1. english

    This is the 1st paragraph to my essay: Social awkwardness Ever since I can remember people have always commented on my height, this made me very uncomfortable and awkward about it around my peers. I recall a time when my mother got into an argument with a woman at an Easter ...
  2. english

    This is the first paragraph of my essay, how does it look? Imagine being 6’3” in the eighth grade and everyone in the school making comments about your height. There are definitely advantages and disadvantages to being tall. My best friend’s mother sent me a quote ...
  3. English

    I need help with starting my essay. These are the organization of my essay. I am not sure what to put for paragraph #2. *Broad subject-My name *Limited Topic for thesis statement-Learning to cope with my height *Main Idea about this topic- Advantages of being tall Paragraph #2...
  4. english

    Here is my first paragraph of my essay: Imagine being 6’3” in the eighth grade and everyone in the school making comments about your size. There are definitely advantages and disadvantages to being tall. My best friend’s mother found a quote written by Bill Walton that ...
  5. Example Essays

    Mkay, I have a five paragraph essay due by tommorow. Its to be an example essay, but I don't have a idea OR a plan on what to write. I am confused {confuzzled} and am looking for a fairly easy example essay to write. I will need to use the Seven Sentence Skeleton which is this...
  6. Literature

    Write an essay on "Do You Agree with Capital Punishment? This essay should have 5 paragraphs. In the 1st paragraph it must contain: Attention-grabbing beginning. Description of issue. Opinion Statement. In the 2,3, 4 paragraph should contain: Different reasons for each ...
  7. English

    Topic: Literature I'm doing an essay for my coursework on 'Romeo and Juliet' and 'Macbeth'. For my essay i have to compare the presentation of women, with focus on Lady Macbeth and Juliet. I have to focus on language, stage craft, characterization and the audience's reaction. ...
  8. english

    I needed to change my thesis statement(last sentence). It was too long. Please review. Imagine being 6’3” in the eighth grade and everyone in the school making comments about your height. There are definitely advantages and disadvantages to being tall. My best friend’s ...
  9. Grammar

    I have a question when to start a new paragraph in first person writing. First Paragraph: I talk about my observation. Second Paragraph: I say what my friend says. Should they be combined into one paragraph? I was confused because for the second paragraph I start with 'My ...
  10. Literature

    This essay should have 5 paragraphs. In the 1st paragraph it must contain: Attention-grabbing beginning. Description of issue. Opinion Statement. In the 2,3, 4 paragraph should contain: Different reasons for each paragraph. Evidence to support. In the 5th Paragraph it should ...
  11. English

    I need a good hook for an essay. The essay's about being a peer for the children at my school who are mantally disabled. My 1st paragraph is about what I do in the class, 2nd is about the kids, & 3rd is about special olumpics. Help PLEASEE!!!??
  12. Social Studies

    HELP!! I am writing an essay about comparing and contrasting slaves and indentured servants, and I need help coming up with a conclusion paragraph!! Anyone have ANY IDEAS?!?!?!?!? Your concluding paragraph should not introduce any new information. It summarizes what you've ...
  13. y912f

    I think I remember you wrote a short essay on this, and I commented that the economics is silly. Here is one the payback period is 88 years, but the panels only last 30 years. This is typical. http://www.dallasnews.com/sharedcontent/dws/news/localnews/stories/...
  14. English

    1. Choose the letter of the one sentence in which quotations and underlining are correctly used. A. I hope, commented Josh, that I do well enough to make it to the final race. B. "I hope," commented Josh, "that I do well enough to make it to the final race." C. "I hope," ...
  15. English

    Im not sure where to find a website that can help me write a "hook" in my 1st paragraph in my essay please
  16. English

    What all should I include in my intro paragraph for a 5 paragraph essay? My topic is about how people take eyesight for granted.
  17. Quotes in essays

    I want to put a quote at the very beginning of my essay. How do I go about doing that? Should it be the same or a smaller font than the rest of my essay? I'm planning on putting the quote, then starting a new paragraph to begin the actual essay. Should I center it? Skip how ...
  18. Social Studies

    I'm writing an essay on North Korea. A few years ago in Social Studies, I remember watching a documentary that featured Americans who were illegally in North Korea to do charity work so there would be less starvation. Would you be able to help me find some stories/names of ...
  19. Social studies

    i need to make an essay about two stories 1st- the tell tale heart 2nd- the speckled band, sherlock holmes story the only problem is the essay needs to be about what they have in common and what differences they have and mix it into paragraphs any help?
  20. English

