Revise This, I believe paper

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please revise journ

Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.

english-please revise

Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...

English

1. When taking notes from your sources, you should also ________. A. revise your research question B. write the information needed for your works cited list C. format your paper and works cited list D. find a topic for your research paper 2. Academic writing involves which of ...

social studies

origin of man efik believe christian believe islamic believe yoruba believe igbo believe hausa believe tiv believe badagry believe

Research Writing

How do you do this? I am lost. My topic I chose is Homeless. Summary of the Research Process I. Begin the project. A. Think about the assignment. B. Analyze your audience and the purpose for which you are writing. C. Select an appropriate topic. D. Formulate a viable argument...

English - question

Ms. Sue, What kind of strategies can I use to revise my paper?

Art

I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...

english

write two paragraph explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper.

English

Revise the following sentence to omit personal pronouns. I think it is important for you to evaluate information before it in a paper. It's important to evaluate information before including in your paper. Please check my work.

philosophy

I have to write a 1 page paper "presenting what i believe the world is made of and explain why i believe that to be the case" and he said it doesn't deal with like water and land, so im not sure what he means, any help would be great.

math

Aimi is making Valentine's Day cards for everyone in her class. She plans to use a whole sheet of paper for each of her 5 closest friends. She will use 1/2 of a sheet of paper for everyone else in the class. She has 15 sheets of paper. How many cards can she make? The choices ...

American Government

How did people vote during colonial times? A. by machine B. by punch cards C. by voice D. by paper ballot I believe its either by paper ballot or voice

ENG COMP

List the sources you have found that you believe will be most helpful to you in preparing your final research paper. Identify the types of sources you believe will be most useful and where you intend to search for these sources.

Macbeth

Hi there. I have to write a paper on why some people believe that Lady Macbeth could be Duncan's daughter. I don't need help in writing it, I just want to know reasons why that could be true. I believe one of them is because Lady Macbeth knew that she could not be queen since ...

English

Valmy gets a paper from the safe - a paper with a drawing on it. ------------------- What is the meaning of 'paper' in the sentence? Do we have to use 'a' before 'paper' or not?

eng091

revise thesis statement Thesis sentence: When I order the liquors for my business I believe it is a useless expense of using the online service, because I have to order certain quantities from the liquor commission, but when parties are given for our clientele, I find out that...

English

Can somesome read this for me and give me any feedback that's necessary. The first paper that I wrote was a narration paper this paper deals with joining a series of events within the first paper that I wrote I walk you through how you really cant trust in a professional ...

Social Studies paper

im doing a paper and i'm at the end argument and i don't know what i can add on, ideas??? Paper is the most important invention that came out of ancient China. Paper has change are life. But not just for one person many people, like artist for instant, they need paper to make ...

English

Valmy gets a paper from the safe - a paper with a drawing on it. ========================= Is 'a paper' right? Don't we have to use 'a piece of paper'? A piece of paper with a drawing on it?

english check answer plz !

i think its A. but i also got C. As you are reading your research paper aloud,you notice that all your sentences start the same way. What should you do A.revise some of the sentence so there is variety. B.read the sentences with a more engaging voice C.add definitons of ...

COM 155

I have been asked to explain if it is a good idea to write a summary before writing the paper. Will someone please look over my work. I feel it is always a good idea to draft anything that you are writing. This will give you an opportunity to revise, add more information, take...

English.

1. I just can't believe it! 2. I simply can't believe it! 3. I exactly can't believe it! ------------------- Thank you very much for your help. You said #1 mean #2. Then, what about #3? What is the meaning of #3? What is the difference between #1 and #3?

English expression

I will distribute a piece of paper to each of you. Hand down the pieces of paper (In a line composed of two people in each row.). Pass them to the students back. Do you have a piece of paper? OK. Write down your name on the paper. Then take the paper attached to the double-...

math

glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday,1/14 of her paper on tuesday,and 2/28 of her paper on wednesday.she said she wrote more than half of her paper,is she correct?why or why not?

