1. English - to JJ

    If my thesis is Social networking is a powerfull force in modern society. It helps us stay connected with friends, even if we don't show them the 'real' us and it has shaped current events and our views on these events... will my topic be about facebook or
  2. Citations

    Is this sentence fine? Or should I remove the name of the website from my sentence and put it in parentheses at the end? According to Bernie Sanders . com, he is "a fearless, experienced leader capable of seeing the truth, and standing up to big private
  3. Writing

    In the novel, To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee, a major character, Jem's view on the world shifts drastically due to his experiences with his hometown Does this sentence sound awkward? If so, how can I make this sentence flow more smoothly? Thank you
  4. English as a second language

    Can someone help me to paraphrase this sentence. Title of the article is "Becoming a Writer" by Russell Baker Sentence: "I hated the assignments to turn out "compositions," and went at them like heavy labor, luckluster paragraphs that were agonies for
  5. English

    Hello. I will really appreciate your help. 1)which preposition is correct or better in the sentence "oil is a curse of/for the Middle East" 2)is it possible to ommit "that/which" in the sentence "this is a fundamental right 'that (which)' every state must
  6. English

    Which of the following sentence is an illustration of a fused, or run on, sentence? A.I didn't know which way to turn; every road seemed long and hard. B.The raccoon in the garage was vicious you could see it in his eyes. C.You never know where you are
  7. sentences

    what if anything,is wrong with the following sentences? Carmen is tall, slender,and a woman of great beauty. Nothing is wrong with it that I can see. It is one sentence, so you should have ended the previous question with "sentence", not the plural.
  8. English

    NEED HELP FAST Which word correctly completes the sentence? What would you say is the __________ of jellybeans in that jar? A.number B.amount Which word correctly completes the sentence? I would __________ chosen the lasagna instead of the spaghetti. A.of
  9. English

    anyone can help me about writing basic sentence pattern.And what is some tips. These sites may help you. http://wwwnew.towson.edu/ows/SentPatt.htm http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_sentp.html
  10. language arts

    Which sentence are quotation marks used correctly ? A)The men's clothing department does'nt sell tuxedos. B)The womens' book club hasn't decided which book to read next. C)I wanted to borrow my sisters new sweater, but she wouldn't let me wear it. D)The
  11. Grammar

    Seeing pulsation of the artery at the completion of this dissection. 1. This is a run-on that can be fixed with a period. 2. This is a run-on that can be fixed by adding a comma and a conjunction. 3. This is a fragment that can be fixed by adding a subject
  12. English

    1. My new friends are all great. 2. All my new friends are great. 2-2. All of my new friends are great. 3. My new friends all are great. 4. They all are great. 5. All of them are great. (Are they all grammatical? What is the part of speech of 'all' in
  13. English

    Which of the following statements about a subordinate clause is correct? A. There must be at least one subordinate clause in every compound sentence. B. A subordinate clause cannot stand by itself as a sentence. C. A subordinate clause must always have a

    Their advice was excellent... you need to put a subject in before the verb ironing and change the tense... The sentence, as it is, still has the pants doing the ironing.... Please explain because in the sentence itself it doesn't say anywhere if its she ,
  15. English

    1) How many U.S. presidents can (you) name? (2) In the year 2000, U.S. citizens elected the 43rd (president). (3) Some presidents (were elected) more than once. (4) Franklin Roosevelt, for example, was elected to four terms (in office). (5) Many citizens
  16. Lang. Arts

    2. Choose the option that corrects the sentence below. If the sentence is correct, select “d. The sentence is correct." Members of the Convention of 1836 a revolutionary group signed the Texas Declaration of Independence. A.Members of the Convention, of
  17. Literacy

    1.Write the participle in the sentence. Why do you need a new pair of hiking boots? My answer - NEED 2.Write the first and last word of the participial phrase. My answer - BEGINNING 3.Write the first and last word of the participial phrase. Disappointed by
  18. English

    Choose the sentence below in which "of" is used correctly. 1) We should of left early. 2) The boys surrendered, but they should of fought. 3) The bird flew north of the beach. 4) The three firls might of broken the records. I think it is #3, the others use
  19. LA