    Can someone give me or tell me how I can go about writing a good attention getter 1st sentence for my 5-paragraph essay on the book The Crucible? Thanks
  21. English

    As a general rule, where in your essay is it best to place your thesis statement? A. In the first, introductory paragraph of the essay B. Anywhere at all, because the best thesis statement is implied, not specified C. In the second or third paragraph of the body of the essay D...
  22. Eng. Proofread Please

    Can you profread this for me please? Overall the essay is very well developed and has some good concepts. After reading the entire essay I found the statement of conflict paragraph to be the weakest. The topic sentence that use really grabs the readers attention. The concepts ...
  23. English

    Which of the following is a good rule to follow when proofreading an essay? A. Scan the essay twice, once for organization and once for surface errors. B. Ask your best friend to critique your essay. C. Use the computer's spell-check and grammar-check functions to be sure you ...
  24. AP US History DBQ Question

    For my midterm I was given a list of DBQ topics that she will pick from to give to us. I wrote the question below and I don't have the documents yet, but I have a general outline and I'm hoping people on this site can give me opinions and some more substance to my ideas. ...
  25. health

    Which of the following is true of psychosocially healthy people? a. They are uncomfortable when put in new social situations. b. They frequently experience guilt. c. They value human diversity. d. They avoid new experiences.
  26. English

    We are to write a phase autobiography. English is my second language. Could you just point out some obvious mistakes or awkwardness? These are just segments of my imperfect essay that I am not quite confident to show. Even when his raven hair suddenly turned so white, and had ...
  27. Exposition: How-to Essay (Writeacher)

    I have been assigned to write a 3-paragraph how-to essay. Should I number each paragraph? If not, why?
  28. Social Studies 7R - DBQ (PLZ read!!!)

    I'm almost done with my essay. I just have to choose one more document which means that I have to write another paragraph and I have to write the conclusion. Plus I want to add something for my second paragraph. the similarities between the south and the north, Sectionalism...
  29. Essay help

    I am writing a 5 paragraph reflective essay about domestic violence and how it has changed my views. The thing about a reflective essay is that you are supposed to compare your topic to a larger social view and I am having trouble doing this with the topic of domestic violence...
  30. Social Studies 7R - DBQ Essay

    I have this assignment for my social studies class. We have to write a DBQ essay on the American Revolution. We had done the documents for homework and go over it as a class. Here are the tasks below: 1. Identify and discuss two causes of the American Revolution 2. Describe ...
  31. Essay on Marriage and Living Together

    I need an essay about this subject, it has to include: - Opening paragraph - paragraphs 2,3 present two syrong supporting reasons for the proposition's adoption - paragraph 4 presents one argument of opposition, which you disprove - paragraph 5 presents another supporting ...
  32. writing

    i have a writing topic i have to write a 3 paragraph essay on it. The topic is: "Think about other animal stories you have read or seen. What purpose do such stories often serve? Are they written merely to entertain, or to teach a lesson? Write a (minimum 3 paragraph) essay ...
  33. English

    I have a question regarding my intro paragraph for my essay, this is MLA format. If I have a quotation at the beginning of my essay and it is longer than 4 lines, what I say next following the quotation, the first sentence, does it have to be indented? Example: below's ...
  34. english

    Hi. Can you help me with my homework? I have to write a 5 paragraph essay that is due to tomorrow. It is about: should us 5th readers have fun Fridays. But what I mostly need help is how to write a 5 paragraph essay. Thank you for your help. Have a nice night.
  35. Writing

    Expository essay prompt: Describe the evolution of communication in the last 20 years since the advent of the Internet. Note: I wrote the essay in 15 minutes. Please give me some feedback and rate my essay from 1 (lowest to 5 ( highest). My essay: In today's world, it is ...
  36. Question about college application

    I had submitted a college application essay three days ago, but after I submitted it, I felt so uncomfortable with that one, because the essay was so bad, but I had to do that, it was the last day for priority application. Since I could not change anything for my application ...
  37. Literature Essay (Writeacher)

    Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.
  38. Literature Essay (Writeacher)

    Writeacher, I truly need your help. I must finish this essay tonight but I am struggling. I read my thesis statement along with the first body paragraph, but it doesn't correspond whatsoever! I think I may need to rewrite the entire first paragraph. I don't know what to do.
  39. HUM

    Could you please help me re word this paragraph. I need it to be at least 100 words, but this one that I did was not good enough. Social media sites have affected commerce because people can advertise to thousands of people all at once through different sites. Social media ...
  40. english

