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Could you please tell me if this is a good thesis statement for an expository essay on the personal benefits and values that can be instilled from doing voluntary community service? The personal benefits and values that can be instilled from doing voluntary community service ...

english

The prompt states "Note the irony in Nadine Gordimer's Once Upon a Time. Argue to what affect and how successfully irony is used and what it accomplishes." I know that the irony lies in the fact that Gordimer starts the fairy tale by stating that she hates fairy tales and that...

Response Essay (Writeacher!)

How should I begin this? This response essay regards "Rules of the Game" by Amy Tan. The prompt: In Amy Tan's "Rules of the Game," we read about a generational tug of war. Write 3-paragraph essay in which you discuss the motivation of each generation. My thesis: Both Waverly, ...

history-addl to prev question

okay so I spent a few hours reading that stuff (thank you) more of the same of what the textbook, the class videos etc say. My theory is that the souths loss was bigger than the norths gain. The material suggested doesn't really delve into that. Based on that any further ...

Can you help me make my thesis sound clear & good

In the short story, "how much land does a man need," the author Leo Tolstoy would describe that human worth based on shallow measurements such as wealth and possessions make true love and humanity impossible because of greediness, the devil filling our minds with selfishness, ...

U.S. History-PLEASE HELP!!!

i need to find an example of something very specific that relates to the quote "America isn't supposed to have a master, that's not what it was built on. people should be their own master." i thought something to do w/ the frontier in the 1800s, and i found a quote that said ...

english

I am writing an oppossing view essay. For this part of the essay we are not supposed to take a stance. The teacher has broken the assignment into 2 parts. The 1st part is actually just to help us learn how to write our final essay. I have pulled alot of research together, just...

Geography / English

So I have to write an essay how do i rate canada when compared to the rest of the world. On the sheet it shows you a set up on how to write it Introductory Sentence/ Thesis -In my opinion, canada is favourable compared to the rest of the world. Supporting Evidence - Canada ...

English

I writing a 6 page research paper on "Teen Pregnancy", and i know my introduction pharagh should grab the readers attention, as well as the first sentence but I cant really think of any thing good or interesting. My three main topic are Birth rates, Consequences, and ...

English

Hi, I was wondering if somebody could help me understand this writing prompt. I'm not sure If I'm supposed to talk about the characters' different points of view in some goals toward achieving sucess or if I'm supposed to tell what each characters' goals were. While the ...

english 10

m doing an essay of Ray Bradbury's 3 short stories "The Veldt" "The House" and "The Cat's Pajamas" The theme of my essay is the conflicts of the story I have a point in my essay, they are: How each conflicts affect the different characters of different stories How each ...

English: Please help

18. What is one disadvantage of accessing the Internet through a public search engine such as or ? A.) It’s open to anyone, so the information comes from many different people. B.) You won’t be able to access documents that have not been published online. C.) A huge amount...

Elec. and Comm. Eng'g

This is my outline to my research paper. (Topic): The Importance of Networking in Selling Company's Product (Thesis Statement): Networking is the best way in selling company's product. I. What is importance of networking in selling company's product II. Applications of ...

English

I need help with my thesis statement for my term paper on Alcatraz. The paper focuses on Alcatraz history, Life on Alcatraz and Famous Prisoners and escapes (10th grade). I have: Alcatraz, a federal penitentiary, history of Alcatraz, life on Alcatraz, while Alcatraz was a ...

English

Suppose you're writing an essay about the process of changing a tire on your car. Which of the following is the best example of evidence to support your thesis? A. The first tires were bands of iron that were fitted by wheelwrights onto the rims of wooden cart and wagon wheels...

english

Writing an opposing view essay and am a little stuck on thesis statement. This is what I have so far.... Have you ever taken into consideration that with one action, whether it be a mistake or purposely done, you could be sentenced to death? Many of us do not realize how ...

History

Please Help. I would like to ask if it would have been possible with out the prior development of the Enlightenment? For instance, if some of the main issues that troubled Martin Luther (such as the Catholic Church's practice of requiring "tributes" for pray and/or forgiveness...

