Grammatical Corrections in my Essay...?

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writing essay

Jack was told the overall content of his paper was weak. What does this mean? A. The tone of his paper was not original B. He had to many grammatical errors C. The overall ideas in his essay were not fully developed D. The flow of his essay was inconsistent

writing

A. The tone of his paper was not original. B. He had too many grammatical errors. C. The overall ideas in his essay were not fully developed. D. The flow of his essay was inconsistent. I chose C, what do you think?

English

Which of the following is a good rule to follow when proofreading an essay? A. Scan the essay twice, once for organization and once for surface errors. B. Ask your best friend to critique your essay. C. Use the computer's spell-check and grammar-check functions to be sure you ...

Spanish 102, P,P&F Tense Essay

Please look over my short Essay. Past Present and Future tenses must all be used; topic is on activities of a week/ days surrounding I need to score well. Any corrections or advice is very much appreciated.

criminal justice

Describe the history of European corrections philosophies and how it shaped today's American corrections practices. Compare the similarities and differences of today's corrections practices with American corrections practices in the 1800s.

English Essay

I am writing an literary essay about The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro with the topic of "self-deception as self-destruction". Could someone proofread my introduction so far and help me fix any grammatical errors?

writing

Jack was told the overall content of his paper was weak. What does this mean? A. The tone of his paper was not original B. He had too many grammatical errors. C. The overall ideas in his essay were not fully developed. D. The flow of his essay was inconsistent. Im thinking D?

criminal justice

1. How corrections professionals ensure that they uphold the Constitution. 2. In what ways do corrections professionals use the social justice principles of equality, solidarity, and human rights to build a more just society. 3. How do corrections professionals use criminal ...

english

I woul like to review my essay please? Post it. Can you please help me write that essay" A way to decrease your chance of becoming a victim of random ciolence". Hmmm. You have an assignment to write an essay, a teacher offers to review your essay, and you respond asking the ...

health

Write a 350- to 700-word paper in which you discuss corrections accreditation and privatization. Address the following questions: • What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can ...

Can someone please proofread my history essay?

Hi, I have a history essay and I think it's done but I'd like someone to proofread it and suggest corrections first, can someone here please do that? Thanks! :-) P.S. It's due tomorrow Here's the essay: John Musbach History 02/14/07 My thesis statement is: Through the power of...

CJS/230

Will someone please help me find a website to find the answer to the following questions? What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can industry leaders plan for better correctional ...

CJS/230

Will someone please hwlp me find a wesite to find the answer to the follwing questions? What is corrections accreditation? How does corrections accreditation affect the professional development of corrections officers? How can industry leaders plan for better correctional ...

essay writing

What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.

English L.A.

Which of the following best describes an expository essay? a. An essay that uses casual, conversational language. b. An essay that tells a story about a real-life experience. c. An essay that explains an idea by breaking it down. d. An essay that uses humor to achieve the ...

French - To Anna

Mme Sra is either not available or she is working on your text. You write very well, despite a few grammatical and syntax errors many of which you could probably avoid. To get you started, I enclose a few to help you with self corrections. Do look for other similar ones, in ...

Ethics

What are the goals of punishment and corrections? Explain the rationale behind those goals. How does the concept of community corrections relate to these goals and rationale?

History

I live in The United Kingdom. And we do not do grades we do Year. I am in Year 8 in United Kingdom. What is that in the United States? No it is an essay. I have been completing it because it is due for tomorrow. If you can please read it and make corrections that will be Fab. ...

Three Posts Below

The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...

English

Where can I go to check about my essay when your are finished? I have not seen any essay from you for help with proofreading. If you post the entire essay in a message, someone will respond directly to that message. =) I need your help to write that essay,"A way to decrease ...

english

nedd some help.i am writing an imortant essay and my theme is maori english.i can't find some good sites on the internet about grammatical features.can somebody help?

CJS/230

Will someone please help me find a webite to answer the following questions? What are community corrections? How do community corrections affect the society in which they are practiced? What hypothesis can you make about community corrections and their overall effectiveness ...

