1. English

    Could you please revise the following sentences, please? 1) As a matter of fact, two among our science teachers are willing to partake in the project where English would be the lingua franca. 2) Translate the following words into English, then choose two
  2. English

    I find it difficult to check these sentences since the punctuation is missing, the word choice is unclear and they contain grammar mistakes! I really hope you can help me. I think we need to simplify the sentences. 1) Mary Shelley's Frankenstein, unlike
  3. critical thinking (just explain the question plz)

    can u explain this question for me or rephrase it because i don't understand what it means by fact-based subject matter or value-based subject matter. Does your hypothesis test fact-based subject matter or value-based subject matter? Briefly explain.?
  4. English

    I urgently need you to revise these sentences, too. I made some variations, but I have to be sure that everything is OK. I don't know if sentence 1 can make sense. 1) Two philosophical positions, which remain unreconciled in Hamlet's monologue, are
  5. ENGLISH

    Formal essay topic sentence guidelines: 1.) Topic sen. must be debatable, or, at the very least, worthy of discussion. They should not present straight facts with which most people would readily agree, nor should they be general statements about life. 2.)
  6. english check answer plz !

    i think its A. but i also got C. As you are reading your research paper aloud,you notice that all your sentences start the same way. What should you do A.revise some of the sentence so there is variety. B.read the sentences with a more engaging voice C.add
  7. Foreign languages

    Can you check these sentences, Writaecher? 1) Can you please tell me how far ...... hotel is from the beach? 2) As a matter of fact, I was looking for a hotel on a seafront. Do you think I should opt for the ..... Hotel?
  8. Enlish

    In revising his essay, Silvio realizes that there are some paragraphs in which the topic sentence doesn't support the thesis. What can he do to correct this? A. Add transitions where needed B. Revise his thesis to include all the points made by the
  9. Enlish

    In revising his essay, Silvio realizes that there are some paragraphs in which the topic sentence doesn't support the thesis. What can he do to correct this? A. Add transitions where needed B. Revise his thesis to include all the points made by the
  10. English

    The following items are run-on sentences. Revise each item either by making two complete sentences, or by adding a conjunctive adverb or semicolon. Change the punctuation and capitalization as necessary. Make all corrections on the sentences below. I was
  11. english

    Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate the other? The hurricane destroyed some oil rigs. Fuel prices rose.
  12. Writing

    31. I had hoped the police would blame Bruce, not ___. __ me __ myself __ mineself __I 32. Some interviewers ____ have a clear sense of what they want in an employee, ask very tough questions. __ who __, who __ which __ that 33. A venture capitalist has to
  13. Art

    Writeacher, I urgently need to revise these sentences. I really hope you can help me. 1) Ads can change and can wash the minds of children. Some years ago people used to switch channels to avoid ads, but we do it less and less 2) Nowadays most people
  14. English

    Writecher, I need your help to revise this. Thank you. 1) I really hope that you read my presentation of your school and that you liked it. As a matter of fact, I've just emailed it to our history teacher, who is going to set up a link to your school
  15. English

    I still have more sentences to check. I really hope you can revise them, too. 1) Revise all your sentences orally. 2) Bring the government down (and bring down the government) 3) He stopped to take on the students (to take the students on is possible?) 4)
  16. Math

    If a fact family has only 2 multiplication and division sentences, What do you know about the product and dividend? How many fact families with a dividend under 100 contain only odd numbers ? You can use a multiplication table to help you. The fact
  17. English

    Which sentences are correct? 1) Are you able to assist me on this matter? I would appreciate your assistance on this matter. OR 2) Are you able to assist me in this matter? I would appreciate your assistance in this matter. Thanks.
  18. English

    In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.) Revise the
  19. Art

    I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework
  20. English

    Thank you very much for your corrections. Can you help me with these sentences, please? Thank you very much. 1)Despite the corruption among the clergy, the church played a fundamental role in the Middle Ages. Actually/In particular/As a matter of fact/In
  21. English

    I have reduced my paragraphs to a few sentences. Please, let me know if it is OK. 1) In point of fact, the suffragettes had to face old stereotypes: the press ridiculed them, people treated them with indifference and hostility and the police attacked them
  22. English

