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Ms. Sue, I am trying to post my journal in order for you to revise it , but it will not take it , it says not allowed to post internet addresses, while I do not have any on my paper.
Can someone give me the checkpoint exam topics that are required for a student to revise Please give us more and clearer context for your question. It is not clear what you want to know. What exam topics? Why do you need to revise them? Please repost with the additional ...
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Please revise this sentance: That we the Australian people are becoming to excessively like the United States of America Thanks Minerva
Hi, I have to revise for an upcoming test and I was a little bit confused about selective breeding. Please help Jiskha :)
i need to write a question poem with 10 lines and that asks a lot of questions i have no ideas please help! Pick a theme, then the questions, then put them in verse. Example: Theme Love questions.. What is how it began where will it lead how will it end and so on... the verse...
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this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethnic conflict and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx. Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan ...
Could you please revise this sentence? Thank you. 1) By moblity we mean the transer of every single teacher or student to the partners' country within the two years of the project.
I urgently need you to revise these sentences. Thank you. 1) You can cheat by conceiling pieces of paper full of information in your pencil case. 2) you can take a picture of your exam questions and email it to a friend 2) you can instant message homework questions or text ...
I've got loads of GCSE exams coming up this month and I don't know the best way to revise for them all. Please help!
Grammar - Improving Tone
Revise this paragraph to eliminate negative attitude and focus on postive ideas. "We are sorry to inform you that the Travel-Lite suitcase, Model X4457, you asked about is temporarily out of stock in our warehouse, just as Ms. Cummings of our Hilldale store infromed you. We ...
what was the purpose of the constitutional convention held in philadelphia in 1787? A.To sign the treaty of paris B.To select the nation's new president. C. to revise the Articles of Confederation D.to draft a declaration of independence My answer is c @Ms.Sue can you please ...
I'll revise the sentences and then I'll post them back to you. Can you please suggest a site where all reporting verbs (to be used in indirect speech, especially when giving instructions or advice) are listed? I don't want to use "tell, ask" all the time. Thank you.
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What is the last thing you should do before turning in your essay? A.Write the secong draft. B.proofread the essay to make it is free from errors. C.Revise and edit,changing and rearranging the content. D.All of the above. i got D what do you think ?
If you were to revise a document three times, which of the following is something you would NOT be looking for in the final revision? You-attitude Positive emphasis Style and tone (*) Layout can you please review my answer i put (*) next to the correct answer
What is the infinitive phrase in this sentence? To revise your writing carefully will improve your presentation and provide you with success. A. To revise you writing carefully B. Will improve C. Your presentation D. And provide you with success Matt hiked the trail yesterday...
Anyone want to revise? Brains vs. Brawn
How do i revise a memo?
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Hello, I am writing a paper for international law course can someone please revise my intro? thank you. It is ordinarily accepted among all nations that territorial jurisdiction is based on the fact that a crime is committed within their territory. However, sometimes they also...
Indeed, the environment ignores state borders, and environmental pollution is not restrained within boundaries. When pollution originates in one country and crosses the frontier, leading to negative impact on the environment of other countries, it constitutes transboundary ...
Revise and edit the following run-on sentence: Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business ...
What is the number one eassy writing rule? A.Edit and revise your essay B.Always write five paragraphs C.Always brainstorm before writing the essay D.Start writing the essay the day it is assigned. i got A what do you think?
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Question: What was your experience with the Center for Writing Excellence (CWE) in the past? In addition to the CWE, what other writing tools are available for revising a research paper? How can you become your own editor and look at your writing with a critical eye? Answer: I...
Can you please check these sentences for me? Thank you very much. 1)Another important theme is that of equivocation.The witches confuse good and bad (better evil). They are unable to distinguish between good and evil. 2) Closely connected to the theme of equivocation is that ...
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Ms. Sue, What kind of strategies can I use to revise my paper?
Revise the following sentence to omit personal pronouns. I think it is important for you to evaluate information before it in a paper. It's important to evaluate information before including in your paper. Please check my work.
