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Could you please proofread my argumentive essay, check for fragments and prounoun use. Thanks! Is Beauty Really Skin Deep?
I've made plenty of changes to my essay. Could you please proofread it? Thanks! Is Beauty Really Skin Deep?
Could you please proofread my agumentive essay. Thanxs! Who Is An American?
Could you please proofread my essay. Please check pronoun usage,fragments, a better title and better thesis. Here is my prompt: 1. Does the US need to reduce its dependence on Middle Eastern oil? If you argue that it does, then provide a way for this to be accomplished and a ...
If I post my rough draft of an essay on here, can someone proofread it please? I would REALLY appreciate if someone did because I'm doing horrible on it and it would be really helpful if I had someone else's input :) thanks so SO much!!!
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1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and proof and ...
Hi, I have a history essay and I think it's done but I'd like someone to proofread it and suggest corrections first, can someone here please do that? Thanks! :-) P.S. It's due tomorrow Here's the essay: John Musbach History 02/14/07 My thesis statement is: Through the power of...
What is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the secong draft. B.proofread the essay to make it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit,changing and rearranging the content. D.All of the above. i got D what do you think ?
Corey wrote the first draft of his essay. What is the next step before he revises it? A.Proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material. C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. .I chose A.
The total essay was too long to post. I had to post the essay as three parts. The bottom of the three is the beginning of the essay and the top of the three posts is the end of the essay. Can you proofread my essay? It is on the novel, The Scarlet Letter. Have done so. <G&...
what is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the second draft. B.Proofread the essay to make sure it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit changing and rearranging the contect. D. All of the above .I CHOSE D.
Im writting an essay on the reformation and the renaissance can somebody proofread my essay
Could someone please proofread my essay for english? The topic is "self-deception as self-destruction".
I'm looking for someone to proofread my essay and tell me what needs improvement.
Can someone please proofread my essay, if so let me know and if you don't mind giving me your email address so I can send it to you Thanks
I went back and re-read it and made some changes. Weather Gone Wild
Hi! This is an essay I wrote on Duane Michals for my photography class. Can someone please proofread - I'm rusty on writing essays. Also, can you give my comments and critiques, especially conclusion...I think it's a little weak... THANKS! p.s. I started it off with a poem by ...
This is the prompt: Write about a time when you had to show respect for authority, even though it was difficult to do so.
I am writing an literary essay about The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro with the topic of "self-deception as self-destruction". Could someone proofread my introduction so far and help me fix any grammatical errors?
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Can you proofread my essay? "Why are you proud of your Vietnamese Heritage?"
Corey wrote first draft of his eassy. What is the next step before he revises it? A.proofread the essay for errors. B.Reorganize the material C.Leave it alone for a few days. D.None of the above. i got A what do you think ?
Can someone please proofread my Spanish? Thank you. it will not let me post my HW because it says that I have posted a link but I haven't. Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. We'd be glad to proofread it if you can post it! Please try again. You can not copy ...
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I went back made the suggest changes. I will go back and add more specfic examples of traditions before I turn my final paper in. I need this asap (before Sunday) Thanxs for your help! Who Is An American?
According to CCMS, the small size of this school helps the downtown urban community meet their needs, in particular at-risk students from low-income households because the students are given more individual attention by faculty members. As a small charter school, CCMS promotes...
Can someone proofread my common app essay?
Is there any way I could email a tutor and send them a copy of my essay so they can proofread it for me?
I know I have to add some specifics to certain areas, could you proofread what I have so far. Who is an American?
Could you please help me form an introduction paragraph for my essay? It's a comparison and contrast essay, where I am comparing two songs. I need help! Thank you.
This question goes with the essay: Describe the reactions of Juliet's father and mother when Pais proposes marriage to their daughter. How are their opinions the same and how are they different? Essay: Lord Capulet, and Lady Capulet had the same reactions to Paris's proposal ...
Would someone be willing to proofread my essay in Spanish? It's less than a page long. It'd be great if you were somewhat fluent, I'm awful at Spanih grammar =[
For my English class, I had to write an essay comparing two short stories. I wrote it but I am not at all confident with the quality of it. Can I post it here to have it proofread? It's 3 pages double-spaced.
Please i need help, how to start a essay using Amanuensis about my teacher but don't know how to begin.
Could you please check for fragments, pronoun agreement, and tell me if I use first person all the way through. Thanks! Here is the format I am suppose to be following: a. Have an Introduction: Your introduction will tell readers what you knew about the topic before starting ...
I posted this before, but failed to paste the essay! oops.. haha. So here's the essay. Please proofread and critique and comment. I'm not so sure about the conclusion. It feels a little weak to me..thanks!!! People seek the answers of their own questions about their lives. ...
I had asked earlier if anyone had any ideas for an essay over the importance of accepting others as they are, and now I am finished with my essay so I am curious to see what you think. It will be given a rating of 1-4.
Can someone please proofread this before i email it to school metro's director Mr. Thomas LeMera Hey LeMera, my name is Bryan Martin and I’m email you to require more information on your school. I am a senior in high school in temple hills MD. I'm interested in becoming a ...