    I left out two sentences. Thank you. I included many alternatives you can choose from. Thank you. 1) Your paragraphs lack cohesion since you failed to use appropriate sentence connectors. 2) How can you express the fact that the student failed to include
  23. English

    Could you please check these sentences? Thank you very much. 1)Lady Macbeth doesn't display stereotyped female behaviour and poses. 2) Actually, she is not the complement to her husband but rather the driving force of the play. 3) She is even more
  24. com155

    Do I have all the pronouns in() in these sentences? Are the sentences correct? 1. My friend Gloria has decided that (she)needs to go to debt counseling. 2. When Gloria and I discussed the matter (we) thought that it would be best to talk to (her) husband
  25. english

    rewrite the following sentences 1.)Pia said,"Don't try to be smart.Ria,but just tell the fact". end with:...........the fact. 2.)They decided to buy the shoes .They were expensive but well made. Combine using:although and because 3.)Only a millionaire can
  26. english writing

    what claim is about a matter of fact?
  27. Math

    If a fact family has only 2 multiplication and divison sentences , what do you know about the product and diviend? How many fact families with a diviend under 100 contain only odd numbers? You can use a multiplication table to help you.
  28. Art

    Could you please check how I can improve the following sentences? Thank you, Ms Sue. 1) Through his novel Orwell describes the totalitarian governments that had governed Europe in the period between the two wars. As a matter of fact, much of Oceanic
  29. science help PLS

    Which of the following statements about matter is false? The amount of matter increases slightly as water changes state. The amount of matter in an object remains the same during changes in state. Matter is neither created nor destroyed. Liquids, gases,
  30. Language Arts

    is the phrase( as a matter of fact)a transitional word?
  31. English

    I urgently need you to revise this paragraph. Thank you very much in advance. 1) Dickens goes on to describe its residents. They look like one another and they are condemned to do the same monotonous work day after day with no possibility of escaping their
  32. English

    I left out the following sentences. Thank you. Where can I look for criticism on Poe's "The Pit and the Pendulum"? 1) While he is thinking of his near death, he hears a sound of trumpets and the walls rush back. General Lasalle has entered Toledo with his
  33. Writing

    Part III: Revision In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.)
  34. HR

    Which of the following is a false statement about fact-finding as an impasse resolution procedure? A. A fact-finder's findings are binding on the parties. B. A fact-finder is often used for negotiations with governmental bodies. C. A fact-finder's findings
  35. eng/135

    Revising Messages: Conciseness Revise the following sentences, using shorter, simpler words. 9. The antiquated calculator is ineffectual for solving sophisticated problems
  36. Astronomy

    How the asymmetry between matter and anti-matter in our Universe might be generated. Why might neutrinos be a key player in achieving this? (a) We already know neutrinos can morph from one neutrino type to another. It is possible, although not certain,
  37. English

    I urgently need you to revise these sentences (instructions), please. 1)Explain to a friend of yours who has never flown what he/she should do before boarding a plane. 2) Talk about the place where you live using the following grid: . – What is your town
  38. Art

    Could you please revise the following sentences? Thank you. Shall I consider both sentences as correct? 1) I was having dinner / I had been having dinner when the telephone rang. 2)He told me he had lost his car keys and that he wanted me to go and pick
  39. English

    I'll revise the sentences and then I'll post them back to you. Can you please suggest a site where all reporting verbs (to be used in indirect speech, especially when giving instructions or advice) are listed? I don't want to use "tell, ask" all the time.
  40. please help with analytic geometry if you can

    Find the maximum value of y/x over all real numbers x and y that satisfy (x-3)^2+(y-3)^2 = 6. It is a circle, but how do we even begin? As a matter of fact, how is there not only like 1 solution??
  41. grammar

    Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate to the other. People know they are going to have to retire; they often do not save enough money to do so comfortably. (this one is my answer, but I like the second one better)
  42. English

    The sentence "Like a boil that can never be cured as long as it is covered up but must be opened with all its pus-flowing ugliness to the natural medicines of air and light, injustice must likewise be exposed" communicates a(n) __________ tone. A. Urgent
  43. English