CJS/230

Will someone please help me find a webite to answer the following questions? What are community corrections? How do community corrections affect the society in which they are practiced? What hypothesis can you make about community corrections and their overall effectiveness ...

English

Rules of writing an essay?, And what are the main factors of an essay?, How to properly write an essay without an errors?

Spanish Essay Needs Corrections

En muchas obras de litereatura, el tema de amor es muy comun. Pero, hay un tipo de amor que es mas fuerte de todas otras—el amor de un amigo. El poema << Versos Sencillos >> tiene la mas fuerte representacion de amor.

Essay Help

Could you please help me form an introduction paragraph for my essay? It's a comparison and contrast essay, where I am comparing two songs. I need help! Thank you.

Essay Help

I have to do an 2-page essay on "Carbohydrates". I need help on outlining the essay. Anyone can give me assistance on that? Thanks.

Essay

The body of your essay contains which of the following? A. The longest section of the essay B. The supporting details. C. A Conciluding sentence D. All of the above

Language Arts Project/Essay HELP!

Ok, so i need some help on this project: GOAL: Analyze a magazine essay for a thesis statement and organization. DETAILS: Find a short, formal essay in a magazine. Then find the thesis statement of that essay and show how it was proved (reasons, examples, or incidents). My ...

language arts

I need to do an essay in a language arts package titled noggin. I lost the essay part of it. I'm not asking for you to do an essay for me, but if you could put up the page so I know how to make the Picture look that the essay goes in. I need to have it in by Monday

corrections

Prison management has had two very distinct styles during its evolution: autocratic and bureaucratic.what do you think are the most important aspect of each style?which style do you consider the most effective? how has the role of the corrections officer changed with the ...

writing essay

What is the number one essay writing rule? A.Always write five paragraphs B.Always brainstorm before writing the essay C.start the writing essay the day it is assigned i got B

writing essay

Catherine received a 70 on her essay because the vocabulary was basic and there was a lack if clear and active voice. Which of the following areas of her essay were weak? A. Organization B. Mechanics C. Content D. Style

English

A body paragraph in an essay is one that: A. expounds upon the thesis of the essay. B. brings closure to the piece. C. features footnoted information. D. introduces the ideas that will be covered in the essay. A

Conversational Essay

Has everyone heard of a conversational essay that mentions the following: how lying is sometimes god for humanity and sometimes its good for ourselves ignorance is bliss sometimes there are no greater swindles than self swindlers if u know the title of such essay it would be ...

Essay Pointers

Here is an essay i wrote about A Separate Peace. If someone can tell me what needs to be fixed and stuff. By the way, should I use heck in this essay? My friend said it was too... informal

english

Which type of essay is Amy Tan's "Mother Tongue"? a. persuasive b. regional c. bias d. reflective I read this essay and I think it is an essay that gives information to others people about the trials and tribulations of having a mother that doesn't speak English that well. But...

English

1. I suggest you try it. 2. I demand you try it. (Are both all grammatical?) 3. How many floors is the second floor from ground? (Is it grammatical? What will be the answer to this question?)

English

1. He was born in 63 BC. 2. He was born in the 63 BC. (Which one is grammatical?) 3. He had lived by 63 BC. 4. He has gone to Brazil in 2000 AD. 5. He died in the 21st century. (Are they all grammatical?)

Essay Writing

Corey wrote the first draft of his essay. What is the next step before he revises it? A.Proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material. C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. .I chose A.

english

Choose an essay or a short story to read. Then answer the following questions in the space provided. 10.What is the title of the story essay? 11.Who wrote it? 12.Whom is the story about? (Identify the main characters [or, if an essay, the subject discussed].) 13.hat happens in...

COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY-Please Proofread

1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and proof and ...

english/l.a

Can someone give me some persuasuve essay topics? Persuasive essay- a essay that persuades someone into thinking your opinion.