I MUST A DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY OF 350 WORDS AND MY TOPIC IS A YOUR DREAM HOUSE IN RUBRIC FORMAT, I DO NOT KNOW WHERE TO START AND HOW TO GO ABOUT WRITING THIS ESSAY, PLEASE HELP, PLEASE HELP.
Can someone help me please I have to write a essay on if you won a million dollars and cannot spend it on yourself or family what would you do with it. I need help to start it just the opening line please
Choose an essay or a short story to read. Then answer the following questions in the space provided. 10.What is the title of the story essay? 11.Who wrote it? 12.Whom is the story about? (Identify the main characters [or, if an essay, the subject discussed].) 13.hat happens in...
i have an essay to write about: if i would be given the liberty to be someone else that day, who would i be??? and how would i spend my time?" this is the question. i will be glad if i get the composition written by someone Well, that's not going to happen at this website. We ...
I realize this is very last minute. I wrote a 6-page history paper on the topic of civil rights and I want someone to read it over before 3pm tomorrow, if that's possible. thanks!
Hi, Can someone proofread this for me and let me know if I followed the directions for this assignment. Directions: Detailed information about the agency, an evaluation of the site and comparison of the site with experiences in the practicum setting should be reported.
hi. Can someoene please help me with an essay. I have to write an essay comparing John Mayer's song belief and the Crucible by Arthur miller. I know the crucible but I just don't understand the meaning behind belief. can someone please help me find a website about the meaning ...
I am trying to figure out titles for my essay. I want the essay about family, being brave when things are going down, having faith when things are a blurr, or about being courageous when things are very tough. It's all the same, but please help me pick a title of all this ...
Please help me proofread my spanish essay (so far). Thanks sooo much!! El sueño americano no existe solo para los pobres. No existe solo para los emigrantes. No existe solo para la joven. La idea del sueño americano es una que es conocida por todo el mundo. Cualquier persona...
Help with my research essay!? I have this assignment I have to do and its a research essay. I was wondering if this was a good topic (not too broad or not too specific) for my essay: Behind fast food, or like does fast food take effect on obesity? I've chosen to do something ...
can someone please help me by giving me suggestions for a topic,for my Descriptive Essay it can be about anything; that can be described please give me some suggestions. because i'm not sure what to write on, and i'm going to be asking for help a lot in the essay too.
Okay well i have to do a comparative essay of A.E poe "The Raven" but the simpson version and the origional version the poem... i decited to compares "moods " of the both version.. like the caracters moods... Can you please find me a comparative essay Example...not an ...
In the text box provided below, type the research report according to the guidelines below. You must submit both your first draft and final versions. Remember that an adult must review your first draft and provide constructive criticism. Assignment: A formal outline and a ...
I deleted your last post in which you expect us to proofread an essay you copied verbatim from an internet site. Bobpursley and I both showed you that that is not your work and is indeed, plagiarized. If you post it or any other plagiarized work again, you will be banned from ...
Hi, I have two assignments I have to submit to my AP US History teacher for next year by June 2nd. The first part is to explain why I should be in the class in a one page essay with size 11 font and 1.5 spacing. Could someone please read through my essay and see if it's ok? ...
What is the number one eassy writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay B.Always write five paragraphs C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. i got A what do you think?
I'm writing an essay for To Kill A Mockingbird and the claim I came up for my essay is "Children are never too young to understand the realities of life." I'm writing the extended paragraph right now where I have to come up with a good example from the story that relates to ...
Can you guys proofread these paragraphs for me please? Where are the pargraphs by Kshore?
if you are printing an essay on the comuter....can the essay be double line space?
Write an essay of 300 words on cop23 Please give ideas !!
Hi. I'm trying to think of an essay title for an "I believe" essay. The essay is supposed to talk about how I defy the 'single story'. I talked about defying the single story of a teenage girl because I play the drums. My "I believe" statement is that 'I believe in seeing more...
Where do I go to do an outline of an expositroy essay. Something to go by. please let me know asp. thanks
I am writing and essay for social studies and i only have a conclusion left please help!!!! The essay is about the war of England and Spain in the 1500's their war about cultures and i want to finish this essay so i need help with the conclusion!
can some proofread my paragraph it is for a persuasive essay? Please,Thank You!! Is Education system taking the risk for students learning? Is the capital that we have been giving helping students to improve their performance in schools ? What can be done to futher advance ...
What is the number 1 essay writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay. B.Always write five paragraphs. C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay. D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. .I CHOSE C.
please give me tips and sentences i can use in an essay about:why hard work need to succes ?
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Which of the following best describes an expository essay? a. An essay that uses casual, conversational language. b. An essay that tells a story about a real-life experience. c. An essay that explains an idea by breaking it down. d. An essay that uses humor to achieve the ...
which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence, fluency, or conversation? provide textual evidence from your essay to support your answer. Please can someone help I'm having trouble figuring this one out!!!!
For our homework we had to draw and label an imaginary creature, then write an essay on it . I'm completely stuck on the essay bit please he
I'm trying to write an essay on the roles of nature. I must use passages from the readings of Emerson,Thoreau and other Concord writers. Please help
has anyone read the essay called "texting is stupid" by gene weingarten? I need help finding the thesis and the tone of the essay! please help asap! thanks in advance!