    Could you please check which tense is best in the following sentences? Thank you. (The poet remembers a walk he went on with his sister, during which he was struck by the song of a Highland Lass.) 1) The poet doesn’t know the song she is singing. 2) As a
  44. Physics

    Ray of laser start from the air and collide with the middle side of some matter > How many total internal reflections done in this matter ?? n ( matter)= 1.48 n (air)= 1.00 The length of matter = 42.0 cm The width of matter = 3.1 mm Ray of laser collide
  45. english

    I need help. I need to revise any run-on sentences. The first one is this. Not sure if these are correct. Death Valley National Monument located in Southern California and Nevada, is one of the hottest place on earth. Temperatures there have soared as high
  46. Science, Astrenomey

    This is my theory, read well if you wish to know the truth: according to the big bang, there is a equal amount of anti-matter to the matter, BUT nearly all that matter is missing! In this theory there was NO anti-matter when the earth was made. anti-matter
  47. analytic geometry helps are appreciated

    Find the maximum value of y/x over all real numbers x and y that satisfy (x-3)^2+(y-3)^2 = 6. It is a circle, but how do we even begin? As a matter of fact, how is there not only like 1 solution??
  48. English

    I forgot to include the following sentences. Could you please check these other sentences, too. 1) Rewrite the exercise three times after learning the use of reporting verbs. 2) Revise carefully the verbs followed by the infinitive and the gerund in your
  49. English

    Revise the following sentences to remove all pronoun errors. 41. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork. 42. When a teacher writes an exam, they think about what aspects of student learning they want to test.
  50. English

    I have a few questions on sentences I wrote last week. Could you please check them? 1) In the summary of Gulliver's travels I used the present but a few sentences are in the past. 2) When Gulliver comes back home in England, his wife and his other family
  51. grammar

    revise the following sentences to eliminate faulty sentence structure, making them clear and grammatically need help with the following sentences: An effective Web site is well designed, provides useful information, and links are given to other relevant
  52. Art

    I left out the following sentences.Thank you very much. 1) As a matter of fact, they don’t just sell products, they sell lifestyles. They show the lives of famous people without even showing the brand they are trying to sell. 2) When the first ads came
  53. English

    In 4-5 sentences, can you help me use the cohesive devices, above all, importantly, indeed, in fact? Thank you!
  54. please revise journ

    Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
  55. English

    You forgot to check the grammar in the following sentences yesterday. Thank you. 1) You referred to question number 4 when answering question number 1. Your paragraph is off the subject (or you wandered off the subject?) 2) Express yourself in your own
  56. Health PLEASE CHECK ANSWERS

    Help Please Can u check my answers? < = my answer If you do not experience some pain from your workouts, you are probably wasting your time: A.myth < B.fact You should still watch what you eat when you are exercising, in order to maintain a healthy
  57. English

    Thank you for your corrections! I wonder if you could possibly have a look at these other sentences on Defoe's Robinson Crusoe. My doubts concern the words preceding the question marks. Thank you very much for being so cooperative. 1) He attacks them and
  58. science

    What is matter? And four examples of objects/substances that would be classified as ''matter'' Please help me with this question and anyhting else you know about ''matter''
  59. science- I need help!

    1. How do you know when something is gas? 2. What is gas made of? [I think it's molecules and atoms?] 3. How do you know when something is matter? [I believe that when something has a mass and volume..its matter. Is that correct? 4. Is gas matter? [This
  60. science

    1. How do you know when something is gas? 2. What is gas made of? [I think it's molecules and atoms?] 3. How do you know when something is matter? [I believe that when something has a mass and volume..its matter. Is that correct? 4. Is gas matter? [This
  61. analytic geometry helps are appreciated

    Find the maximum value of y/x over all real numbers x and y that satisfy (x-3)^2+(y-3)^2 = 6. It is a circle, but how do we even begin? As a matter of fact, how is there not only like 1 solution?? No one has answered this question yet.
  62. Grammar

    thruout history, traveling traders and merchants took home new product such as tea, spices and fabrics as a matter of fact that's one reason civilizations changed.
  63. English (Writeacher)

