle of good persuasive writing. Revise the paragraph, following the directions at the end of each sentence; use your imagination where necessary. Type the revised paragraph in the text box provided

    asked by Josh on May 1, 2013
  19. English

    How does Victorian School compare to INSPIRE? the answer should be a Paragraph. I need it ASAP!

    asked by BTS_Army on December 7, 2018
  20. ELA

    Your assignment for this portfolio is to do the following: research the Victorian period in England. You can focus on work, schools, historical events, cultural details, or holiday traditions. Compare the Victorian period to modern day life.

    asked by shadow on May 6, 2017
  21. English

    I forgot to include a few more things. I follow your suggestions. Thank you. 1) Briefly outline the main values on which Victorian society was based. Explain then the role of women and the Victorian (??) view of the family. 2) In your previous post you

    asked by Henry2 on June 24, 2011
  22. English

    Thank you very much. So the sentence should be: 1) Briefly outline the main values on which Victorian society was based. Then explain the role of women and the Victorian view of the family. What about this? 2) Then explain the role of women and the middle

    asked by Henry2 on June 24, 2011
  23. business english

    writing a short paragraph on applying for a job as a medical office assistant tell me what can inspire me or guided me through

    asked by annesha on January 21, 2011
  24. LANGUAGE ARTS

    The topic is asking to research clothing in the Victorian period and then relate it to a Christmas carol and compare to today. Please help?

    asked by Justin on May 17, 2017
  25. English

    11. How does Moishe the Beadle’s experience in the Galician forest change him? Your response should be at least one paragraph long. (2 points) 12. What is the irony of Elie’s and his neighbors' joy in leaving the hot ghetto? Your response should be at

    asked by max on December 28, 2010
  26. la

    i dont understand compare the victorian period to modern day life like in christmas carol essay

    asked by michelle on May 16, 2017
  27. English

    Three very last questions for you. Thank you very much. (I made a few changes) 1) Outline the main values on which Victorian society was based. Then explain briefly the role of women and the Victorian view of the family. 2) Focus on the kind of technique

    asked by Henry2 on June 24, 2011
  28. English

    need help on the book night. 11. How does Moishe the Beadle’s experience in the Galician forest change him? Your response should be at least one paragraph long. (2 points) 12. What is the irony of Elie’s and his neighbors' joy in leaving the hot

    asked by love on December 28, 2010
  29. English

    Language Analysis Please help me find persuasive techniques/statements in the following article.. I've never done this before, and I've "stewed" over the subject for the last couple of days, but I'm absolutely incensed that the Victorian Government will be

    asked by David on March 17, 2010
  30. English

    Hi im writing a short story, how would i format this paragraph. Can i keep it as one paragraph or should i separate the Quotation into its own pargraph? im confused... As she boarded the shuttle, she noticed two girls who looked about her age. She wondered

    asked by Jon on December 17, 2009
  31. L.A

    I'm writing a paragraph to compare and contrast a story character and me, how should I start the paragraph? Thanks

    asked by Shadow on April 12, 2010
  32. English

    Just to be sure that everything is OK. 1) Explain the meaning of the word compromise (written in italics) applied to the Victorian way of life. Then outline briefly the main features of Victorian society. 2) I'm e-mailing to you (I'm sending you this

    asked by Henry2 on June 26, 2011
  33. 7th grade science

    compare and contrast phenotypes and genotypes (give a paragraph answer)

    asked by mary on December 13, 2009
  34. English 4

    Victorian era and Victorian England are the same ?