Math

Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2.28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? Why or why not?

Math

Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2/28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? Why or why not?

math

Glenda wrote 1/7 of her paper on Monday, 1/14 of her paper on Tuesday, and 2/28 of her paper on Wednesday. She said she wrote more than half of her paper. Is she correct? why or why not?

englishe- please revise

Now that you have finished your research paper, what advice would you give to students starting this course? What would you do differently if you were just starting the course? On what would you focus more? On what would you focus less? Explain your answers. My answer: As I ...

Personal Finance

The financial planning process concludes with efforts to: A. review and revise your actions. B. create a financial plan of action. C. analyze your current personal and financial situation. D. review the financial plan. I believe its A

law

Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business ...

algebra

last month mayfield paper comapny sold 58 more than 3 times as many reams of paper a superior comapany if the two companies sold a total of 870 reams of paper how many reams of paper did mayfield paper company sell

Behavioral Science

I have a assignment du and kind of confused after reading the text the assignment is write 700- to 1,050-word essay in which you compare and contrast the influence of heredity and hormones on human behavior. I am not sure exactily how to start this paper to me I believe that ...

English/ please revise

this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethnic conflict and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...

English-writeacher

Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I got the grade back for that english paper you helped me write a few weeks back...the movie analysis on A Walk to Remember. I got a B! : ) But I have a chance to revise it according to the teachers comments and turn it in for a better ...

English

I urgently need you to revise this paragraph on dinosaurs. I need to simplify it using synonyms. 1) Whatever killed off (synonym??) the dinosaurs almost certainly had a bearing (I need a proper synonym) on the rest of the mass extinction, which was on a global scale and ...

Physics

Two pieces of paper are on a DVD movie disk. Paper A is farther from the center of the disk than Paper "B". The DVD disk starts to play and then starts to spin. Which statement is true? a. Paper "A" experiences a greater tangential acceleration than Paper "B" b. Paper "A" ...

Physics

Two pieces of paper are on a DVD movie disk. Paper A is farther from the center of the disk than Paper "B". The DVD disk starts to play and then starts to spin. Which statement is true? a. Paper "A" experiences a greater tangential acceleration than Paper "B" b. Paper "A" ...

English

1. What is the person doing in Picture 1? He is cutting out a flower on the light green paper with a pair of scissors. 2. A person is joining the red paper to the purple paper. 2-1. A person is joining the red paper and the purple paper with a paper fastener. 3. A person is ...

word problem(algebra)

on monday,Linus made 5k paper cranes&gave 2k paper cranes to his friends.on tuesday,he made another 4k paper cranes.his friend gave him 5 paper cranes.how many paper cranes does he have now in terms of k? Help me please !

english

please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...

english

please help revise In the research analysis paper I will write about black women and their oppression. I will focus on how black women have overcome oppression and look at women in power such as Oprah, Condalisa Rice, and other. The body of the paper will work to prove my ...

Math

Q.Bettler Elementary School was recycling thier copier paper after the students had completed worksheets. they found that when they filled the barrel with paper it weighed an avearge of 463 pounds. if they collected 16 barrels of paper during the year. what was the approximate...

psychology paper

Hello I have to write a paper and part of the paper is asking for information I am not sure which way to go if some one can please help me with this I would appreciate it the section I am having a problem with is Explain the criticism of artificiality in the discipline of ...

english report

i have to do a persuasive paper on a canidate for president, im not asking for who you think should be president im asking if you think this is a good introduction. please if you can help me. Obama said this before, “I’m you to believe. Not just in my ability to bring ...

english - Ms. Sue - Please revise

o In the future, how will thinking critically influence the ways that you: · Read? · Write? · Process information? o Why and how could you apply critical thinking when evaluating each of the following: · Articles · Advertising · Media · Conversations Here is my answer: ...

Math

John is passing out RED, WHITE, and BLUE construction paper for an art project. There are (12) people in his group. John, who likes to show off, tells everyone to watch closely as he hands out the paper. The first person gets a RED paper. John puts the second paper at the ...