    How should I revise these sentences so that they are not as long but still are three sentences? "Driven by sea storms, Odysseus and his men wind up upon the land of the Lotus Eaters, and three of the men are sent to retrieve information about the
  64. math

    susie writes the division fact 20/5=. write the remaining fact in this fact family.
  65. physics- Space

    How does the amount of dark matter in the Universe compare to the amount of ordinary matter? In what way is dark matter similar to ordinary matter? In what way are they different? I got the first one which dark matter is 23% of the universe. But for the
  66. English

    Can you please check these five sentences for me I find it difficult to correct. 1)1984 can be considered (as) an anti-utopian novel because it provides the description of a society in which a totalitarian government controls any action of the people. 2)In
  67. CRT 105

    A(n)_________ claim is a claim about a matter of fact.
  68. grammar

    Part III: Revision In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.)
  69. English

    Thank you. Could you please check these sentences, please? Thank you. 1) Storm is a participant in the triathlon competition. She is going to reach (I don't know the correct verb) the finishing line. She is wearing a pinkish half zip-up T-shirt with an
  70. English

    I urgently need you to check these sentences I have to include in an e-mail. As far as the project is concerned, I would like to know the opinion of your science teacher. I hope they will help me find the proper words. 1)Thank you for your email of today.
  71. eng/lit

    Which of the following best describes the language of the poem Against that time Shakespeare? a)concrete and matter-of-fact b)euphemistic and prosaic c)metephoric and logical d)informal and conversational e)ironic and amused
  72. English

    I forgot to include the following sentences. Thank you 1) Alonso is desperate because he thinks his son had drowned (or is drowned?). 2) Ariel informs Prospero aboutthe plan to kill him. 3) Dr Jekyll believed that man is (or was) a mixture of good and
  73. Chemistry

    what number should be placed in the blank to balance the equation C 3 H 8 + 50 2 --> 3 CO 2 ___ H 2 O I have been working on this Q for four hours and it is driving me CRAZY please HELP i hate chemistry or anything with numbers in it as a matter of
  74. Help english

    Revise the sentences. (1) Revise the following sentence so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions: Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight.
  75. English

    1. We are discussing the matter later. 2. We will discuss the matter later. 3. We are gling to discuss the matter later. 4. We discuss the matter later. ============================== Are they all the same in meaning? Any differences?
  76. psychology 220

    # 1.55 (1 pts.) Which of the following information led Dr. Tobin to conclude that Peter was suffering from bipolar disorder? A) the fact that he reported having intense bouts of anxiety B) the fact that he had recently been married and soon after was
  77. Psychology 220

    # 1.55 (1 pts.) Which of the following information led Dr. Tobin to conclude that Peter was suffering from bipolar disorder? A) the fact that he reported having intense bouts of anxiety B) the fact that he had recently been married and soon after was
  78. Pronoun Pratice

    I have written a paragraph about credit cards using at least five different pronouns. Could you please look over it and let me know if you see any errors, if my pronoun use is correct and if the sentences are complete. If you have any input about how a
  79. English

    I forgot to include the following sentences. Thank you very much for your help. 1)Meanwhile Malcolm, Duncan’s son, is marching into Scotland with an army. His soldiers cut branches from the trees of / in Birnam Wood, to use these as camouflage to cover
  80. English

    1. Because she knows the fact, she will not invite him. 2. Knowing the fact, she will not invite him. 3. Having known the fact, she will not invite him. (Which one is similar to #1? #1 can be changed into #2, right? What about #3?) 4. Because she knew the
  81. English

    Can you please check if these sentences are correct? Thank you very much. 1) How long does your English lesson (class) last? 2) The Druids formed the intellectual class in Celtic society. 2) To become Druids, students were instructed and trained in large
  82. fact/opinion

    Please check: 1) these mighty animals are close to extinction. [fact] 2) tigers are the biggest members of the cat family. [fact] 3) it is such a shame. [opinion]
  83. 11th grade Biology