    asked by Ciara on April 28, 2015
  35. english

    I am writing a five paragraph essay for my freshmen comp. class on the difference between High school and college. I don't know where to start, so far i have this as an introductory sentence. Can you please tell me what i should change, and help me on to

    asked by layla on January 25, 2010
  36. english

    I have to write a research paper.My paper topic is Explain how the treatment of women in Dicken's novel Hard Times reflects the Victorian age. I SHOULD HAVE A CLEAR THESIS IN THE INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH, A CLEAR LINE OF DEVELOPMent and arguments.Title has

    asked by jessy on May 19, 2007
  37. English

    I have to write a 5 paragraph comparison and contrast essay on Agamemnon, Hamlet, and The Love song of J. Alfred Prufrock. When writing this, do I compare all three stories at once in each paragraph as well as their differences in each of the 3 body

    asked by Liz on October 11, 2014
  38. HUM 176

    Choose the biggest breaking story of the moment. · · Compare and contrast coverage. Compare and contrast information in the stories as well as how are they presented. · Answer the following questions: o What links are included? o How does the commentary

    asked by Davina on September 11, 2011
  39. Comm155

    Need help changing my passive voice words in my academic paragraph... In comparing paragraphs one and two, the flow and comprehension of paragraph two was much better. In paragraph one the author seemed to just be telling the facts instead of explaining

    asked by Mama on July 16, 2011
  40. Books

    I want to read a classic that will inspire me to think outside of the box, what should i read. I am a freshman in High School.

    asked by Lisa on November 9, 2008
  41. ela

    could anyone help me answer this question , plz , thank you The following question is about the poem " We are cool " 3. Alliteration , or repeated consonant sounds , is used in this poem to ( 1point ) A . compare beginning and ending sounds b. create a

    asked by lovey on February 24, 2014
  42. Foreign languages

    Thank you very much, Writeacher. I need to rephrase sentence 1. I also wonder if you could help me find online tests on verbs followed by the gerund/infinitive and on reporting verbs (possibly different from say, tell, ask). Thank you very much! 1) Briefly

    asked by Mike on June 18, 2012
  43. English

    I am doing a compare and compassion essay. One paragraph has be about Midwest Food and the next paragraph about the South Food.How to add simlar and differences to each of this paragraphs?

    asked by m on March 13, 2015
  44. History

    Compare and contrast the challenges and opportunities available to immigrants in the north and west in the period 1865-1910(compare in one paragraph and contrast in another )

    asked by Lula on February 26, 2019
  45. college chemistry

    In class, we discussed the titration of a 50.0 mL sample of 0.100 M HCL with a 0.100 M solution of NaOH. How would this system change if we used a 0.100 M solution of Sr(OH)2 instead of NaOH? To answer this question, complete each of the following: a) What

    asked by Aubree on April 21, 2010
  46. Reading, Writing

    If you're creating an opening paragraph and you present supporting details in the beginning, where in the paragraph is you topic sentence, mostly likely? A. In the second sentence B. In the next paragraph C. In the first sentence D. At the end of the

    asked by Basti on November 24, 2015
  47. English Language & Composition

    I need help on what my body paragraphs could talk about. My intro talks about how surveillance technologies can possibly threat civil liberties. I picked quotes from the sources I had to use that could help me in this essay. What are 3 ideas I can say in

    asked by Diana on November 1, 2015
  48. Grammar

    I am writing a compare and contrast essay between private school and public school can you help me write it

    asked by Erin on January 23, 2017
  49. English

    PLEASE HELP I DON'T EVEN GET THIS QUESTION AND I'M BREAKING DOWN INTO A NERVES WRECK PLEASE DO ANYTHING YOU CAN MAYBE EVEN GIVE ME THE ANSWER IDK PLEASE HELP!!!! In both, "Miracles," and, "in Just-," the poets use images that appeal to the senses. In a

    asked by Bamboo on March 8, 2019
  50. Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)

    Write a 3-paragraph Biographical Essay. Discuss your experiences with summmer: the things you enjoyed and the things you missed about school. I am beginning to simplfy my writting, as Bob suggested. However, I am going to sumbit the only the first

    asked by Anonymous on April 5, 2014
  51. spanish sra jmcguin

    this is the assignment I'm supposed to do a draft essay on helping a high school senior with improving his grades. 3 recommendation as his friend and there explanations, along with introduction and conclusion sentences. Only one paragraph the next posting

    asked by sam help please on January 30, 2009
  52. Stat

    Translate the following events into set notation using the symbols A and B, complement, union, intersection. Also give the probability of the event as determined from the table above. Fill in the table below with these values. {If you cannot construct the