    Can anyone check my HOMEWORK for me? Its due today..thank you . I am writinfg an essay, 2 paragraphs with a minimum of 350 words. I am to explaining my point of view and what I plan to accomplish on my final essay for the sememester. I have chosen a Topic already for the final...
  41. english

    I am writing an oppossing view essay. For this part of the essay we are not supposed to take a stance. The teacher has broken the assignment into 2 parts. The 1st part is actually just to help us learn how to write our final essay. I have pulled alot of research together, just...
  42. english

    you are to write a one or two paragraph essay on a topic of your choice. can i get some guidence and maybe a couple of good topics i should write about. i don't even know how to write a one or two paragraph essay. like how long should the intro be and the body and then how do ...
  43. English 7 (Ms. Sue)

    Ms. Sue I need your help for the second paragraph for my essay. I need 3 supporting deatils for this paragraph but I got 1, need 2 more. Rosa Parks wanted people (blacks) to be free and have a better education. Most blacks couldn't go to the same schools as whites they went to...
  44. Essay Help

    Could you please help me form an introduction paragraph for my essay? It's a comparison and contrast essay, where I am comparing two songs. I need help! Thank you.
  45. English

    Is this a okay paragraph? Can someone help me with it? People write on their wall about their daily life in social networking because people discuss about their life and to conversation with their friends or even people we do not even know. I would go on other people’s wall ...
  46. Statistics

    in a medical examination, 300 people undergo a height measurement and was found out that the average height of all are 150cm. if the standard deviation is 19, find the number of people that fall under the given conditions: a)with the height less than 132cm. b)with height from ...
  47. English

    ya so I have to write this essay and I'm completly lost Were reading the story The Stranger which I have already finished about a week ago I remember this guy who meets this one guy and a dog and the main charecter dosent' care if he gets maried to this girl who want to marry ...
  48. SS8R: National Convention: The Female Voice Essay

    I have this assignment for my Social Studies class about the National Convention. Well most of you know about the National Convention thing since you watch Republicans or Democratic. The essay is focusing on First Lady Michelle Obama and Ann Romney. They gave speeches at their...
  49. history

    PLEASE HELP. I need someone to help me on an overdue history essay that concerns Ancient India and The Caste System. I'm super confused and my mind's all over the place. No, I'm not asking someone to do it for me, just ANYTHING to help :) Here is the directions if anyone cares...
  50. English

    1. Hyundae Motor Corporation is a big company in our country. We can see many cars made in Hyundae these days. Even in the USA, we can see Hyundae cars. They are not so expensive that many people seem to buy them in the world. It can be a pleasure to see cars made in Korea in ...
  51. English

    A body paragraph in an essay is one that: A. expounds upon the thesis of the essay. B. brings closure to the piece. C. features footnoted information. D. introduces the ideas that will be covered in the essay. A
  52. English 11 (Novel Study No country for old men)

    Im doing an essay on the lack of redemption shown in the novel No country for old men. I needs 1000-1200 words and i got about 7 paragraphs these include -Thesis -Body paragraph 1(the corruption of money) -Body paragraph 2(the curruption of youth) -Body Paragraph 3(Need a ...
  53. English.

    What am I suppose to do? I chose House M.D. as my show. I don't understand what this assignment is asking exactly. Essay Assignment (Essay 2) Now that you have summarized a television series, go back and examine the characters. How does the television show portray 1) race, 2) ...
  54. English

    I'm writing an essay that goes into how important body language and voice tone is. I remember reading a quote online that said something about how BLANK percent of what people take away from what you say is from how you say it, not what you say. But I forget the percent. If I ...
  55. English 11 (No country for Old men Novel Study)

    Im doing an essay on the lack of redemption shown in the novel No country for old men. I needs 1000-1200 words and i got about 7 paragraphs these include -Thesis -Body paragraph 1(the corruption of money) -Body paragraph 2(the curruption of youth) -Body Paragraph 3(Need a ...
  56. social studies

    What are the causes of problems the Mayas and other Native American groups face in Guatemala? How are people trying to solve these problems? I don"t need a full essay just a summary to base my essay off of.
  57. English

    My 1st grade son needs to write a paragraph but is having a very hard time grasping the concept. How can I help him with this? He doesn't under stand that the paragraph has to blend/flow and be about the same topic all the way through. What shoudl I do?
  58. social help needed

