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Could you please proofread my argumentive essay, check for fragments and prounoun use. Thanks! Is Beauty Really Skin Deep?
Hi, Can someone proofread this for me and let me know if I followed the directions for this assignment. Directions: Detailed information about the agency, an evaluation of the site and comparison of the site with experiences in the practicum setting should be reported.
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I've made plenty of changes to my essay. Could you please proofread it? Thanks! Is Beauty Really Skin Deep?
Can someone please proofread my Spanish? Thank you. it will not let me post my HW because it says that I have posted a link but I haven't. Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. We'd be glad to proofread it if you can post it! Please try again. You can not copy ...
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Could you please proofread my agumentive essay. Thanxs! Who Is An American?
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Can you proofread these to make sure they make sense? Sur le sable chaud Whispering Waves calmement aux sirènes jolies le soleil brille contre ma peau bronzée chaud il chatouillant L'eau de mer salée touche ma langue et ma peau et pique mes yeux
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If I post my rough draft of an essay on here, can someone proofread it please? I would REALLY appreciate if someone did because I'm doing horrible on it and it would be really helpful if I had someone else's input :) thanks so SO much!!!
Can someone please proofread this before i email it to school metro's director Mr. Thomas LeMera Hey LeMera, my name is Bryan Martin and I’m email you to require more information on your school. I am a senior in high school in temple hills MD. I'm interested in becoming a ...
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Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis. Here is my prompt: 1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a ...
According to CCMS, the small size of this school helps the downtown urban community meet their needs, in particular at-risk students from low-income households because the students are given more individual attention by faculty members. As a small charter school, CCMS promotes...
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Can you proofread my essay? "Why are you proud of your Vietnamese Heritage?"
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8. Which of the following options accurately represents the steps involved in the writing process? A. Write first draft, edit, revise, write final draft B. Write first draft, revise, proofread, write final draft C. Plan, write first draft, edit, write final draft D. Plan, ...
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Can someone please proofread my history essay?
Hi, I have a history essay and I think it's done but I'd like someone to proofread it and suggest corrections first, can someone here please do that? Thanks! :-) P.S. It's due tomorrow Here's the essay: John Musbach History 02/14/07 My thesis statement is: Through the power of...
Can someone please proofread my essay, if so let me know and if you don't mind giving me your email address so I can send it to you Thanks
Can you proofread my letter? Thanks! December 7, 2007 Dear President of the Math Company, I am pleased to inform you that a company that has 11 mathematicians on its staff and 2 or fewer women is possible. In fact, based on my stimulation, the probability that there are 2 or ...
typing my research paper
If I am a slow typer and my research paper is due tommorow when I started researching about 3-4 weeks ago. How can I finish by tommorow? I only have my works cited page ,title page,and 3 body paragraphs. Don't waste time posting messages when you should be furiously typing. ...
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I went back and re-read it and made some changes. Weather Gone Wild
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When you proofread look for punctuation, spelling and Capitalization Mistakes. is this punctuated correctly?
I need to do a 300 word composition on my interpersonal relationships. I wanted to know id someone could proofread it for me after I finish
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This is the prompt: Write about a time when you had to show respect for authority, even though it was difficult to do so.
describe a hypothetical situation in which collective naturalization might be applied? We do not do your homework for you. However, if you will repost your answer, we will be happy to proofread and give suggestions.
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Im writting an essay on the reformation and the renaissance can somebody proofread my essay
Im in third grade and i don't understand colons.i have to proofread a paragraph and combine them using colons.
Ninth Grade Essay Writing
I'm looking for someone to proofread my essay and tell me what needs improvement.
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I know I have to add some specifics to certain areas, could you proofread what I have so far. Who is an American?
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Can someone proofread this for me please? Thanks. Under the Youth PROMISE Act, communities facing the greatest youth gang and crime challenges will come together to develop a compressive plan for implementing evidence-based prevention and intervention strategies. One of the ...