Revise the sentences. (1) Revise the following sentence so that the subject and verb of each sentence identify key actors and actions: Currently, the percentage of full-time African-American professors teaching in American universities is less than eight. African American ...
Work like a scientist
If an experiment disproves a scientists hypothesis,what should the scientist do next? A.)Develop a testable question. B.) Revise the hypothesis and try the experiment again. C.)Develop a theory based on the data gathered in the experiment. D.)Change the dependent variable. ...
Can you please revise this for me? Tears: Easily coming, easily going. Effortless work for salty streams flowing. Might come when you're here, might come when you go. But tears are definitely good work's foe ---Does the last line make sense?--- thanks
8. Which of the following options accurately represents the steps involved in the writing process? A. Write first draft, edit, revise, write final draft B. Write first draft, revise, proofread, write final draft C. Plan, write first draft, edit, write final draft D. Plan, ...
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-revise the sentence for a clear meaning here is the sentence Surgeons moved around the operating room, skillfully using tools wearing slippers. -the revised sentence Surgeons,wearing slippers,moved around the operating room skillfully using their tools. please if there is a ...
how can i revise this or what should i look for to revise this: To begin with, I know that the designer for this freelance job would need to consider a dimensional look. As I have a Web design and interactive media associate degree, I do have experience in basic Web design ...
Revise the sentence below to make it more formal: 'You're going to get really fat if you eat at fast foods restaurants all the time. My version: If you continue eating at fast food restaurants all the time, the possibility of becoming obese will be very high. Please check my ...
I still have more sentences to check. I really hope you can revise them, too. 1) Revise all your sentences orally. 2) Bring the government down (and bring down the government) 3) He stopped to take on the students (to take the students on is possible?) 4) Mark took over the ...
I still have the following doubts. I included the various alternatives. Thank you 1) Prospero calls Caliban a lying slave instead Miranda calls him a horrible slave. Is "instead" correct? I would have used "while, whereas" or I would have started a new sentence with "Miranda, ...
write two paragraph explaining the changes that you would make to revise the paper.
A study was conducted to examine the peer review process. The investigators hypothesized that reviewers suggested by authors would give more favorable reviews than reviewers picked by journal editors. They obtained data on 40 manuscripts that had been reviewed by 1 author-...
please help me to revise this paragraph I’m fed up with the mistakes that our current accounting firm makes. I run a small construction company, and I don’t have time to double-check every bookkeeping entry and call the accountants a dozen times when they won’t return my...
Could you please revise the following sentences, please? 1) As a matter of fact, two among our science teachers are willing to partake in the project where English would be the lingua franca. 2) Translate the following words into English, then choose two adjectives describing ...
revise sentence on a 10 grade level. It is imperative that consumers be unrestrained in determining their preferences.
i need your help How to revise this question "The book I took on vacation was exciting reading" like specific
COMPARISON/CONTRAST ESSAY-Please Proofread
1. what are the type of comparison and contrast essay? 2. what are the ways to revise your paragraph in a comparison and contrast essay? 3. define of historical cause and effect essay? 4. comparison and contrast about pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing and proof and ...
Revise the following sentence so that ACTIONS name KEY VERBS. 1. Our discussion was lively and fun
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How can I make this sentence better? I am trying to paraphrase, but the last part of the sentence does not sound good. In the case of Yunis, the United States contended jurisdiction found in section 1203 of the Hostage Taking Statue and section 32 of the Aircraft Piracy Statue...
Evidence clearly demonstrates Latin America’s transition to democracy. Though unstable, it’s long democratic history reveals progression from oligarchy, to semi-democracy, to an electoral democracy. Thus, with these three cycles of democratization trace the political ...
. Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “A glove and ball is the required gear.”
REVISE Studying is hard work many students find they study better when they take regular breaks.
which kind of software program allows students to write, revise,move ,erase and print words
Is any one can help me to revise my college application? Thank you. Question: Please describe which of these activities ( extracurricular or personal activities or work experience) has had the most meaning for you, and why. I was used to be a President of class in high school...