    1 how did the earliest people adapted their environment? 2 how the development of agriulture changed the way people lived? 3 describe the contributions early people made yo later civilizations?
  59. Social STUDIES

    a geographer studying developing countries would be most interested in which of the following questions? a.what economic changes can be made to ensure a better future? b. what changes can be made in natural resources use? c.what are the social effects of technological change? ...
  60. English

    For the last paragraph of are essay it's war as a social disease vs. non-conformity. What would some possible solutions be for eliminating non-conformity as a social disease?
  61. Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)

    How should I begin this assigned essay? Write an essay in what ways today people are more fearful than people in past generations. You may use examples from real life, the selection you just read, books, movies, music, or television.
  62. History

    Which of the 1st explorers made one of the 1st maps of the North American coast?
  63. english question about writing comparative essay

    For a comparative essay, i don't really know what to do once i've made my elaborations on both books for the body paragraph. example of what i did: topic sentence, talk about book #1, quote, elaborate. talk about book #2, elaborate...... and i'm stuck after this.
  64. US History

    I need to write a 5 paragraph essay defending my position on why I don't want American made products only, and why an open economy is better. Can I get some links/opinions or something to help me with this..? Thanks -MC
  65. social studies

    i need to write a 4 paragraph criteria essay on compare and contrast buddishm and hinduism on a 6th grade level
  66. social studies

    I need a web- cite for a essay on the history and how Pioneer wooden toys are made.I've looked but can't find a cite on how they are made.
  67. Social Studies

    How can you remember that a democracy has people who rule themselves?
  68. English

    I'm a 1500 comparative essay on 2 books. I was wondering what the layout should be like? How does this look? Introduction (with thesis) Paragraph 1/subtopic 1 (book 1) Paragraph 2/subtopic 1 (book 2) Paragraph 3/subtopic 2 (book 1) Paragraph 4/subtopic 2 (book 2) Paragraph 5/...
  69. Essay

    I'm trying to start an essay paragraph with the topic " Contributing to the community" and I was wondering if this is a good starting sentence.If not, please give me some ideas or suggestions for one.Thanks -Everyone in life had made significant contributions to the community ...
  70. English-Ms. Sue

    my other question; What is the purpose of this essay? How can you tell? The purpose of this essay is to give us a better understanding of puns. how can I tell? - In this essay it gives selections of puns, that are all different. Please add any more info, thanks. How would I ...
  71. english essay

    Pls help me..give me a best sample of introduction (paragraph 1) and Conclusion(p.6) & keywords of the contents(p.2-5) about "Why people should quit gambling."
  72. Social studies

    Was Robespierre a hero or villain? What were some of the things he did (good and bad). Im writing a multi- paragraph essay and I don't really get who he is and what he did. (Ms. Sue;)
  73. essay intro thesis help please

    It has been ten years since I came to America with my family, and in the summer of 2006, my parents finally decided to take me to the most fun place in the world: Disneyland. I have waited for this day since the second I found about this place. It was that time I enjoyed ...
  74. English

    The topic sentence of a body paragraph provides a thesis link by ________. A. revising the thesis to fit the body paragraph B. introducing the thesis of the essay C. mentioning the general subject of the essay D. providing an example that underscores the thesis
  75. ELA

    In a paragraph compare and any two of the following forms of poetry: concrete, haiku or limerick. Your essay should include a specific description of each of the two forms you choose. Explain how each of the two forms are alike and how they are different. Support your opinion ...
  76. Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)

    How much more of the wordiness should I eliminate from my essay? I desperately want to receive an excellent grade for this assignment, but I can't if you refuse to read any more of my revisions. I don't want to bother you or make you upset, but I still need your help. Should I...
  77. math

    abigail works at a skateboard shop. she earns $8 per hour and $1 commission for each sale she makes. from june 1st to june 5th, she saves all her money and doesn't spend anything. each day,from june 1st to june 5th, abigail worked 3 hours .on june 1st,abigail made 2 sales. .on...
  78. sciencs

    i have to wright a five paragraph essay about erosion i need some suggestions on what to wright or how i should i wright it because its confusing to me i have no idea how to wright or format a 5 paragraph essay
  79. English

    I'm writing an essay about stating my position on whether everyday people can be considered heroes. Can someone give me some ideas of what each paragraph should be about? Like how should I make it flow? Please help
  80. physics

    A superball is dropped from rest from a height of 2.0m. It bounces repeatedly from the floor, as superballs are prone to do. After each bounce the ball dissipates some energy, so eventually it comes to rest. The following pattern is observed: After the 1st bounce, the ball ...
  81. physics