English

Can anyone check my essay? I could send the rubric for scoring. Thanks You have to include the essay itself, so we can check it. Respond to this post with the essay. Thanks for asking. Whats your question..?

English Essay Title

What would a good essay title be if I'm writing an essay about a character in a book who is torn between two conflicting forces?

English

As a general rule, where in your essay is it best to place your thesis statement? A. In the first, introductory paragraph of the essay B. Anywhere at all, because the best thesis statement is implied, not specified C. In the second or third paragraph of the body of the essay D...

english - essay specifically

i am currently writing my essay and i am about to put an example from the book Julius Caesar. what is the "protocol" how do i put a set of quotes into the essay?

Quotes in essays

I want to put a quote at the very beginning of my essay. How do I go about doing that? Should it be the same or a smaller font than the rest of my essay? I'm planning on putting the quote, then starting a new paragraph to begin the actual essay. Should I center it? Skip how ...

essay writing

what is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the second draft. B.Proofread the essay to make sure it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit changing and rearranging the contect. D. All of the above .I CHOSE D.

english-essay

i have to write a critical analysis of "The Trial" by franz kafka. and i wanted to know what points i should cover in my essay. also how many paragraphs should my essay consist of.

essay Amanuensis Essay

Please i need help, how to start a essay using Amanuensis about my teacher but don't know how to begin.

please rate my essay

I had asked earlier if anyone had any ideas for an essay over the importance of accepting others as they are, and now I am finished with my essay so I am curious to see what you think. It will be given a rating of 1-4.

essay writing

1.Which of the following can dramatically improve your grade on an essay? A.Providing an outline. B.Choosing an effective thesis sentence. C.Setting aside time to rewrite your essay. D.Writing on an interesting topic. .I chose d.

essay writing

which of the following can dramatically improve your grade on an essay? A. Providing an outline B. Choosing an effective thesis sentence C. Setting aside time to rewrite your essay. D. Writing on an interesting topic. .I choses c.

band essay?

I have to write an essay on why I deserve a scholarship for our band class trip to Puerto Rico, I was wondering what English teachers would be looking at/for in this essay and how long it should roughly be

English - ms. sue

ms. sue i writing an essay on : is it possible to live a peaceful/happy life in times of today? I going to write yes it be for this essay, but teacher say that write essay by saying WE, so what be other forms of that I use, I think she said don't use they, people, etc. Also I ...

Essay

I'm writing a essay on Hurricanes where can I find credible sources for my essay with intext citation or citation.

Essay

What main points do you think I should include in my essay ("Why I should be in this advanced class")? I've written most of it. The topic was so general that I am not sure that I've hit all the points I should have. Could you provide some points that you find should be ...

eng composition

Amy and carl are discussing the essay by tardiff and brizee. Army argue that her essay on how the cocoa bean is processed into chocolate should becconsidered an explanatory essay. Carl remaks that her essay might be called an explository essay. Who is correct? A. Amy is ...

business law

What do you feel about community corrections? Do you feel a community-based punishment is justifiable in today’s society? Explain why or why not. Provide an example of a community-based punishment. How do community corrections affect American society?

English

I am writing an essay about James Baldwin's Go Tell It on the Mountain, but the essay prompt asks me to disagree or agree with the interpretation of an critical essay we read about this book. For my essay, do I state whether I agree with the article and then use other evidence...

8th grade Language Arts

I am writing a persuasive essay and I need some tips on making it persuasive. It is turning out to be just an essay, not a persuasive essay. Help!

algebra 1

an essay contest requires that essay entries consist of 500 words with an absolute deviation of at most 30 words. what are the possible numbers of words that the essay can have?

Essay Outline

I need an outline for my schizophrenic essay and I found one online; since I don't have to turn the outline in can I use that to write my essay? -MC

English

1. I made Harry Porter interesting by adding more stories. (is this sentence grammatical?) 2. We shook the building, and it fell dowm. (Is this grammatical?) 3. I will give some hints to you? (What does 'hints' refer to? What are other similiar expressions?)