Please proofread my essay

Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis. Here is my prompt: 1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a ...

Antigone Essay due tmr!

Antigone is the true tragic hero because she acts without anticipating the consequences of her rebellion, realizes she has made an irreversible mistake only after it is too late to fix it, and is responsible for an unhappy ending for all of the characters. This is my thesis. I...

English 12

In your understanding is this thesis statement clear enough? What other improvements would you make? The topic is "Theme of Overcoming struggle in the course text" Many themes are presented in: Hamlet, Death of a Salesmen, Life of Pi, the Road, and the Kite Runner that ...

COM/220 RESEARCH WRITING

Can anyone help me or help me get started please? ASSIGNMENTS 1. CheckPoint: Full-Sentence Outline • Resources: Organizing Your Research Paper & Bias, Rhetorical Devices, and Argumentation • Due Date: Day 4 [Individual forum] • Review the criteria for full-sentence ...

COM/220 RESEARCH WRITING

Can anyone help me or help me get started please? ASSIGNMENTS 1. CheckPoint: Full-Sentence Outline • Resources: Organizing Your Research Paper & Bias, Rhetorical Devices, and Argumentation • Due Date: Day 4 [Individual forum] • Review the criteria for full-sentence ...

English

How does Day of the Triffids display evolution? i am having a hard time coming up with a thesis for Day of the Triffids to display evolution compared to Orxy and Crake... For Orxy and crake i know evolution is a distinct theam but i am experiencing difficulty finding this ...

English

1. Why would you do research to prepare for a personal comparison and contrast essay? A. To find additional examples to support you main idea. B. To find people to interview from your family. C.To find references for your essay. D. To evaluate websites. 2. Why is it important ...

american history

I am writing a research paper on the women's rights movement. I have to discuss whether it was a success or failure and support my answer with detail. I believe that in some ways it was a success and failure because even though women throughout the years has gain some respect ...

concude refuting paragraph

i don't know what to do on this one. my teacher told that i need to get the readers attention again back to my thesis which is girls are better friends than men. here's the paragraph. However, some people think that men are better in handling friendships. Even though men are ...

research writing

Create a full-sentence outline that includes effective arguments and counterguments to support your thesis. (NOTE: Outline only the body of your paper.) Rememeber to avoid bias and fallacies and to include rhetorical devices that strengthen your writing. Answer the following: ...

English Comp.

I'm hoping this is a better thesis statement, please let me know. "Although most Schools of Pharmacy have added cultural competency training to their curriculum, not all have added the Service learning experience, which should be a requirement for all schools which would ...

history

can someone help me write a thesis statement about susan B. Anthony and her role for helping women. It needs to be something along the lines of: Without Anthon'y creation of..........would not have been possible or Susan Anthony made the greatest contribution to women's ...

AP English

Hello I have to create a thesis statement comparing the stories "The Story of an Hour" and "The Open Window". I must convey which story (in my opinion) had the most twisted ending. Does this sound appropriate? "While both 'The Story of an Hour' and 'The Open Window' exhibited ...

Scince

am having trouble with Restate the problem in terms of the following: Manipulated variable Constant (control) variables Principles of experimental design State in correct form the hypothesis you intend to demonstrate. I have conducted the experiment but I am not sure how to ...

research writing as a process

Question 1 What is one of the first steps in a research project? to think about the purpose of the research project. to consult a writing center tutor to formulate a thesis statement to find all the research you'll need Question 2 Which of the following is a goal you may want ...

speech

Can some one please help me complete PRIMARY SUPPORT and SECONDARY SUPPORT for this speech topic outline? Thesis statement: studying foreign languages has influenced the way i think about people from other countries in 3 main ways..(why?) Primary Support 1:.......(because) ...

Sociology

Evaluate the impact the Sociological theories, Functionalism, Conflict, and Interactionism has by choosing one of the social institution selected from the list below: Social Institutions (choose one) family health-care religion education mass media politics economic In your ...

English

Nathan argues that each paragraph in a narrative should support the author's thesis. Nan says that paragraphs in a narrative should illuminate some part of the action. Which one is correct? A. Neither Nathan nor Nan is correct. B. Both Nathan and Nan are correct. C. Only Nan ...

