Could someone just proof read this for me and help me make sure the grammar and spelling is correct?
Macbeth or the White Witch
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I have decided to compare Macbeth to the White Witch from “The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe.” Although both Macbeth and the White Witch both appear to be very powerful, they both have their own strengths and weaknesses. Macbeth shows to be the weaker one and the White Witch shows to be the stronger one. While reading theses two books, numerous questions came to mind. Three specific questions in general stood out though. You will hear more about these in a moment.
The first question that came to mind was; What are the reasons? Let’s start off with Macbeth first. Macbeth doesn’t have an army or a “Magic Wand”, so his powers wouldn’t possibly as great as the White Witches. The Witch on the other hand has an extremely large army of all sorts of creatures from the land of Narnia. She also has a “Magic Wand” which can turn people into stone. It is quite obvious here that the White Witch is proving to be the most powerful out of the two.
Another question that had come to mind was; How are they the same? First off, they were both very powerful people. They had the ability to harm anyone who stood in the way of what they were trying to accomplish. Also both Macbeth and the White Witch had at least two, three or more people who listened to their every command. For Example: The White Witch has a little dwarf who didn’t dare disobey her. All the while Macbeth had the three Murderers working for him. These characters all listened and did as they were told.
Our last question asked how they were the same; an even better question would be How are they different? Obviously the White Witch has more people who follow after her than Macbeth does. A reason for that maybe because the creatures are afraid of what she would do to them if they don’t listen. Another reason it could possibly be; is the fact that maybe they like following after her and want to do it. Macbeth on the other hand doesn’t have very many people who listen to him and those that do may not be afraid of him at all. But either way the White Witch has once again proven to be the most powerful of the two.
So there you have it. Clearly the question asked in the beginning which was the most powerful, The White Witch or Macbeth. The Witch was stated to be the most powerful. From everything that has been said, it’s leaning toward the Witch being the most powerful. As you could see they both has their differences and similarities, but in the end the White Witch just came out higher than Macbeth. If you would like, you can read these books yourself. Then you too could compare the two and figure out which is the most powerful.
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The first question that came to mind was; What are the reasons? Let’s start off with Macbeth first. Macbeth doesn’t have an army or a “Magic Wand”, so his powers wouldn’t possibly as great as the White Witches. The Witch on the other hand has an extremely large army of all sorts of creatures from the land of Narnia. She also has a “Magic Wand” which can turn people into stone. It is quite obvious here that the White Witch is proving to be the most powerful out of the two.
Another question that had come to mind was; How are they the same? First off, they were both very powerful people. They had the ability to harm anyone who stood in the way of what they were trying to accomplish. Also both Macbeth and the White Witch had at least two, three or more people who listened to their every command. For Example: The White Witch has a little dwarf who didn’t dare disobey her. All the while Macbeth had the three Murderers working for him. These characters all listened and did as they were told.
Our last question asked how they were the same; an even better question would be How are they different? Obviously the White Witch has more people who follow after her than Macbeth does. A reason for that maybe because the creatures are afraid of what she would do to them if they don’t listen. Another reason it could possibly be; is the fact that maybe they like following after her and want to do it. Macbeth on the other hand doesn’t have very many people who listen to him and those that do may not be afraid of him at all. But either way the White Witch has once again proven to be the most powerful of the two.
So there you have it. Clearly the question asked in the beginning which was the most powerful, The White Witch or Macbeth. The Witch was stated to be the most powerful. From everything that has been said, it’s leaning toward the Witch being the most powerful. As you could see they both has their differences and similarities, but in the end the White Witch just came out higher than Macbeth. If you would like, you can read these books yourself. Then you too could compare the two and figure out which is the most powerful.
So there you have it. Clearly the question asked in the beginning which was the most powerful, The White Witch or Macbeth. The Witch was stated to be the most powerful. From everything that has been said, it’s leaning toward the Witch being the most powerful. As you could see they both has their differences and similarities, but in the end the White Witch just came out higher than Macbeth. If you would like, you can read these books yourself. Then you too could compare the two and figure out which is the most powerful.
This "sounds" very informal. Is that what you intend?
Well.. it IS written by a freshman... and not to be mean.. I just wanted to know if it had any gramatical errors
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Macbeth or the White Witch
Uh... What was the question?
I have decided to compare Macbeth to the White Witch from “The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe.” Although both Macbeth and the White Witch appear to be very powerful, they each have their own strengths and weaknesses. Macbeth shows himself to be the weaker one, while the White Witch proves to be the stronger one. While reading these two books, numerous questions came to mind. Three specific questions in particular stood out. You will hear more about these in a moment.
The first question that came to mind was: What are the reasons? Let’s start with Macbeth first. Macbeth doesn't have an army or a "Magic Wand," so his powers wouldn't possibly be as great as the White Witch's. On the other hand, the Witch has an extremely large army of creatures from the land of Narnia. She also has a "Magic Wand" which can turn people into stone. It is quite obvious here that the White Witch is proving to be the most powerful out of the two.
Another question that arose was: How are they the same? First off, they were both very powerful individuals. They had the ability to harm anyone who stood in the way of their goals. Additionally, both Macbeth and the White Witch had at least two or more people who listened to their every command. For example, the White Witch had a little dwarf who didn’t dare disobey her, while Macbeth had the three murderers working for him. These characters all listened and did as they were told.
Our final question asked how they were different. An even better question would be: How are they different? Obviously, the White Witch has more followers than Macbeth does. One reason for this may be that the creatures are afraid of what she would do to them if they don’t obey. Another reason could be that they simply enjoy following her. Macbeth, on the other hand, doesn’t have very many people who listen to him, and those who do may not be afraid of him at all. But either way, the White Witch has once again proven to be the most powerful of the two.
So there you have it. Clearly, the question asked in the beginning, which was who is the most powerful, the White Witch or Macbeth, has been answered. The Witch has been stated to be the most powerful. From everything that has been said, it’s leaning towards the Witch being the most powerful. As you can see, they both have their differences and similarities, but in the end, the White Witch comes out on top. If you would like, you can read these books yourself and compare the two to figure out which is the most powerful.