    Match the following.. 12. Moves in cycles from nonliving things to living things back to nonliving, etc. 13. Can be passed from one organism to another in a food chain. 14. Is constantly being lost from the biosphere. 15. Can be created by living
  84. English (Writeacher)

    How should revise these sentences so that they are still three sentences? "Ten years after the Trojan War, Odysseus departs from the goddess Calypso's island and arrives in Phoenicia, ruled by Alcinous. Offering Odysseus a ship to return him to his
  85. English

    Hello, I have to revise these sentences for dangling modifiers and I wanted to see if I did it correctly. First sentence: Flying over the oak tree, the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised it to: Damagins his crops, the
  86. English

    1. I am sure that she is intelligent to deal with the matter. 2. I am sure that she is intelligent because she deals with the matter. 3. I am sure that she is intelligent because she dealt with the matter. ------------------------------------------- Does
  87. English/Please revise

    In the United States vs. Fawaz Yunis, five men hijacked a Jordanian airliner. Among the passengers were two American citizens who were apparently not the target of the terrorist activity. Hijackers latter released the passengers and blew up the aircraft.
  88. grammar check

    Please check and let me know which ones are wrong Thank you Tom 31.I had hoped the police would blame Bruce, not ___. _x_ me __ myself __ mineself __I 32.Some interviewers ____ have a clear sense of what they want in an employee, ask very tough questions.
  89. english

    Beginning writers tend to overuse _______, which quickly become monotonous A. long sentences B. complicated sentences C. short, simple sentences D. complex sentences
  90. English

    1.Read the following sentences from "The Destructors." The new recruit had been with the gang since the beginning of the summer holidays, and there were possibilities about his brooding silence that all recognized. He never wasted a word even to tell his
  91. Physics

    One practical application of matter waves is A. Lasers B. X-Rays C. Electron Microscope D. None of the above My guess is A, but I'm not sure. "Matter waves" refers to the wave qualities of matter (as opposed to the particle qualities). Thanks.
  92. Language Arts

    Use the fallowing sentences and use vivid verbs and adjective to rewrite the sentences. The sentences that I'm having problem with is : I play video game. Could anyone give me idea on how to improve that sentences? Thanks
  93. English

    I forgot to add two doubts. Thank you very much. 1) Macbeth regrets having killed Duncan but doesn't repent of his sin. As a matter of fact, the word Amen stuck in his throat. 2)Do you say "clean his hands of the burden of the guilt which weighs on his
  94. Astronomy

    Basically the ``Bohr radius'' for the dark matter is rB=ℏ^2 / GN M m^2 where m is the dark matter mass, M is the total amount of dark matter mass contained inside the ``gravitational atom'', and ℏ and GN are constants as usual. Taking the dark
  95. English

    1. You must be honest. 2. You have to be honest. (Situation: The person is not honest, so the boss is scolding the man.) 3. You must be honest. 4. You have to be honest. 5. I am sure that you are honest. (The man was honest, and the boss knows it, so he
  96. English

    I forgot to include the following four sentences. 1)In my village there isn't a market. There is one in the next village called "Piave" and it is held on Monday mornings. 2)My parents always complain about my untidiness 3)I do the washing-up using a
  97. college english

    I have to revise sentences to eliminate illogical or overused coordination. Are the following sentences correct? Thanks! The object of fencing is to be the first to touch the opponent five times, and a "president," who is sometimes assisted by a number of
  98. English

    Can you please check these sentences for me? Thank you very much. 1)Another important theme is that of equivocation.The witches confuse good and bad (better evil). They are unable to distinguish between good and evil. 2) Closely connected to the theme of
  99. Science

    Check my answers please? Imagine that you remove all the atoms from a chair. What remains? 1. nothing 2. a pile of dust I choose 1. Which of the following is not made of atoms? 1. heat 2. a solid 3. a gas I choose 1. What about matter is true? 1. atoms are
  100. English

    The following paragraph contains five errors in grammar, punctuation, mechanics, or usage. Copy and paste the paragraph into the textbox, and then revise to correct the errors. 2. Often, however, the dictionaries are wrong about this, in fact, by putting