Research essay

I'm supposed to write a research essay on dark matter. I'm supposed to use in-text citations, but I'm not sure how to. My teacher said that I have to cite anything that's not mine. I know this, but I'm just really confused as to how to write a science research essay as oppsed ...

Science

Hello, I am working on Methylene Blue dye adsorption for my thesis. I am embarassed to say I don't know basic chemistry. Anyway, my question is I have Methylene Blue Trihyrate 95%. I am trying to prepare stock solution. If I plan to make 1000 mg/l of solution, Is it as simple ...

English

Pablo insists that a conclusion should reinforce the thesis statement. Patrice says that the conclusion should follow logically from the introduction. Who is correct? A. Both Pablo and Patrice are correct. B. Neither Pablo nor Pam is correct. C. Only Pam is correct. D. Only ...

English: final revision - Ms. Sue

Thesis: The pathetic and alarming need for education of HIV/AIDS in Africa is overwhelming and the great need is to protect and educate people to reduce the disease. The author uses his wisdom to research statistics that are so compelling; the world has to take notice. The ...

English

Pablo insists that a conclusion should reinforce the thesis statement. Patrice says that the conclusion should follow logically from the introduction. Who is correct? A. Both Pablo and Patrice are correct. B. Neither Pablo nor Pam is correct. C. Only Pam is correct. D. Only ...

Classics

I am doing an essay on Aristophanes Clouds and The Trial and Death of Socrates by Plato. I am trying to find differences in the types of education Socrates provides? I am unclear whether he actually charges a fee in Plato ( it seems that he doesn't) ? It also seems that in ...

English

Which of the following is the best version of a thesis statement about charter schools? a. A charter school is a tax supported established by a charter between a school board and outside group of teachers or parents. b.A charter school operates without local and state ...

english

how to make this thesis on correct placement(Today the price of gasoline is at record high, which brings the question of whether or not the U.S. should start drilling more onshore or offshore. In order to bring now jobs on the market, and lessen the burden of high gas price on...

English

1. Why would an author use other words like adolescent, teen, or young people just to describe minor? 2. How do you correctly punctuate sentences containing documented evidence? 3. From this thesis statement , what topic can you form out of it: Some people may believe these ...

COM 220

I am doing a persuasive essay on the war against drugs and my thoughts towards doing drugs are against it. I need help with creating a thesis for my essay here is what I came uo with can someone help me please. 1. Drugs in reality may seem cool, but drugs aren’t cool when ...

Lang. Arts

4. Which of the following would not always require a citation in a research paper? A.quotation of a phrase B.quotation of a sentence C.sentence paraphrased from a book D.thesis statement I think this is C or D...? any suggestions? Thanks 5. Which of the following shows the ...

English

Can you please prove read my new essay using the checklist.The last one you guys helped me with was wrong because I didn't follow the checklist well and please tell me what I am missing. Thank you. (Quote) "Be good and you will be lonesome” Anecdote: It was one oppressively ...

English essay

Thesis is -Taking daughters to see their mothers in jail should be a program of its own.- I don't know if my topic sentence are correct: Negative affect on the amount of extra responsibility the girl scouts take on. Girl scouts has an age limit for not all girls can ...

history

compare and contrast two ancient civilizations. i had the choice between -indus -mesoamerica -egypt -mesopotamia -china haung he river i think im going to write about egypt and mesopotamia since they have alot on them... for now all i have to write is an intruductory paragraph...

Creative Writing

Hi, I have to write an essay on this topic. Describe a person (even yourself) at a time of great emotion; for example, joy, anger, grief, etc. I want to write about the day when my baby sister was born. I haven't done any work yet. i want to do some drafting work first so i ...

English Composition

I'm writing a synthesis paper for my college english composition class. My topic is: The relationship between social class and public education. So far, my thesis: My argument is that students in public education should not be discriminated against based on what social class ...