    A superball is dropped from rest from a height of 2.0m. It bounces repeatedly from the floor, as superballs are prone to do. After each bounce the ball dissipates some energy, so eventually it comes to rest. The following pattern is observed: After the 1st bounce, the ball ...
  82. 7th Grade English

    I have this project for english about the PTA Reflections. Ok you see we have to write a 5 paragraph essay in which I discuss what you believe diversity means. Be sure yo have a topic sentence for each new paragraph, and provide supporting details. Please be creative and come ...
  83. 10th grade english

    Write an essay comparing Baldwin's account of the Titanic with Rosenthal's account of his visit to Auschwitz.In your paragraph, explain how the tone and purpose of each essay is different. Support your argument with at least one example from each essay.
  84. English Follow Up

    For the last paragraph of are essay it's war as a social disease vs. non-conformity. Do you think that I would be better off doing war as a social disease vs. Addiction What would some possible solutions be for eliminating addiction as a social disease? Or should I stick to ...
  85. Social Studies

    Essay: What was life like for the poor people of Rome? How did the empire try to keep the poor people loyal? PLZ HELP I HAVE NOBODY TO TURN TOOO
  86. speech

    Choose one of the following topic sentences. Write an eight-sentence paragraph that fully develops the topic. A. The number of automobile accidents in my town can be reduced. B. People are moving from the cities to the suburbs in increasing numbers C. Getting along with other ...
  87. AP US History

    Is a DBQ supposed to be a generic 5-paragraph essay or is it a certain length??? A DBQ is a question based upon facts presented in a document. For most purposes, it can be any length. But the generic 5-paragraph essay is a standard. Check this site for more information. http...
  88. English

    In the concluding paragraph of an essay, is the thesis supposed to be restated at the beginning of the paragraph or at the end?
  89. rela 10H

    requirenment for essay: Attention-grabber: Relevant quotation Create imagery to evoke imagination Fragment & general discussion Hypothetical question Who/what/when/where/why/how the mystery began (why is it mysterious?) Ask the question from the list of choices Briefly (one or...
  90. ENG1511

    Hi, I need help please. I have to write 3pges of an argumentative essay. I have to provide heading which summaries my point of view and then write a convincing argument in support of my views. The topic is:- Social media have made our lives easier. Write an essay in which you ...
  91. english

    what's an introduction Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. An introduction "introduces" what you are going to say! The thesis statement could be in the introductory paragraph but it isn't necessarily always there. Here might be an easy way to remember the parts...
  92. HISTORY

    Write a short paragraph that traces the rise of Japan from an isolated society to a major industrial and imperial power. I have to write an essay, so if you can write me a short paragraph that answers and summarizes my question, then I can write my essay. Thank you everyone at...
  93. LA

    "Always to remember" is an essay about the Vietnam Veterans Memorial. It also includes photographs of the memorial and of Maya Lin. In an essay, explain whether the text and pictures together give you enough information to understand why the Vietnam Veterans Memorial is ...
  94. Language Arts

    Always to remember" is an essay about the Vietnam Veterans Memorial. It also includes photographs of the memorial and of Maya Lin. In an essay, explain whether the text and pictures together give you enough information to understand why the Vietnam Veterans Memorial is ...
  95. y912f

    Consumers can encourage manufacturers to keep their operations in the United States by buying only American-made products. Do you want to buy only products made in the United States(NO). Write a five paragraph essay defending your position. i just need some key points or ...
  96. Language arts

    What is the error in the following paragraph? Advertisers use many tricks to get people to buy their products. Some people will buy anything that is on television. One such trick is called the bandwagon technique. It could also be called the "Everybody Else Is Doing It" ...
  97. English

    I need a Introduction paragraph on online banking. Your introductory paragraph introduces what you say in your essay. It should include your thesis sentence.
  98. Social Studies

    I need a 4 paragraph essay on the devil's arithmetic. my theme is "no laugh, no hope. NO hope, no life." THANK YOU (: im not passing and i reallllllly neeed help on this
  99. english

    I'm writing an essay about the play "Antigone". The question is: "Write an essay in which you argue whether Antigone did the right thing. Should she have buried her brother or obeyed the decree by her uncle? Support your answer with at least two references to the play." I was ...
  100. english

    Please read the following excerpt from an essay, and answer the question that follows. I've never actually met a real live humorist. Well, not in person at any rate. However, one summer, having a lot of time on my hands, I discovered unexpected treasures lurking in the local ...
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