    asked by Happy on June 6, 2011
  53. HISTORY

    (This homework question was removed due to a copyright claim submitted by K12 Inc.) You do NOT have to write me my paragraph, but what I would like is for you to answer each question next to a bullet-point so I can write my paragraph. For example, answer

    asked by Katie on January 15, 2011
  54. Com155Wk8

    Read the second paragraph of the synthesis passage. It may be found on pp. 38 & 39. Using your reading for the week and this paragraph in particular, answer the following questions. What is the key objective when writing a paragraph on synthesis? Do you

    asked by Anonymous on February 11, 2011
  55. Social Studies (URGENT)

    10. Why did many Native people start adapting to Victorian society? Can someone please help me answer this question? Thank you very much.

    asked by John on February 15, 2010
  56. english

    Below is a list of phrases giving reasons to support a topic sentence.Use the list to complete the following unfinished paragraph. Type the body of the paragraph in the text box below. Reasons *Excellent news coverage: sports events; club news;

    asked by Carlos on March 25, 2013
  57. English

    I urgently need you to chech the question and the answer to it. I considered your corrections. 1) Explain the meaning of the word compromise applied to the Victorian way of life. (Explain how the word compromise applied to the Victorian way of life). Then

    asked by Henry2 on June 26, 2011
  58. English

    Here are some more sentences I'm still doubtful about. Thank you very much! 1)Industry dealers, who had settle school lessons dedicated to workers' sons, didn't follow the law. 2) (Correction: Factory owners, who were forced by law to teach their

    asked by Mike on February 23, 2011
  59. HISTORY

    Explain what traces the rise of Japan from an isolated society to a major industrial and imperial power. Please help. I need to write a paragraph on this. As you know, don't write me a paragraph. But please answer my question, without links, enough so

    asked by Lanie on January 18, 2011
  60. english

    How can I make this a better five –sentence paragraph using chronological order to arrange the details of the paragraph? Signing to my homepage is simple. First I go to the school website which is ………. . Then I click on student login. Then I enter

    asked by Me on March 10, 2010
  61. English

    Thank you very much for your help. I tried to correct all the things I made wrong. Can you check my question and answer one more time. 1) Explain then the meaning of the word compromise applied to the Victorian way of life. (Explain how the word compromise

    asked by Henry2 on June 26, 2011
  62. LA (Lang arts)

    In a paragraph, compare and contrast any two of the following forms of poetry:Concrete,Haiku, or Limerick Your essay should include a specific description of each of the two forms you choose. Explain how the two forms are alike and how they are different.

    asked by XxKakashi_HatakexX on February 11, 2019
  63. English

    1. My school begins at 8:30 a.m. like Bora's school. 2. Our school begins at 8:30 a.m. like Bors'a school. (Which one is correct? Are both OK, my school and our school?) 3. My school and Bora's school are the same as follows. School begins at 8:30 a.m.

    asked by John on April 2, 2009
  64. English 11 (Novel Study No country for old men)

    Im doing an essay on the lack of redemption shown in the novel No country for old men. I needs 1000-1200 words and i got about 7 paragraphs these include -Thesis -Body paragraph 1(the corruption of money) -Body paragraph 2(the curruption of youth) -Body

    asked by Pengu on December 8, 2009
  65. SS8R: National Convention: The Female Voice Essay

    I have this assignment for my Social Studies class about the National Convention. Well most of you know about the National Convention thing since you watch Republicans or Democratic. The essay is focusing on First Lady Michelle Obama and Ann Romney. They

    asked by Laruen on September 18, 2012
  66. English 2

    Revise the following paragraph until you can answer yes to each of the questions listed below. After you are finished, copy the revised paragraph in the space provided 1. Does the paragraph have a clear purpose, and does each sentence contribute to that

    asked by Melly on July 30, 2014
  67. English II

    Revise the following paragraph until you can answer yes to each of the questions listed below. After you are finished, copy the revised paragraph in the space provided. 1. Does the paragraph have a clear purpose, and does each sentence contribute to that