    Hi, Ms. Sue . Can you please look over this? Which sentence contains a predicate noun? A)The walk through the tunnel was eerie. B)I bought Mom a cookbook for her birthday. C)My dog is master of the household. D)The ground is very uneven. I choose C?
  20. English/Word Usage

    Choose the sentence which contains an indirect object. a)I worked hard each day. b)They gave me a bonus. c) I spent it immediately. d) It is difficul to save money.
  21. English

    I need help in trying to figure out the verb tense in this sentence I remember last year when was trying to choose the right school and worrying about it a lot. One day, a friend says that, instead of talking about all the time I should visit a few places
  22. English

    Choose the appropriate vocabulary word from The Call of the Wild to fill in the following sentence: "Buck often went on walks, swam, or played with Judge Miller's ." A. Progeny B. Demesnes C. Intimates
  23. history

    7. Choose the sentence that contains a relative pronoun. A. Please, put your book bag in your locker. B. Someone is coming down the hill. [C. Mr. Moon, whom you have met, is my assistant.] D. Those are not my shoes. are my answers correct
  24. English

    Choose the correct vocabulary word for the blank in the following sentence. Someone left me a _____ message on my voicemail; I had no idea what it meant. cryptic*** boisterous petulant jovial
  25. English

    In a total of 200 words, write two paragraphs with about how interest rates affect our purchasing decision. Identify the topic sentence in each by underlining it. I need help with Identifying topic sentence
  26. english

    what does this sentence mean? He would take her there, of course, for he wasn't such a coward that he would mind a little exploring now and then farther in amongst the ever-darkening columns of the tall pines. How would you answer this question according
  27. More Language Arts

    Identify what the sentence is: The bicycle path winds through the city *that is 40 miles long* a.Simple sentence b.Noun clause c.Misplace modifier* d.Adverbial clause
  28. English

    The boy was asked to read the sentences on the page. He started to read the first sentence and then the next sentence...There was a pause...The teacher said " _______" 1. Go ahead. 2. Go on. 3. Keep on. 4. Keep on reading. (Can we use all the expressions
  29. English

    Having problems with a introductory sentence. Its a essay on dying and living. I wrote a question to start my intro. Sentence. Or I wrote The professor died in 1974 of Cancer. Someone please let me know if I started out right. Please
  30. help please:-)

    The first sentence of your introductory paragraph should do all of the following EXPECT: A. Give the reader an idea of the subject matter. B. include the title of the eassy. C. Grab the reader's attention D. Provide a thesis sentence. I got B. Is it right?
  31. English

    Need help please. For the following exercise, choose a topic, and then determine which method of organization is best suited for its development. Next, write a topic sentence that applies to your treatment of the subject. Finally, list at least four
  32. 7th grade language arts

    Choose the demonstrative pronoun is the following sentence: "This invitation fell out of her backpack." her of backpack this
  33. English

    choose the sentence that has a subject complement the nurse felt the pulse I felt much better the day ended with many surprises we can't believe without seeing her
  34. English

    Thanks, Kitty. It's raining hard in London today. Many people are carrying umbrellas. Some young people are walking in the rain. Now, back to the Weather Station, Shelly. ----------------------- This is a part of a weather report. Would you explain the
  35. English

    Answer questions 1–4 in one or two sentences. Question 1a–1b is based on the following paragraph. A trip to the ocean can be a relaxing escape from the everyday pressures of life. A sailboat glistening on the horizon provides a mental escape to faraway
  36. English

    1 What is the participial phrase in the sentence? They heard the girl crying softly in the restaurant. A) They heard ***** B) the girl C) crying softly D) in the restaurant. 2 Danielle reached into her bag. She was looking for her wallet. Which sentence
  37. English

    Which BEST identifies and explains the function of the word gardening as it is used in this sentence? Gardening is a pleasant and productive pastime for people of all ages. A) In the selected sentence, the word gardening is a gerund, and the gerund phrase
  38. Grammar

    Was concerned about the effectiveness of the high-flow nebulizers and the mist tent. 1. This is a fragment that is missing a subject. 2. This is a run-on that requires a semicolon after effectiveness. 3. This is a runn-on that requires a comma and a
  39. English