31. I had hoped the police would blame Bruce, not ___. __ me __ myself __ mineself __I 32. Some interviewers ____ have a clear sense of what they want in an employee, ask very tough questions. __ who __, who __ which __ that 33. A venture capitalist has to be willing to take ...
how can i revise this sentence to remove all fragment? There are two reasons why. I like baseball. It is fun. And for the good exercise.
To assure the Writing Process is complete, the author must A. revise B. project C. compile I would say it's A, right? Thanks for checking.
Instructions: revise to remove fragnments and/or parallelism errors. ?1. I like basebal because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.
how can i revise this haiku poem? lunch bell rings change clinking in our pockets striving for food
I need to revise these sentences. Can you please help me? 1) What music instrument do you play? Which music instrument do you play? 2) When does their show start? What time does the show start? 3) Do you have a lot of fun? You always talk around. (What does "talk around" mean...
I needed to write a good thesis statement for my english class about how people consume the news. This is what i have tell me if its good, if not please help me revise Back in the day people of a particular age would consume news by reading the newspaper, watching the news, or...
Hello, this is my intro for a paper on Balochistan. I am concern about not being the clear. Can you please make suggestions. Thanx. Iran and Pakistan are not a single nation state but a multi-national state composed of many nations. Both are governed with a doctorial political...
. Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “Swimming at the lake, a rock cut Sue’s foot.”
Can someone please help me urgent. I need to rewrite theses two sentences and eliminate unethical aspects. The service contract...on the whole...applied to upgrades. 2. All our costs were within fair-use guidelines. 1. Upgrades were applied to the service contract. 2.Factory ...
I urgenlty need you to revise this sentence. 1) I'm pleased to hear that your school is willing to undertake the task of coordination. (to act as a coordinator of the whole project).
If I post my essay can some one revise it and tell me if I answered the question.
there are 27 students in the party than 3x the students come how many are there?
revise the following sentence to remove all pronoun errors. When a police officer fires his gun, he must fill out a lot of paperwork.
Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “I saw mountains of uncollected trash walking along the city streets.”
Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problem: “I saw mountains of uncollected trash walking along the city streets.”
Explain what is wrong with the following sentence and revise as needed to correct the problems: " While repelling from the cliff, my backpack slipped and fell to the canyon floor."
Revise sentence and put commas in where necessary. Some scientists in San Francisco California filmed skateboarders in action. My answer was: Some scientists in San Francisco, California, filmed skateboarders in action. I was wrong - please help by correcting
what are the diff b/in: 12. Dilute to and dilute with 13. Warm, boil 14. Heat almost to boiling 15. Heat just to boiling 16. Evaporate to 17. Evaporate to almost dryness 18. Concentrate the volume to 12. I know the meaning of dilute its reducing the concentration but idk ...
How do you do this? I am lost. My topic I chose is Homeless. Summary of the Research Process I. Begin the project. A. Think about the assignment. B. Analyze your audience and the purpose for which you are writing. C. Select an appropriate topic. D. Formulate a viable argument...
In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.) Revise the following word groups to ...
I am working on a test review for Gov't and I cant find any information whatsoever in the text book. The question is... Identify and explain why the following is important... 2. Events leading to the American Revolution: French & Indian War, Albany Plan, Stamp Act Congress, ...
Revising Messages: Conciseness Revise the following sentences, using shorter, simpler words. 9. The antiquated calculator is ineffectual for solving sophisticated problems
The Straw, a play by Eugene O'Neill. The question is : Using what you know from reading the play, revise the introduction to add dramatic irony.
1) Why is "at university" wrong? Does this word always be followed by "a" or "the"? Thank you. 2) Can you help me express this? You found it difficult to express your personal opinions as well as to revise your topics critically.
I have to revise each statement to eliminate the unethical aspects. - Factory- trained technicians respond to all our calls. - “The service contract… on the whole… applied to upgrades .”
Revise the folloing sentences to create parallel constructions. (Question) Some students hate math; some students dislike math, and math is liked by other students. (my answer) Some students hate math, some dislike math, and some like math. every way I have tried it just doesn...