Proofread the following sentences. Insert punctuation as required. After a Maylard incision was made through the abdomen a retractor was used for visualization of the pelvic contents.
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Would someone be willing to proofread my essay in Spanish? It's less than a page long. It'd be great if you were somewhat fluent, I'm awful at Spanih grammar =[
What steps could be taken, if any , to reduce people's overall fear of crime? Tony, we do not do your homework for you. However, we will be happy to proofread and make suggestions after you have written your opinion.
Proofread the sentence and Insert punctuation as required. She reports the flare up is worse when she does not have her diabetes under control. Answer: I feel it doesn't need anything added to it. FINE as is! I hope! Thanks
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Health The Importance of Nutrition and an Active Lifestyle By: schoolgirl11 Why is it Important to Make Healthy Eating Choices and Have Regular Daily Exercise?
Can you please proofread this for me. My teacher said that it was done correctly. Thank you. Freedom, wealth, security, and beliefs all branch off from the main cause of war. The positive beliefs that have been expressed regarding war, tend to state that every individual is ...
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Corey wrote first draft of his eassy. What is the next step before he revises it? A.proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. i got A what do you think ?
Please help me proofread my spanish essay (so far). Thanks sooo much!! El sueño americano no existe solo para los pobres. No existe solo para los emigrantes. No existe solo para la joven. La idea del sueño americano es una que es conocida por todo el mundo. Cualquier persona...
For my English class, I had to write an essay comparing two short stories. I wrote it but I am not at all confident with the quality of it. Can I post it here to have it proofread? It's 3 pages double-spaced.
Proofread! make sure there's no spelling, grammar, or typing errors. If employers get a lot of resumes, they will look for any excuse to quickly "pitch" as many of them as possible. True or False? Would it be False?
Proofreading. Proofread the following sentences. Insert punctuation as required. The x-rays revealed: an articular fracture of the tibia, a butterfly fracture of the fibula, and a longitudinal fracture of the femur.
Proofread sentence and insert punctuation as required. The work up revealed the surface was of no real concern at this time. Answer: No punctuation required - fine as is.
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What is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the secong draft. B.proofread the essay to make it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit,changing and rearranging the content. D.All of the above. i got D what do you think ?
Corey wrote the first draft of his essay. What is the next step before he revises it? A.Proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material. C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. .I chose A.
I am writing an literary essay about The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro with the topic of "self-deception as self-destruction". Could someone proofread my introduction so far and help me fix any grammatical errors?
Proofread 6-page Essay Due Tomorrow?
I realize this is very last minute. I wrote a 6-page history paper on the topic of civil rights and I want someone to read it over before 3pm tomorrow, if that's possible. thanks!
what is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the second draft. B.Proofread the essay to make sure it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit changing and rearranging the contect. D. All of the above .I CHOSE D.
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Hello! Could someone proofread this summary for me and give me some tips? Thanks so much! In Daniel Smith’s article, The Anxious Idiot, he discusses anxiety issues. He begins the article with an introduction to his anxiety disorder and proceeds to tell of his discovery ...
Hi, can someone proofread this for me. I'll appreciate it. Thanks in advance. The practicum site I selected is an elementary school. I will be assisting a first grade teacher during the semester. I will be helping her with her students and with other teacher responsibilities. ...
english/ world geo.
Their are many lingering effects of communsim. I think the most important effects of communsim is the economic and political problems in Eastern Europe. please proofread ( might be factual or spelling punction etc.) there are 6 mistakes in this sentence.
Proofread sentence and insert punctuation as required. This is an irate boisterous 46-year old lady who complains that she was hit in the face with the heel of a womans' shoe. Answer: comma after irate woman's ? not sure - I don't even think it needs any apostrophes.
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I went back made the suggest changes. I will go back and add more specfic examples of traditions before I turn my final paper in. I need this asap (before Sunday) Thanxs for your help! Who Is An American?