English

Quality openings typically exhibit the following components: SCENARIO: told in the 3rd person-even if t happened to you-- that connects creatively to the essay's central idea; instead of "I," use appositives to describe yourself ; a disinterested teenager, an aspiring gymnast...

english- adrienne rich and othello

I was wondering if anyone had any ideas or any type of thesis statements I could use for the following essay topic: Discuss women in Othello- Desdemona, emilia, Bianca- from the point of Adrienne rich. In what ways is each a victim of patriarchy? I thought I would spend a ...

english- adrienne rich and othello

I was wondering if anyone had any ideas or any type of thesis statements I could use for the following essay topic: Discuss women in Othello- Desdemona, emilia, Bianca- from the point of Adrienne rich. In what ways is each a victim of patriarchy? I thought I would spend a ...

U.S.History

please check In their Reconstrucion policies, both President Lincoln and President Johnson insisted upon a. sworn statements of allegiance from a majority of citizens b. imediate elections in all Southern states c. Soutehrn approval of the 13th Ammendment d. a fair ...

Past tense and Present tense in essay

“Antigone” written by Sophocles shows Antigone, the main character as a tragic hero. Antigone is the true tragic hero because she acts without anticipating the consequences of her rebellion, realizes she has made an irreversible mistake only after it is too late to fix it...

ENG 122 English Composition II

Which thesis sentence best addresses a counter-argument? Carbohydrates are not healthy for most people. Despite years dependence on calorie reduction to lose weight, medical intervention and personalized diet plans are more effective than a generic diet of strict caloric ...

english1A - still working on my thesis

I have a couple. If society would realize the true meaning of success and take advantage of opportunities available to them, they would know that with enough determination and motivation, dreams are definitely possible. Society not only needs to realize the true meaning of ...

english

which is a better thesis A. Because it has become outdated, the electoral college should be replaced by a system that allows the US president to be elected by direct popular vote. B. Rather than voting for a presidential candidate, voters in a US presidential election merely ...

Language Arts

I'm researching the book To Kill a Mockingbird, by Harper Lee. I'm looking for examples to strengthen and support my thesis statement that Jem and Scout started feeling that their father was older and more feeble towards the end of Part 1. Any ideas? http://www.sparknotes.com/...

English

Hi i am writing a response paper for "Cathedral" by Raymond Carver. Im not sure but is this a proper thesis statement. In the short story Cathedral, by Raymond Carver, a man refers to Robert as "this blind man." Not only is he categorizing Robert, but he's also making wrongful...

English

Hi i am writing a response paper for "Cathedral" by Raymond Carver. Im not sure but is this a proper thesis statement. In the short story Cathedral, by Raymond Carver, a man refers to Robert as "this blind man." Not only is he categorizing Robert, but he's also making wrongful...

English

I have to write a paper on an author and then effectively persuade the audience that this author is an important and influential writer who should be included in the curriculum for a college writing course. I chose Ernest Hemingway. This is my thesis - Hemingway's distinctive ...

College Writing

I have to write a research paper and my topic is about HSP which is highly sensitive people, and writers, artists and musicians. I'm struggling about how to form a thesis because the assignment requires us to prove something. My main idea is about how HSP which is a ...

English Essay

I am supposed to write a comparison essay for English. Related to Online Vs Traditional Dating. Could you help me make a strong thesis? Technology has brought many innovations in human life and one of the greatest for many is online dating. However just like Traditional dating...

english

Write a four paragraph literary essay in response to the following question. Be sure to include a thesis statement in your introduction, provide textual evidence in the body paragraphs, and end the essay with a strong conclusion. You may use your books and other notes you have...

research project thesis

So it's been a long time since I've done a research paper. I wanted to see if someone could help me put my topic into a thesis statement. I have a bad way with wording things. IThe topic is to choose someone I believe to be a great leader in history and why. I chose Abe ...

English

I need help on my essay outline. How could I break down my sub-topic: personal expression into two using the following points; freedom of thought, freedom of speech, freedom of assembly, freedom of conscious, freedom to make choices and freedom to travel? Freedom to travel, I ...