Algebra

On Monday, Linus made 5k paper cranes and gave 2k paper cranes to his friends. On Tuesday, he made another 4k paper cranes. His friend gave him 5 paper cranes. How many paper cranes does he have now in terms ok k?

paper!!final help plz

im doing a paper on anceiant agriculture i have wtiiten the paper but i need an into sentence just a good first sentencee

to ms.sue project

so if i use construction paper, its the same length as the copy paper? but if i use construction paper, wont it be hard to write on?construction paper is kinda rough.

to ms.sue project

this is what it says for the paper: You will create a trait flipbook based on a character from the book Holes. You will need two sheets of 8 1/2 by 11 – inch white construction paper, scissors, a stapler, and colored pencils or crayons for this assignment. can i just use ...

Science

A boxer punches a sheet of paper in midair, bringing it from rest to a speed of 25m/s^2 in 0.05 secind. The mass of the paper is 0.003 kg. Show the force of the punch on the paper is only 1.5 N.

physics

a boxer punches a sheet of paper in mid air, bringing it from rest up to a speed of 25 m/s in 0.05 second. The mass of the paper is 0.003 kg. Show that the force of the punch on the paper is only 1.5 N.

hirsch funnel filter paper

I used a filter paper that was too large for the Hirsch funnel and had to fold it up around the edges. Why is it bad to fold the edges of the paper? One reason is that it is difficult to "seal" the paper for a proper vacuum to be pulled. Another is that solid may creep onto ...

conclusions - check answer

Which of the following is a true statement about writing introductions of rough drafts? A. Do not worry about the central point of your essay; it will happen later on as you revise your paper. (MY ANSWER) B. Pay close attention to the correct spelling of your words. C. Make ...

Math- Prob Stat

In a Gallop Poll, 35% 18-23 year old's stated that they believe in ghosts. Find the probability that out of 16 students aged 18-23: A. Exactly 5 said they believed in ghosts. B. Exactly 5 said they do not believe in ghosts. C.Less than 11 said they do not believe in ghosts. D...

popular american culture

hi i had to write a paper on print media and i sent my paper though writepoint and it said that this phrase of my paper was to wordiness and consider revising nothing inappropriate so what else could i say thank you

English

Do you believe in love at first sight? Romeo and Juliet evidently did. The play covers the time-span of only a few days. In this short period of time, Romeo and Juliet fall in love so passionately that they are willing to die if they cannot be together. craft a thesis about ...

math

an artist buys a rectangular piece of paper for his artwork. he cuts the piece of paper into 8 equal strips. he uses 6 strips of paper and keeps the rest. what fraction of the rectangular piece of paper did he use?

Physics

Any help appreciated! Pull out a blank piece of paper from your exam book. Hold it from one of its ends and blow air horizontally over the top of the paper as shown in the figure below. If you blow hard enough you will see the paper rise to become almost horizontal. (a) ...

XCOMM 285

Assignment: Tuition Reimbursement Implementation Report · Review the following scenario: Your company has had a very profitable year and is looking to expand their employee benefits. As an employee in the benefits department, you have been asked to prepare a report to ...

maths

what is the volume of box if volume of cylinder is 48.125 cubic cm, which formed by rolling a rectangular paper sheet along the length of the paper. if a cuboidal box (open lid) made from the same sheet of paper by cutting out the four square of the side 0.5 cm from each of ...

Introduction to Psychology

Okay I have to do short paper on my results for a survey that I did to determine which branch of psychology I would be best suited for. My results were Behavioral: 20, Humanistic: 20, and Psychoanalytical: 17. I think my main problem is getting all of the information I need ...