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Yes, that is correct. I am currently taking BUS and CJ courses, but on the 1st of January, my focus will be entirely to CJ. Can someone proofread this sentence for me? I'm not sure I understand the question. If the sentence is to be proofed, I don't know what I am using for a ...
Could someone please proofread my essay for english? The topic is "self-deception as self-destruction".
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Proofread the following sentence and insert punctuation as required. The patient reported the following effects from the fall: Discomfort breathing, pain in the right shoulder, dizziness upon standing, and headaches during the day. Answer: ; after fall instead of the colon - ...
Research paper for photography
Hi! This is an essay I wrote on Duane Michals for my photography class. Can someone please proofread - I'm rusty on writing essays. Also, can you give my comments and critiques, especially conclusion...I think it's a little weak... THANKS! p.s. I started it off with a poem by ...
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and we had to round this was the question was to again calculate the number of moles in each of the following masses a)64.1 g of aluminum b)28.1 g of silicon c)0.255 g of sulfur d)850.5 g of zinc a) 64/27 = 2.4 mols b) 28.1g/28=1.0 mol c) 0.255/32=.0080 d)850.5/65 =13.076. I ...
Proofread find two missing commas in compound sentences. Let's say it is ten o’clock in the morning. Your room is a mess! Your clothes are on the floor and games are everywhere. It won’t take long to clean but you can’t do it. There isn’t anything easier than letting ...
Can someone please proofread my lead!
Hi this is my lead for a old court case I was assigned. The Michigan Court of Appeals finds no error in the trial courts disposition of favoring defendant Ionia Sentinel-Standard newspaper entry of summary judgment over the plaintiff’s claims regarding the accidental death ...
Can you help me proofread the following paragraph and find nine misspelled or misused words and write them correctly? Planting a vegetable garden is a popular American hobby. It’s not ready that difficult. A gardening magazine or book can help you get started. Your plants ...
Which of the following is a complex sentence? A. After Henry submitted his essay, he realized that he hadn't proofread the last page. B. identity theft is a growing problem, especially among seniors. C. Jim tried to watch a video on a device connected to a crowded wireless ...
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wrote the names for the following compounds Li3N i puit Lithium Nitride FeS i put ion Sulfide KCI i put Potassium Chloride CoSO4 i put Cobalt Sulfide SrBr2 i put Strotium bromide NCI3 i put Nitrogen trichloride Ga2O3 i put Galium Trioxide and H3PO3 i put Phosporus acid
COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY-Please Proofread
1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and proof and ...
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write the formulas for the following potassium sulfide i put KaS Tin (IV) chloride i put SnCl4 Dihydrogen sulfide i put H2S Calcium Oxide i put CaO Hydrobromic acid i put HBr Aluminum Fluoride i put AlF3 dinotrogen pentoxide i put N2O5 Iron (III) carbonate i put Fe2(CO3)3
we had to take a stand on gay marriage.. can you proofread my opening and help me with revising if necessary? Same-sex marriage should be legalized because it is uncivilized to deny gay people a civil right that the Constitution guarantees everyone, equality, which means that ...
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The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...
In seeking to improve written documents, writers revise, edit and proofread. In revising, writers look at the big picture, whereas in editing and proofreading, they target to the mechanical aspects of the writing. In writing, what might the "big picture" entail? 2. Why might ...
Please look over my report and let me know if their are any mistakes and if it is a good one. THanx Abraham Lincon was born in 1809. He was the 16th president. He was a good and nice president. He led us through a big,bad,and super scary war. He had four kids. He was married ...
punctuation spelling and Capitalization Mistakes.
i the punctuation correct i did as much as i could When you proofread look for punctuation spelling and capitalization mistakes.
Should United States government policy favor certain kinds of immigrants? Should citizenship preference be given to the neediest applicants? The most talented? The most oppressed? The richest? Should applications from certain countries be given priority? We do not do your ...