ETH

We are writing a paper on "Race in your Community" and I have had a hard time getting going because I live in a small town with really one ethnic group, however as I dug I started finding some minority groups are here, what I am looking for is for some opinions on my thesis ...

English - Thesis Statement on Life of Pi

a) how is life of pi a story within a story within story? ( i know the first part a story within a story, but the other within the story, i am confused) b) i am going to write an essay about story telling on Life of Pi by Yann Martel and so far have ideas such as the type of ...

COM/220

Please post your response to the following: o Identify the thesis statement in the movie “The Origins of AIDS.” o What strategies do the filmmakers use to formulate their argument? o What makes the arguments viable and compelling? 1. Review the documentary entitled, “The...

English 11 (Novel Study No country for old men)

Im doing an essay on the lack of redemption shown in the novel No country for old men. I needs 1000-1200 words and i got about 7 paragraphs these include -Thesis -Body paragraph 1(the corruption of money) -Body paragraph 2(the curruption of youth) -Body Paragraph 3(Need a ...

LAC Help Question

1. Write a four paragraph literary essay in response to the following question. Be sure to include a thesis statement in your introduction, provide textual evidence in the body paragraphs, and end the essay with a strong conclusion. You may use your books and other notes you ...

english

i need help please. What does Thomas F. Walsh, Jr's thesis propose about "Young Goodman Brown"? -because young goodman brown is a fictional short story it does not reflect any truth about life? -goodman brown enters the forest doubting the goodness of people and leaves the ...

Lit

I have an essay and this is one part of my thesis... "In the nineteenth century, some ways the middle class participated in revolutions was by establishing liberalism, one way was through literature, and through the revolutions of 1848." I wasn't sure if the "one way was ...

English

I have an essay and this is one part of my thesis... "In the nineteenth century, some ways the middle class participated in revolutions was by establishing liberalism, one way was through literature, and through the revolutions of 1848." I wasn't sure if the "one way was ...

Please proofread my Essay

Could you please check for fragments, pronoun agreement, and tell me if I use first person all the way through. Thanks! Here is the format I am suppose to be following: a. Have an Introduction: Your introduction will tell readers what you knew about the topic before starting ...

english

Hey, Can please somebody read and correct this text? I thning that this time it is very bad... But I can't say exactly why... maybe someone of you can help me? Thanks Minnie 1. What does Cohen point out before giving his seven monster theses? Before Cohen gives is seven ...

English

Hi can you check my topic sentences? Antigone and Creon argue as she fights for the gods and he fights for his beliefs, resulting in the division of the city. Despite of the many warnings he receives, Creon’s discounting of prophecy produces destruction due to his arrogance...

langauge arts

What is the best way to rewrite the following topic to form a focused thesis statement? Electric cars vs. Cars fueled with gasoline A. Cars fueled with gasoline shouldn't be allowed on the road, especially when electric cars are so readily available. B. Electric cars and cars ...

history paper ( advise)

I'm writing a argumentative paper on the book How we survived communism and even laughed. Can you give me any advise on how to set up my paper. Any adivis on how to set my paper up or examples of how my thesis should be.. In How We Survived Communism and Even Laughed, Slavenka...

12th grade - English (World Mythology)

The website is: zarathushtra . com /z/gatha/dji/forward . htm What is Tagore’s main argument? Find a sentence or two that make up Tagore’s thesis statement and cite it here. What distinction does Tagore make between “blind obedience” and “the path of freedom?” ...

Sociology

The text, Introduction to Sociology, describes many individuals who have contributed to our current view of sociology, including: C. Wright Mills Howard Becker W. I. Thomas Auguste Comte Emile Durkheim Herbert Spencer Karl Marx Erving Goffman’s Harriet Martineau W. E. B. Du ...

Literary Analysis and Composition I

Write a four paragraph literary essay in response to the following question. Be sure to include a thesis statement in your introduction, provide textual evidence in the body paragraphs, and end the essay with a strong conclusion. You may use your books and other notes you have...

English

Can you read my conclusion for me. He said that it only had to be a couple sentences long. The restatement of thesis, last strong point about what were arguing, and an exit sentence. Do you think that this is good or have any ideas on what I should add? How's the grammar? ...