English-Ms.Sue

Thank you for all of your help on guiding me through on my war as a social disease essay. I really appreciate it. We got assigned a new essay and it's an arugumentive essay and it's on cloning. I need three sub-categories for cloning. I don't know what he means by that!

Eng

When assembling a writing plan for an essay, which of the following should come first? A. The first section of the body of your essay. B. The general idea of your essay C. Material that catches the reader's interest. D. A brief Summary of your conclusion Answer is B.

English

1. Don't eat too much apples before going to bed. 2. Don't eat too many apples before going to bed. (Which one is grammatical?) 3. His hobby is riding a horse. 4. His hobby is to ride a horse. 5. His hobby is riding on a horse. (Are all grammatical?) 6. His job is selling cars...

10th grade english

Write an essay comparing Baldwin's account of the Titanic with Rosenthal's account of his visit to Auschwitz.In your paragraph, explain how the tone and purpose of each essay is different. Support your argument with at least one example from each essay.

English

When assembling a writing plan for an essay, which of the following should come first? A. Material that catches the reader's interest B. The first section of the body of your essay. C. A brief summary of your conclusion (D. The general idea of your essay) Correct me if wrong?

english

Hi, I posted my essay earlier for punctuation, corrections, and I really need help correcting the following from the essay: -I read the Quran everyday of my life to learn and get inspired from. -The book had this amazing story about a Woman that was cured from breast cancer by...

Language Art's

1.)Reflect on the feedback you received from WriteToLearn™ about your comparison-and-contrast essay. Which traits are strongest in your comparison-and-contrast essay: ideas, organization, or conventions? Provide textual evidence from your comparison-and-contrast essay to ...

English

1. I love Tom who lives there. 2. I love Tom, who lives there. Which sentence is grammatical? Are both OK? ------------------ 3. This is the place where he was born. 4. This is the place he was born. #3 is grammatical. What about #4? In Sentence 4, 'where' is missing. Is #4 ...

grammar

Hello, I need a grammatical correction in the following excerpt from my essay, "We can see the benefits of having a husband for a woman in the following excerpt..." My teacher circled the phrase "having a husband for a woman" (which means that there is something wrong with it...

English

People use pockets when they eat Brussels waffles. ---------- Is this sentence grammatical? Is the use of 'pockets' here grammatical?

English

1. Tomorrow, we're going to go to hike. 2. Tomorrow, we're going to go hiking. =================== Which one is grammatical? Are both grammatical? Then, what is the differencein meaning?

English comparative essay

Okay well i have to do a comparative essay of A.E poe "The Raven" but the simpson version and the origional version the poem... i decited to compares "moods " of the both version.. like the caracters moods... Can you please find me a comparative essay Example...not an ...

science/chemistry

The van der waals equation incorperates corrections for the ideal gas laws in order to account for the properties of real gases. one of the corrections accounts for 1:The kinetic energy being inversly proportional to the temperature 2:The possibility of chemical reactions ...

Essay help?

Could somebody help me start off this essay? CD= Concrete detail ( Facts) Commentary, ( Opinnion, but since this is a essay on religion, facts can go here) I don't know how to start.. :) Heres what I've done so far: oi55.tinypic( DOT) com/11azxnk.jpg

conclusions

What function do conclusions serve in essays? A. Conclusions provide the supporting details of an essay. B. Conclusions develop the main idea of an essay. C. Conclusions sum up the main idea of an essay. (MY ANSWER) D. Conclusions introduce new ideas important to the main idea...

Essay title

Hi. I'm trying to think of an essay title for an "I believe" essay. The essay is supposed to talk about how I defy the 'single story'. I talked about defying the single story of a teenage girl because I play the drums. My "I believe" statement is that 'I believe in seeing more...

Literature Essay (Ms. Sue and/or Writeacher)

How should I begin this assigned essay? Write an essay in what ways today people are more fearful than people in past generations. You may use examples from real life, the selection you just read, books, movies, music, or television.