    asked by Carlos on March 13, 2013
  68. English

    One question asked me what the theme of The Legend of Oedipus I said free will and fate part B is asking for a quote the choices are A. “Many years later, Oedipus is told by a drunk that Polybus is not his real father but when he asks his parents, they

    asked by HAHAHA on March 30, 2020
  69. English

    Can someone read my eight sentence paragraph. A high school diploma is very important to me. With a high school diploma I can show my children that your never to old to go back to school. Which will set a good example for my children to show them they need

    asked by Rebecca on February 21, 2015
  70. University Appeal Letter........HELP PLZ..

    I applied my first choice collegefor 2007 Fall admission. But they gave me summer admission finally, which I don't want to get. So I decide to write an appeal letter to the admission office asking for fall admission. The reason why I want them to

    asked by crzyadmi on April 12, 2007
  71. English 11 (No country for Old men Novel Study)

    Im doing an essay on the lack of redemption shown in the novel No country for old men. I needs 1000-1200 words and i got about 7 paragraphs these include -Thesis -Body paragraph 1(the corruption of money) -Body paragraph 2(the curruption of youth) -Body

    asked by Pengu on December 9, 2009
  72. Math

    Diane and Limore are looking at their school from the area beside the gym. From ambers point of view, the top of the school is at an angle of elevation of 48. From joeys point of view, directly closer to the school it is 68 degrees. the school is 30m high.

    asked by Trigernometry on June 2, 2019
  73. English

    How do you start a opening paragraph to a compare and contrast essay?

    asked by Janet on June 8, 2019
  74. writing...

    hi what should i include in my first paragraph on a compare and contrast essay??? please help asap

    asked by Gabby on January 27, 2008
  75. opinion

    At least a paragraph what is your opinion on meeeting teachers in school? You have to meet teachers in school. Exactly what do you mean?

    asked by deek on December 3, 2006
  76. english

    Can you please tell me if the sentence in quotation marks is the topic sentence? I read paragraph one and paragraph three, I believe that paragraph one was a very effective paragraph. "It touches a few very interesting points about why someone should

    asked by Denise on August 2, 2011
  77. English

    Can you please tell me if the corrections in my previous post were all OK? I have a few more doubts. 1) In order to describe Coketown Dickens uses two similes. 2) Through these similes he conveys the image of a towm like (which looks like) a jungle. 3)

    asked by Mike on February 22, 2011
  78. English

    What is different in middle school compared with elementary school? In middle school, we wear a school uniform, we have different teachers for for each subject, and we don't stay with our homeroom teacher all day. ------------------------- Are the question

    asked by rfvv on March 11, 2016
  79. Grammar

    I have a question when to start a new paragraph in first person writing. First Paragraph: I talk about my observation. Second Paragraph: I say what my friend says. Should they be combined into one paragraph? I was confused because for the second paragraph

    asked by Amy on December 29, 2011
  80. English

    posted by rfvv yesterday at 7:25am. The dietitian says, "This is the school cafeteria." What does the school cafeterian mean? 1. This is the (only) school cafeterian of our school. 2. This is the specific school cafeterian of our school. [What does "This

    asked by rfvv on March 18, 2018
  81. English

    Thank you. Could you check these sentences, please? Are they possible? 1) Unlike Wordsworth's nature, Coleridge's nature (one) is infused with abstract and supernatural meanings. 2) Differing from Wordsworth, Coleridge's nature is viewed as infused with

    asked by Henry on June 20, 2011
  82. English

    I am writing a paragraph about why I want to participate in this school counsil thing and I was wobderi if the word choice for "deticate" in this sentence makes sense: I want to deticate myself to participate in more school activities.

    asked by Kelly on August 10, 2012
  83. English

    Write one paragraph of eight to twelve sentences persuading a friend to enroll in Penn Foster by describing at least three advantages of distance-education with Penn Foster compared to a traditional school education. Use the comparison-contrast order for

    asked by Abdullah on August 12, 2011
  84. English

    In a paragraph, compare and contrast any two of the following forms of poetry:Concrete,Haiku, or Limerick Your essay should include a specific description of each of the two forms you choose. Explain how the two forms are alike and how they are different.