English

What would be the thesis statement in the following and if there isnt one please tell me: Shakespeare used time to bring resolution to the situations his characters found themselves in the play, Twelfth Night. The quote, “And thus the whirligig of time brings his revenges...

English

Working on a research paper and I decided my topic is drinking and driving. I need to go deeper since my prof doesn't just want us to simply "tell her stuff" as in it can't be a list. So I'm thinking of either talking about deeper issues like Punishment should be increased for...

ENGLISH!! HELP!!!

THE PROMPTS:TAKE A POSITION THAT DEFENDS OR CHALLENGES THE CLAIM THAT THE RECENT PROFUSION OF SURVEILLANCE TECHNOLOGIES CONSTITUTES A THREAT TO CIVIL LIBERTY. ___________________________________ The example Introduction is : George Orwell wrote "1984", a novel suggest by the ...

world history

Anthien democracy was marked by an emphasis on _________ Do you mean ANTHIEN, a town in France, or ATHENIAN, pertaining to the capital of Greece? Please clarify. I am assuming that you mean "Athenian." Since this is not my area of expertise, I searched Google under the key ...

help asap gov't

We have held that a liberty interest protected under the Due Process Clause of the Fourteenth Amendment will be deemed fundamental if it is "implicit in the concept of ordered liberty." Palko v. Connecticut... In construing the phrase "liberty" incorporated in the Due Process ...

English 11 (No country for Old men Novel Study)

Im doing an essay on the lack of redemption shown in the novel No country for old men. I needs 1000-1200 words and i got about 7 paragraphs these include -Thesis -Body paragraph 1(the corruption of money) -Body paragraph 2(the curruption of youth) -Body Paragraph 3(Need a ...

Academic Writing II

Please, somebody help me. I need 3 traits on Robert Frost's writing and I'm clueless. I don't even like his poems, and I'm supposed to write a 3-paragraph paper on him. So far, I'm thinking 'He likes to write with humor' and 'He likes to use metaphors'. I don't have a third ...

Grammar and Composition

Pet Peeve--Organizational Sheet Audience: family Topic: my annoying sister General Purpose: entertain Specific Purpose: I want to inform an audience of family about the annoyance of little sisters Thesis Statement: My sister not only irritates me to a great extent, but she ...

English composition

i just wanna ask if this is correct. i was making a prewritng classification and division. is not finish yet but i just wanna ask if im having a good start thanks Title: Genres of movies Topic announcement: Horror movies Introduction: It is fun to watch scary movies with ...

Speech

PLEASE, Can some one please help me complete the SECONDARY SUPPORT for this speech topic outline? Thesis Statement: My failures in high school taught me three important lessons in life. Primary Support 1 : I realized the importance of hard-work Secondary Support 1: Secondary ...

Social studies

-Athens does not live up to Pericles ideal democracy because Athenians use of ostracism contradicts Pericles statement that all have equal participation - Athens somewhat lives up to Pericles ideal democracy because it only allowed native born, male citizens to participate and...

HISTORY HELP :(

MANY PEOPLE SUPPORTED COMMUNIST OR FASCIST GOVERNMENTS IN THE 1920'S AND 1930'S BECAUSE OF THE FAILURE OF DEMOCRATIC GOVERNMENTS TO DEAL WITH THE PROBLEMS OF LIFE AFTER THE DESTRUCTION OF WORLD WAR ONW. TO WHAT EXTENT DO I HAVE TO AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT ? PLEASE HEEEELP ...

Biology, Burning of sugar..My theory

Can someone explain why, when sugar is burnt aerobically, it yields more energy than if it is burnt in anaerobic conditions? My thesis is that in aerobic conditions, there is an abundant supply of oxygen which can burn the sugar and thus, creating ATP (energy) which is limited...

Grammar and Composition

Paragraph 3 (second point of your thesis) ...

history- do you think this answer is correct?

Do you think this answer is effective enough.... How did the growth of the steel industry influence the development of other industries? The railroads, with thousands of miles of track, became the biggest customers for steel, but inventors found additional uses for it. ...

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