    (1) After my interview with these four young people, I reflected on the quiet sense of "difference" I sensed with many of these Upward Bound students. (2) As a college teacher who has also taught seventh-grade science, I have some experience with the faces
  40. passive voice

    select the sentence which is in the passive voice. A. The menus were kept near the door. B. The cafe' had seating for 40 people. C. Two customers were waiting when Carol opened the door. D. None of the above use passive voice.
  41. language expression

    choose the word or phrase that best completes the sentence.my answers are all at the bottom 6)by now,the relay team _____ their practice laps. F)swam G)swum H)has swum J)was swimming 7)the director ______ a speech when the guest of honor arrived A)giving
  42. english

    In each group,choose the sentence that has correctly drawn a line between the complete subject and complete predicate for each of the following sentences. The boy lost his lunch money. is there a website to help with this? Just about any sentence
  43. QUESTION--Please Help

    What,if anything,is wrong with this sentence? Do you advise me to go to college or that I should get a job after high school? A. Properly constructed sentence B. Misplaced part C. Lacks parallel parts D. Run-on I think the answer is C, am I CORRECT? Joyce,
  44. Grammar! please check my answers!

    Choose the answer that describes how to correct the misplaced phrase. The suspect is a tall man with a beard weighing about two hundred pounds. Move with a beard to the beginning of the sentence. Place weighing about two hundred pounds right after man.

    thanks Mrs Sue but i already looked at the dictionary and got all the definitions i had 20 words to do for my homework i have to write the definition a synonym and a sentence and those are the only words i couldn't find a sentence for PLEASE HELP!!!
  46. english

    • I couldn’t decide which of the two sweaters to buy. • The saleswoman convinced me to take both. • At home, I regretted the expensive purchase. • I vowed to return one of the sweaters. (combine the above four sentence using complex compound
  47. Grammar

    The patient was taken to thje operative suite, placed supine, anesthetized, and intubated in the usual fashion. fragment- run-on- comma splice- complete sentence. Answer: complete sentence Thanks
  48. Reading/Language Arts

    Pedro looked at the roof and reminded himself to bring up a bucket of pitch next time to repair the new cracks. What does pitch mean in this sentence? What clues help you understand the meaning used in this sentence?
  49. writing skills

    16. What is the name of the common error in the following sentence? Having risen because of the rains, the hikers were unable to cross the river. A. Infinitive phrase B. Prepositional phrase [C. Dangling modifier] D. Run-on sentence
  50. english 1 honors

    Can someone tell me the sentence structure of this sentence? In Frank R. Stockton's short story "The lady or the tiger?" one knows that the semi- barbaric princess motions to her lover to pick the door that contains the tiger.
  51. grammar

    12. Identify the error in the following sentence. Emily didn't have no idea how to memorize so many lines. (1 point) run-on sentence missing end punctuation double negative missing comma
  52. History Sentence Understanding

    Hi, for some reason I don't get what this sentence means : Individuals had no rights that the government was bound to respect. Does this mean that the people did not have any rights or ... (also this is for communism in Russia: Societ Union in the 1920's)
  53. College Geography

    "The desert was tamed but the price was calamitous, the worst climatic disaster in the history of the Soviet Union." Can someone explain what tamed means in the sentence? This sentence has to do with the Aral Sea.
  54. English

    write a sentence about what the future holds using 1 abstract noun 1 subordinate clause. and then another sentence same topic using 1concrete noun 1 adjectives 1 prepositional phrase 1 personal pronoun and 1 interjection.
  55. english

    this is a portion of my english homework that i cant do. i was assigned over 100 questions and these are the ones i need the most help with and i need to turn it in in like an hour so any help would be great :-) 1. Which is not a sentence fragment? A.
  56. english

    Can anyone tell me if I have done this right. Because the store was closed. my answer: Because the store was closed, we went back home without the food. I think you did it correctly. I am not sure what the teacher was asking for. But you took an incomplete
  57. English

    Correct the following sentence or choose D if correct. The oldest animal at the zoo. A.At the zoo, the oldest animal. B.Saw the oldest animal at the zoo. C.The tortoise is the oldest animal at the zoo. D.This is a complete sentence. No correction is
  58. English

    Correct the sentence or choose D if it is complete. Bring money for snacks. A.Bring money for snacks when we go to the zoo. B.Will you bring money for snacks? C.You should bring money for snacks. D.This is a complete sentence. No correction is necessary I
  59. English

    Valmy is in bed, asleep. ================= Can you paraphrase the sentence? What is the function 'asleep' in the sentence?
  60. english