I am doing a essay, and I need help to start me off on this. Please help me. Give me examples, ideas anything. This what I doing my essay on Political System, subsistence strategy Bands.
I have to write an essay andnit has to do with barbie dolls. I really do not know what way to take this essay or where to start. It's for college & please opinions ?
i writing essay on what true love be and this be one sentence in my essay you please able to change it to positive? i have negative word which be unable in essay. In the short story, "The Painted Door", by Sinclair Ross, the main characters John and Ann were unable to ...
Can you proofread these to make sure they make sense? Sur le sable chaud Whispering Waves calmement aux sirènes jolies le soleil brille contre ma peau bronzée chaud il chatouillant L'eau de mer salée touche ma langue et ma peau et pique mes yeux
Um can any body help me with this. LOl :( It's uhh.. to do with an essay comparing and contrasting the use of language, form, structure and the content of texts. I have to identify australian cultural elements in the following 2 poems; "The Shearer's Wife" by Louis Esson and "...
i'm writing a persuasive essay about teachers giving students too much homework. i need 2 more supporting topics 1. interfering with activities 2. 3. please help and thank you
Where can I go to check about my essay when your are finished? I have not seen any essay from you for help with proofreading. If you post the entire essay in a message, someone will respond directly to that message. =) I need your help to write that essay,"A way to decrease ...
I woul like to review my essay please? Post it. Can you please help me write that essay" A way to decrease your chance of becoming a victim of random ciolence". Hmmm. You have an assignment to write an essay, a teacher offers to review your essay, and you respond asking the ...
I need help in history. I have to write a 4-5 paragraph essay on world war one, but I need information. Could someone please summarize the main things that happened in world war one? Please don't write an essay, I just need someone to tell me the very important things that ...
Using evidence from Orwell’s essay, respond to current events, and draw from personal experience in order to write a well-organized paragraph in which you persuade your reader that the English language either is, or is not, improving over time? Can someone please help me ...
Please Help with essay question. thanks!! In a federal system of government (also known as a federation), the local and state governments share power with the central government, though the central government has final authority. Eplain how this is different from a confederation.
Hey, I have to write an essay tommorow on the high and low points of George Washington and John Adams? I have a ton of other homework and don't have time to think. PLEASE don't write the essay just give me the main points. PPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEE!! if i do bad on ...
Which of the following is a complex sentence? A. After Henry submitted his essay, he realized that he hadn't proofread the last page. B. identity theft is a growing problem, especially among seniors. C. Jim tried to watch a video on a device connected to a crowded wireless ...
i be having test soon in english and we be writing synthesis essay and narrative essay, i not know what synthesis mean, can you please give me examples of narrative essays online i know narrative be story telling type essay but examples be helpful for me to study.
I'm writing an essay on Substance Abuse. Its an informative essay and I am having trouble coming up with a topic. Can you please give me some suggestions? I am leaning towards something to do with marijuana possibly...
Rules of writing an essay?, And what are the main factors of an essay?, How to properly write an essay without an errors?
I've been asked to write an Essay for english class on Hamlet. It sais to : Select one speech from Act IV of Hamlet and write a cause and effect essay for how it targets its audience. You may choose a target audience of any context or production of the play - the original ...
I have to plan for an essay. The essay is to do with Arcadia. I'm having a bit of difficulty. Why is Arcadia an artificial play? Please help
what is a good topic to write about for a personal essay? it has to be something that is meaningful. PLEASE HELP ASAP!!!
I have to do an 2-page essay on "Carbohydrates". I need help on outlining the essay. Anyone can give me assistance on that? Thanks.
The body of your essay contains which of the following? A. The longest section of the essay B. The supporting details. C. A Conciluding sentence D. All of the above
I'm not sure what I am supposed to do here I am to write a Bibliographic essay on my sources for my final research essay - what does this entail? I don't want you to do my homework for me,just give me a couple of examples please, Thank You, Sara
Here is my finished essay. Could I please have the teachers opinnion on it? Link: //tinyurl( Dot) com/25cnjx8
my other question; What is the purpose of this essay? How can you tell? The purpose of this essay is to give us a better understanding of puns. how can I tell? - In this essay it gives selections of puns, that are all different. Please add any more info, thanks. How would I ...
Nae one or two experiences or situations that reflect an 'unredeemed' world. What reasons can you identify for this. 300 words Please help me. I'm NOT asking you to do this essay for me .... I just don't know what to write for this essay.
Hi! Can somebody help me? I'm an austrian student, and i have a big problem! We have to write a definition essay with the title : tourism/ travel. and we have to write it until tomorrow, but i'm very busy, i have a mathe test tomorrow too, and i am not able to write my essay. ...
Can you profread this for me please? Overall the essay is very well developed and has some good concepts. After reading the entire essay I found the statement of conflict paragraph to be the weakest. The topic sentence that use really grabs the readers attention. The concepts ...
I have to do an essay on the poem "The mirror"- the essay must include what literary Techniques are used to characterize the mirror, the lady and the relationship between them -Can i gat help please