The city of Miami located on the southeastern part of Florida is characterized as a subtropical city situated on flatlands. During the wet season, the biggest environmental problem that I feel is significant to the city is the sanitary sewer overflow, caused by the city’s ...
Social Studies (Check, Please!)
Why did Truman veto the Taft-Hartley Act? A: President Truman vetoed the Taft-Hartley Act because he believed it would "revise the basic direction of our national labor policy, inject the government into private economic affairs on an unprecedented scale, and conflict with ...
revise the following sentences to eliminate shifts in tense, mood, voice or person. 7. The flight attendant said, "please turn off all electronic devices," but that we could use them again after takeoff. 8. The real estate market was was softer than it has been for a decade, ...
how can i revise this sentence using more formal word choices. I spend tons of my time on my English class because writing and researching stuff is hard.
4. Identify what is wrong with the following sentence: “Not realizing that there was a hole in the tire”. Then, revise the sentence in order to correct the problem and discuss the changes you have made.
Hello, I have to revise these sentences for dangling modifiers and I wanted to see if I did it correctly. First sentence: Flying over the oak tree, the farmer saw the flock of birds that had damaged his crops. I revised it to: Damagins his crops, the farmer saw the flock of ...
can't you do actual revision ; instead of just words. it would make it a whole lot easier, because what if we didn't need to revise on those particular words and needed RESEARCH?
Revise the following sentences to make one of the existing sentences subordinate the other? The hurricane destroyed some oil rigs. Fuel prices rose.
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the word forte has been borrowed from the french word fort, meaning "strong". in which sentence is the word forte used correctly? a)It is not in your best interests to have a particular forte.** b)Writing is my forte. c)My history teacher has no forte in past events. d)His ...
What was the primary purpose of the Constitutional convention of 1787? A. Outlaw slavery In both the north and south B. Place taxes on the imports and exports C. Revise the articles of confederation D. Reduce the power of the federal government
The orginal purpose of the 1787 convention in Philadelphia was to: a. discard Articles of confederation b. revise the articles c. draft a new consitution d. discuss the future of the northwest territory
Compare two college essays, everyone please come!!
I come back... and bring an new college application essay, please help me to revise the new one(the first one), and more important... to compare which one is better for my college application. If you are not good at writing, it doesn't matter, just tell me your opinions. Thank...
I has to revise the following sentence naomi winned, why d you leave me like this! naomi soon began to cry.naomi lucas yelled Its okay youwill be just fine
While cyclical revision is obviously more time-consuming than holistic revision, what might be some advantages of using the former rather than the latter method to revise written work?
7. The original purpose of the Constitutional Convention of 1787 was to A. develop the principle of states' rights. B. solve the slavery issue. C. revise the Articles of Confederation. D. elect the first president of the United States. C?
Revise the following sentence to include gender neutral pronouns. Change any words necessary. A writer must include research to ensure the reader understands his point. I need help with this one.
A person who is shown his or her argument commits a fallacy should run screaming from the room. argue louder. add another fallacy. revise the argument.
A person who is shown his or her argument commits a fallacy should A. run screaming from the room. B. argue louder. C. add another fallacy. D. revise the argument.
Which option was used to revise this sentence? I am so glad to see you! Am I ever glad to see you!
#1: The Straw, a play by Eugene O'Neill, is set in a factory town in Connecticut around the year 1910. At the opening of the play, Bill Carmody is waiting for Doctor Gaynor to finish examining Carmody's daughter Eileen. Carmody, a widower, called the doctor in earlier, when ...
I urgently need to revise these sentences. Could you please help me? 1) In my family we are six of us: my father, my mother etc. 2) I like very much playing instruments. I don't like doing shopping. I like lots of sports. 3) My mum usually cooks breakfast for me. At 10.30 pm I...
Both the USB flash drive and the DVD are data storage devices, but they both have numerous differences. Both can contain insane amounts of data and add to our storage making it even easier to store your photos, videos, and many more types of files. However, the ways both ...
HI I'm in year 10 and I would like to have some websites on business Studies to revise for a test on Monday Especailly on the topic of Sectors of Economy thnnx