Check my Book Report

Check for any corrections i should make... Heres the Instructions: -An Intro Paragraph that includes a clear thesis statement that adresses the prompt -At least 3 clear and detailed body paragraphs which cite specific examples from the novel and support your thesis statement -...

English

1. If you do it, you will be successful. 2. If you will do it, you will be successful. (Is #2 grammatical?) 3. If you will[wíl] do it, you will be successful. (What about this one? In the if clause, 'will' is stressed, which indicates the volition of the subject. In this case...

English

1. I prefer to play soccer with them. 2. I prefer playing soccer with them. (Are both grammatical?) 3. I prefer spring to fall. 4. I prefer palying tennis outdoors to reading books indoors. 5. I prefer to swim rather than read a novel. 6. I prefer to swim rather than to read a...

english

I am writing an oppossing view essay. For this part of the essay we are not supposed to take a stance. The teacher has broken the assignment into 2 parts. The 1st part is actually just to help us learn how to write our final essay. I have pulled alot of research together, just...

English

1. She killed her. 2. She killed herself. 3. She looked at herself in the mirror. 4. She looked at her in the mirror. 5. You should take care of you. 6. You should take care of yourself. 7. He is very proud of himself. 8. He is very proud of him. (Are they all grammatical? ...

English

Is this thesis statement too long for a four page essay? Also, are there any major grammatical errors? Although a cursory glance at Odysseus on his long journey home may lead to a conclusion that he is motivated by an overwhelming desire to see his wife and family again, a ...

essay help

so i've decided to write an essay using lord of the flies, the scarlet letter, and brave new world for my topic (qualifying that ones' morals are either strengthened or weakened). we have to use some type of statistic and image for our essay but i can't think of anything ...

peer reviewing essay

Hi, I have two assignments I have to submit to my AP US History teacher for next year by June 2nd. The first part is to explain why I should be in the class in a one page essay with size 11 font and 1.5 spacing. Could someone please read through my essay and see if it's ok? ...

Creative Writing

ok,so for my essay , I have to 'extend' the definition of 'wisdom'. bobpursley gave me a link yesterday that had several quotes, all of which give a meaning. how can i use this to write my essay? I mean, I don't even understand how the essay is going to be written. How should ...

help please:)

What is the number one eassy writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay B.Always write five paragraphs C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. i got A what do you think?

English Essay

I'm writing an essay for To Kill A Mockingbird and the claim I came up for my essay is "Children are never too young to understand the realities of life." I'm writing the extended paragraph right now where I have to come up with a good example from the story that relates to ...

English

1. I was moved enough to want to help her. ( Is this grammatical?) 2. I was all wet after I washed only the first dog. (Does 'all' mean 'completely' here?) 3. Today was best. 4. Today was the best. (Which one is grammatical?)

English

1. Why would you do research to prepare for a personal comparison and contrast essay? A. To find additional examples to support you main idea. B. To find people to interview from your family. C.To find references for your essay. D. To evaluate websites. 2. Why is it important ...

English+Essay

I have to write an essay, but I have no idea how to start it. It says that my essay has to be MLA formatted, and only 3/4 to 1 page long. 2 page is the longest it can be and must be double placed. Using MLA format, there's is no way for me a write a proper essay with that ...

HELP

I am writing and essay for social studies and i only have a conclusion left please help!!!! The essay is about the war of England and Spain in the 1500's their war about cultures and i want to finish this essay so i need help with the conclusion!

English

1. His age is 14. 2. His height is 158cm tall. 3. His weight is 48kg. (Are the sentences all grammatical?) 4. What is the negative sentence of the declarative sentence? When you make a negative sentence, you should put 'don't' before a base verb. (Is this one grammatical? ...

Eng. Essay - Writeacher

Writeacher or Bobpursley, or anyone who could help me with my essay. I don't know why I cannot find the post that I needed help on, my essay was on traditional families versus TV show families. I included more information. I wish I could include the link here to my post. :\

essay

I am writing an essay for school and I need some more ideas about why do we need healthcare? can you give me some ideas how to start it off to make a very good essay

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