Math

What Would Be The Coordinates Of The Center Of The Hole In The Paper For The Following? If a piece of paper is a plane in the X & Y axes & the Z axis is a pencil that is stabbed straight down through the paper at the point where the X & Y axes meet, then the coordinates of the...

research writing as a process

Question 20 What does a thesis statement do? explains how you came up with your topic announces what you plan to do in your paper introduces the controlling idea of your paper lays out the process of your paper my answer introduces the controlling idea of your paper

English

Can you check these few sentences, please? 1) Wait! I'll help you with your shopping. I'll take the shopping for you. 2) Do you know what will happen if you don't pay the bill? 3) As soon as he finishes school, he'll look for job. The station is too far from here, I'll take ...

english

I need help writing a paper for my written analysis course. It is a paper to be written on, "How I solved a problem." I have to incorporate critical and creative thinking with this paper.

English Paper

We're currently writing a paper this week , so I need help writing my paper . I just want to know how to start it . Like how to get a good "Pop culture" in the introductory paragraph ?

HRM 240

Final Project paper. how do i go about setting up my paper to make sure i discuss all of the things that are being asked of me for my final paper.

math

There are 3 red paper clips, 5 yellow paper clips, and 6 silver paper clips in a jar. What is the ratio of the total number of paper clips to the number of red paper clips? 14:3 11:3 3:14 or 3:11

Social Studies

i'm writing a paper and i had a brain-fart so what is something develop after paper and paper was develop 100 BC

HIT 105 research paper

I am doing a paper on HIPAA and I need to cite my work. Have the paper finished but I am having problems citing my work. Could someone help me please?

science

What are the uses of various papers? How can flexible paper and absorbent paper- be used? How can paper be used for writing and burning?

math

Hill crest public elementary school was recycling their copier paper after the students had completed the worksheets.They found that when they filled a barrel with paper,it weighed an average of 225 kilograms if they collected 16 barrels of paper during the year.What was the ...

physics(capacitors)

A sheet of paper 40mm wide and (1.5 x 10^-2) thick is placed between a metal foil of the same width is used to make a 2.0 UF capacitor. If the dielctric constant(relative permitivity of the paper is 2.5 ,what length of paper is required?

HUM 130

Christians, I am referring to denominations, not individual people. 1. Do all Christians believe in baptism? Explain. 2. Do all Christians honor their spiritual heroes as saints (formally)? Explain. 3. How many religions believe in or have a pope? Explain. 4. Do all Christian ...

maths --plse help me..

THE VOLUME OF A CYLINDER IS 48.125cm cube , WHICH IS FORMED BY ROLLING A RECTANGULAR PAPER SHEET ALONG THE LENTH OF THE PAPER . IF A CUBOIDAL BOX ( WITHOUT ANY LID i.e , OPEN AT THE TOP ) IS MADE FROM THE SAME SHEET OF PAPER BY CUTTING OUT THE SQURE OF SIDE 0.5 cm FROM EACH OF...

Reading

can you help me thank you: 2.Detecting bias is one of the major keys to effective critical thinking and reading. True or False, I believe True 3.Deductively valid arguments can guarantee their conclusions. True or False, I believe it is false 4.A fallacy is an unreliable and ...

Math

The printer in Nate and Beth's office was out of paper. So, they put a ream of paper in the printer, 500 sheets. Nate then printed 72 sheets. Beth then added 30 sheets of paper to the printer. What was the net change in the number of pieces of paper in the printer from after ...

Math

Jay's term paper is 18 pages long. If Madison's paper is 175% of the length of Jay's paper, find the length of Madison's paper.

maths-urgently needed

The volume of a cylinder is 48.125 cm3, which is formed by rolling a rectangular paper sheet along the length of the paper. If cuboidal box (without any lid i.e., open at the top) is made from the same sheet of paper by cutting out the square of side 0.5 cm from each of the ...

Term Paper question

I've started writing a term paper and wondering if there is anyone or any place that I could submit my paper and get feedback before it's graded? It's worth a large portion of my grade & I'd like someone to review it when I'm done.

english question

i think its A. or C. Which among the following sentences is the most effective opening line (hook)? A.I hope that if you will read my paper, you will believe me when I tell you that John F. Kennedy was not assassinated as the result of a plot but by a single assailant. B. "...