    These early flights were just the beginning. is that a sentence? Yes, it's a sentence. You have a subject flights and a verb were.
  61. Grammar

    In the sentence "Let's walk around.", is around a noun? Also, in the sentence "Let's walk around the block.", what part of speech is around?
  62. English

    I need help. Please and thank you. 4. What does a strong verb add to a sentence? 5. What does a quality adjective add to a sentence?
  63. English

    Blast 3 points from a team. (At a game, what does that sentence mean? Would you paraphrase the sentence? What does 'blast' mean here?)
  64. ila

    In the sentence: What is the formula for the area of a parralellogram, Alicia? how is the word 'Alicia' used in the sentence?
  65. english

    Choose the sentence that has a subject complement. A. The day ended with many surprises. B. I felt much better. C. The nurse felt my pulse. D. We can't leave without seeing I think it's B.
  66. Choose the term to complete this sentence?

    1 Describes how likely it is that an event will happen based on all the possible outcomes. Theoretical probability or Experimental probability
  67. english

    Choose the sentence that has a subject complement. A. The day ended with many surprises. B. I felt much better. C. The nurse felt my pulse. D. We can't leave without seeing her. I think it's B.
  68. English

    I forgot to include the following sentences. I made the changes you told me. Isnt't the subject missing in sentence? Is it possible to use the conditional in sentence 2? I divided sentence 3 into two separate sentences, as you suggested. 1) On the stone
  69. english

    Hello for these questions to change for making the language nonsexist the sentence : The minister joined the couple as man and wife, would it be The minister joined the couple as husband and wife or no change. The second sentence making the language
  70. English

    There are 10 English sentences. A person is asked to read all the sentences and translate them into Korean. He should read the first sentence and then he should translate into Korean. After that he should read the second sentence and then he should
  71. LA

    1) How many U.S. presidents can (you) name? (2) In the year 2000, U.S. citizens elected the 43rd (president). (3) Some presidents (were elected) more than once. (4) Franklin Roosevelt, for example, was elected to four terms (in office). (5) Many citizens
  72. Please correct sentence

    Richard III supposedly had the young princes murdered. Found out what really happened to them. First part is a sentence. Second part is a fragment. How will you correct the fragment? http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/fragments.htm =) look in the
  73. English

    With your partner, talk about what is seen in the picture taking turns. Sentence A is an example sentence. Like Sentence A, make sentences looking at the picture. I see a cat is playing with a ball on her right hand. I see a lady who is watching TV lying
  74. English

    Identify each as fragment, run-on, comma splice, or sentence. 1. One legend has it that an old lady tried to dry off her sopping wet dog by putting it in the microwave this legend also predates the microwave oven. A. fragment B. run-on C. comma splice D.
  75. English

    Underline the correct verb form to complete each sentence. --------------------------------------* 2. Has the ice (froze, frozen) on the pond? 5. The baby has (broke, broken) the toy. --------------------------------------- Which one would be correct for
  76. Language Arts

    Are these right? My aunt discovered a skunk under her porch and called the Humane Society for help in removing it. *simple sentence Some committee members preferred either a musical comedy or a mystery. *simple sentence
  77. English

    The first day of my vacation was like the first day of spring: bright, cool, and colorful. Which literary device is used in this sentence? A) Allusion B) Hyperbole C) Imagery D) Simile ** I'm leaning towards D because the sentence uses "like", but I also
  78. Grammar

    The patient denies any cardiac symptoms, angina, shortness of breath, any infectious disease, any bleeding disorder, or any pulmonary disorders. A) complete sentence B) fragment C) run-on I say its a complete sentence:)
  79. French Study Guide

    I have a French Test tommorrow, so I would like all your help to get me ready for it. If someone could write a little quiz for me, I would be really grateful. This is an outline for it. A)Vocabulary: Based on each illustration, write a complete sentence
  80. Spanish

    Because underline doesn't show I will replace the underline with parentheses. I hope it's less confusing. 6. Choose the sentence in which the underlined word is grammatically correct. A. Esta varilla negra (está) parada sobre otra cosa negra. B. Esta
  81. English

    There are still two other sentences I need to rephrase. In particular, I need to simplify sentence 2. 1) Elizabeth wanted control of the immense markets which had been opened up by the discovery of America by Columbus in 1492 and the circumnavigation of
  82. phi103

    Mrs. Sue please help! I really need some help on these questions Please! I am having a very tough time. I have tried to answer to the best of my ability, but i am not understanding these. Can someone please help with this? Thank you. Truth tables can be
  83. English 3

    Choose the correct relative pronoun in the sentence: I have great respect for _____ accepted that responsibility. whoever whomever Is the answer whomever?