Can you proofread this revision and tell me if it looks correct? Thank you. You should invest in a good Dictionary—and a good Thesaurus as well—to help you write well. But you should also realize, as even Samuel Johnson did when he compiled the first English language ...
Proofread for Capitalization and Punctuation errors. Carina was inspected at that time, which appeared sharp with no mucosal lesions noted. A 2% lidocaine was instilled over the carina. Right main stem bronchus was inspected next. Opening to the right upper lobe was inspected...
i have an essay to write about: if i would be given the liberty to be someone else that day, who would i be??? and how would i spend my time?" this is the question. i will be glad if i get the composition written by someone Well, that's not going to happen at this website. We ...
Proofread the following sentences. insert punctuation as required. After the exam the patients demeanor was improved. Answer: After the exam, the patient's demeanor was improved. * added comma after exam and ? added an ' patients.
i need 3 more sentences using circuitous please help i really need it! Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Board but we do not DO the work for you! Use any good dictionary for the definition. Use any good Thesaurus for a synonym and/or antonym. When you substitute a ...
I am writing a persuasive paper and have completed the first two paragraphs please proofread and suggest anything that could make it better: It is your last year in high school and it is time to make the big decision. Should a person go to college and be successful or should ...
Will you proofread this for me? Durante mi experiencia en el grupo de Unidad 10, aprendí mucho. Aprendí que trabajar en un grupo no es fácil, pero es muy difícil y frustadamente. Cuando nuestro grupo conocieron al principio, tomé el papel del líder extraoficial. ...
Proofread the following sentence. Insert punctuation as needed. He complains of pain in his left shoulder, (Mainly upon raising his arm). Answer: He complains of pain in his left shoulder (Mainly upon raising his arem). * the sentence inside the parentheses is a complete ...
Hello, I'm trying to proofread my 8 page paper and I have come up with some uncertainties about some of my sentence structure. These are the some of the sentences I am not sure are correct or perhaps needs improvement. 1)People most often look for social, emotional, ...
This is my revision to my earlier question, please proofread. Often, the dictionaries are wrong about this, in fact by putting one word first; they are supporting a self fulfilling prophecy. Consider the entry, "ax or axe", which appears with the two words in that order, in ...
write the chemical equations for the following sentences a) Aluminum reacts with oxygen to produce aluminum oxide I put Al + O2 ----------> 2Al2O3 b) Phosphoric acid, H3PO4, is produced through the reaction between tetraphosphorous decoxide and water I put P4O10 + 6H2O...
Write a paragraph under the title " good words are full of flavor" Sarah, We do not do your homework for you. We will be happy to proofread and make suggstions if you will put your paragraph on the board. suggestion - Think of some really neat words that make you think of ...
I have to fill in the gap with an adjective and i am really stuck on these questions: 1)Es........asomarse a la ventanilla 2)Carmen está...... le duele la cabeza 3) En la mano ......... llevo dinero, y en la no llevo nada. 4)Qué olor! El pescado no esta Pleas help thanks ...
Hi, Can someone proofread and check my grammar please? Is there any chance I can post the website of this article in order to get feedback on my summary on it? I want to know if I got the main points of the article correctly and answered this question correct as well. I am ...
Proofread the sentence and insert punctuation as required. There was also an admission for uterine contraction's and some brown red discharge and questionable bleeding. Answer: There was also an admission for uterine contractions, and some brown red discharge, and questionable...
What Philosophy goes with these descriptions. 1. Creator of the Five Ways of proving God’s existence 2. A critic of the ontological argument 3. “God is dead” means there is no rational order. 4. Developer of an effective cosmological argument 5. Philosophers and ...
Can you please proofread this for me for grammar mistakes thank you. British American novelist Amelia Barr once stated “old age is the verdict of life”. Aging is a natural process of life that effects all of us. Sociologists see aging as a process of socialization or the ...