Chemistry

If performing a gravimetric sulfate experiment and you use ordinary filter paper instead of ashless filter paper, would results be too high or too low? If I'm trying to calculate percentage of sulfate in a sample and I used ordinary filter paper, the paper will turn to ash ...

relative velocity please help exam tom.

the paper delivery boy tires to throw the paper ubti your narrow driveway without slowing down. his pickup truck travels at 10 mph and he throws the paper at 20 mph just as the truck passes the drive way. a) in what direction should he throw the paper in order for it to land ...

Maths

a rectangular piece of paper has length=14cm and breadth=12cm. A square piece of paper of perimeter 24 cm is cut off from it. what is the area of the piece of paper left

Revise This, I believe paper

Would you please revise this paper and tell me what I should or need to change? I want to make it sound as professional and correct as possible. Its a column for my journalism class. Thanks! This, I believe. By: Bryce People everywhere are protesting same-sex marriage in harsh...

physics

The radius of a roll of paper is 7.6 cm and its moment of inertia is I = 2.9 × 10^3 kg·m2. A force of 3.2 N is exerted on the end of the roll for 1.3 s, but the paper does not tear so it begins to unroll. A constant friction torque of 0.11 m·N is exerted on the roll which ...

College Final Project

I need to write a paper that stems from me interviewing another...so in sorts it is a Interview Profile Report that also compares and contrasts with me answering the same questions asked. What kind of paper is this for me to format my writing with...I am not sure how to ...

Term Paper help

Hey guys. I'm wondering if you can help me with my Term Paper, if you can help me outline it. My term paper is about Marijuana. Basically an expository. There is no other instructions.

AED 200

The assignment is: Final project is to write an Educational Debate Persuasive Paper on a current educational debate. I chose "Does Prepping for High-Stakes Tests Interfere with Teaching?" Read the "yes" and "no" opinions in the related chapter in the textbook. The paper will ...

childhood education

Which factors seem to be most important for development of make-believe play. A. children's readiness to engage in make- believe play and social experiences that promote it. B.opportunities for peer interaction in settings that inspire make-believe play.

Physics(Please help)

What characteristic of water would you be investigating when you place a small drop of water on wax paper and when you try to float a paper clip in water? I know that the paper clip does not float and that the drop of water rolls around on the paper.

English

I need help with my research paper outline.(ARE THERE ANY MISTAKES?) According to (author/source)Michael Martinez and Jaqueline Hurtado(Date 2014/11/15) the main idea about this subject is the parents does not believe in what the government said and that they are not doing ...

English- Shakespeare

Some people believe Shakespeare's plays were not really written by him. Soem people believe the real authors are anywhere from Francis Bacon to Queen Elizabeth while others support Edward de Vere. Who do you belive is the literary and historical Shakespeare. I believe the real...

business

• Prepare a 700- to 1,050-word paper in which you define the four functions of management (planning, organizing, leading, and controlling). In your paper, include an explanation of how each function relates to your own organization. • Cite at least two sources. If you used...

Physics

What characteristic of water would you be investigating when you place a small drop of water on wax paper and when you try to float a paper clip in water? I know that the paper clip does not float and that the drop of water rolls around on the paper.

Microeconomics

Producing paper creates pollution. The efficient quantity of paper is when the A. marginal social benefit of paper is equal to zero. B. marginal social cost of the pollution from making paper is equal to zero. C. marginal social of paper is equal to the marginal social cost of...

english

hi can someone help me I am having trouble understanding the meaning of this quote I believe that imagination is stronger than knowledge — That myth is more potent than history. I believe that dreams are more powerful than facts — That hope always triumphs over experience...

English

I have to do a research paper about something that has to do with my career field which is medical. My paper is on premature babies. My question is how do I do an outline before doing my research paper, how much information do I need to put in the outline?

MATH

Im not sure the formula for this- John bought 200 yards of paper for $1.95. Jack needs 40 yards of paper how much will it cost Jack for the paper ?

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