    Use the sentence parts below to create a sentence with one or more adjectives. My sentence - The van she said had polka dot tires and tinted windows. Is this correct? Words - Had The Van She said Windows and polka dot tinted tires . ? !
  85. English

    We thought that it was a bear. We were scared. Then, it turned around. It wasn't bear! --------------------- In the last sentence, an exclamation mark was used instead of a full stop. What is the difference between the sentence ending with an exclamation
  86. English

    Hello. I'll be grateful for some more help. Is it possible to use the Perfect tense twice in the sentence, for example "Peter, who has long lived in New York, has promised to show me the city"? Thank you very much for help. As for the sentence about
  87. LA

    Good Morning Ms. Sue. Can you look over my answer. Thank you :) Which of the following describes the word dew? A) What happens when you don’t get enough sleep for a few nights? B) What happens to your teeth when you get too much candy? C) What happens to
  88. English

    Identify the verb form that correctly completes each sentence. 1. Have you BLANK your pencil again? a. drop b. dropping c. dropped***** d. none of the above 2. The accident BLANK Peter to be careful in the lab. a. teached b. taught c. has teached d. none
  89. GRAMMAR HELP plz check ;-;

    Which sentence contains an item that is either incorrectly italicized or should be italicized? A. On the ship's deck was women reading a novel called (Mystery at Sea). B. He painted the seaplane blue and named it "Kingfisher." C. In (Newsweek), I read an
  90. PHI103

    I really need some help on these questions Please! I am having a very tough time. I have tried to answer to the best of my ability, but i am not understanding these. Can someone please help with this? Thank you. Truth tables can be used to examine
  91. English

    2. Read the following words: sautnterd, walked, danced What is the best way to group these words on a classification chart to help you understand their meanings? a. They all end in -ed b. They are all in the past tense c. They are all verbs d. They are all
  92. Grammar

    Wide undermining was done at the subgaleal level on all sides of the excision the wound was brought together using 4-0 Vicryl sutures. Choices are: fragment- run-on- comma splice - complete sentence- Answer: this is a run- on sentence
  93. english

    What word in the sentence is most clearly a loaded word? Suppose the following sentence appears in the sports section of the newspaper: Lorton's experienced linemen performed well in handing Jefferson High's Eagles a crushing defeat.
  94. History

    Read the sentence. A tentative explanation for an observation or phenomenon that can be tested by further investigation or experimentation is defined as a __________. Which most accurately completes the sentence? dependent variable independent variable
  95. grammar

    okay I'm a little lost on this one :/ which choice correctly completes the sentence? -Gently, they ______ the tiny eggs back in the nest. *set had setted sat had sat(this one looks like it could work too) how do I know if the sentence is in present or past
  96. English

    okay I'm a little lost on this one :/ which choice correctly completes the sentence? -Gently, they ______ the tiny eggs back in the nest. *set had setted sat had sat(this one looks like it could work too) how do I know if the sentence is in present or past
  97. English

    Writers often make common errors by omitting punctuation. Identify and explain the sentence structure error in the following sentence: Tabitha drove to school she took her math test she drove home in the afternoon.
  98. spanish

    please help me , i neeed help writing this in Spanish: My classes are very difficult, and i don't enjoy them mi (mis?) clases muy difícil, y yo no disfrutar de i know this is a messed up sentence, but i'm just giving it a try. can someone please show me
  99. English (HELP)

    Is this grammatically correct? I mean, it is alright for me to write who "one of them" is in an entirely new sentence? Is it considered a sentence fragment and therefore grammatically incorrect? "By one look of his now unnaturally light pupils, she could
  100. English

    1. Read the sentence from paragraph 1 below. It looms menacingly over the road from the roof of a farmhouse, a flying reptile with a seven-foot wingspan. Which of the following correctly describes this sentence? A. Simple sentence B. Complex sentence C.