    asked by Brooklyn, I´m A Boy on January 30, 2020
  85. com155

    Can you check my paragraph for grammar errors, strong topic/concluding sentence,and any other recommended feed back? Paragraph two was more effective than paragraph one because it contained sentence variety and rhythm. Paragraph one consisted of short

    asked by blake on July 2, 2011
  86. English

    How is my grammar and punctuation in the folowing paragraph? Picture this, you are taking a test and the person next to you is chewing their gum loudly,so you can't concentrate. How disrespectful is that? The school board needs to make a rule no chewing

    asked by Dakota on April 12, 2012
  87. English

    How is my introductory paragraph to persuasive writing? Picture this, you are taking a test and the person next to you is chewing their gum loudly,so you can't concentrate. How disrespectful is that? The school board needs to make a rule no chewing gum in

    asked by Dakota on April 12, 2012
  88. language arts

    in a paragraph compare and contrast two following kinds of poetry haiku, limerick, centret,

    asked by Anonymous on February 18, 2015
  89. english

    How does the text use clothing and garments (or the lack thereof) to portray Edna’s rebellion against Victorian norms? Use examples from the book to support your answer.

    asked by brittney on January 4, 2012
  90. English

    I don't really understand this question and, I know you said to other people go look at the other exact same question but they don't really help and I don't want to get a B in ELA. I don't want the answer, I just need help on the question like giving me

    asked by Pickle rick on December 9, 2018
  91. English

    Im doing a compare and contrast essay on hurricanes and tornados and the firstling I need is an introduction paragraph. can someone please hep me that.?

    asked by Ms.I need help on April 11, 2019
  92. science

    compare and contrast cell division and mitosis. give a breif paragraph response.

    asked by dawn on November 23, 2009
  93. english

    What is the topic sentence in the following paragraph? I believe that paragraph one was a very effective paragraph. It touches a few very interesting points about why someone should create a Living Will. This is especially important to me because of the

    asked by .... on August 2, 2011
  94. Financial

    I have found all the answers, but I have no idea how to compare my findings. Here are what I need to compare. 1) Rules of thumb: 2) Adjusted book value: 3) Discounted cash flow: All three of those have answers that I have already found but I am suppose to

    asked by Lindsay on July 25, 2010
  95. english 10

    Every sentence in the paragraph below violates some principle of good persuasive writing. Revise the paragraph, following the directions at the end of each sentence; use your imagination where necessary. Type the revised paragraph in the text box provided

    asked by Joven on March 28, 2011
  96. english 10

    Every sentence in the paragraph below violates some principle of good persuasive writing. Revise the paragraph, following the directions at the end of each sentence; use your imagination where necessary. Type the revised paragraph in the text box provided

    asked by Joven on March 28, 2011
  97. English

    Writeacher, I'd like you to help me check this paragraph. Thank you. 1) We are urgently looking for an English school, which is interested in a long-term cooperation (??) with our school. We would like to start with an email partnership followed by a

    asked by Henry2 on February 26, 2012
  98. Geography

    I need to be able to compare a cartogram to a political map in order to answer these two questions: 33. What do the relative sizes of Australia and New Zealand on both maps tell you about each country's GNP? 34. Compare the size of South Korea on the two

    asked by Whisp on March 31, 2017
  99. math

    can you help ; i need to write and solve for each situation. check the solution. school: between 7:30am and 8:00am the number of students in a school increased by 73. there were 152 students in the school at 8:00 am. How many students were in school at

    asked by marko on September 19, 2012
  100. English

    Writeacher, thank you very much! Here is the part on the integration into ongoing activities. I wrote a number of ideas. I hope you can join them into a cohesive paragraph!! 1) High school... Pupils taken from a tenth class (or from different tenth

    asked by Henry2 on February 8, 2012