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Shipp is the only co-founder remaining since both Daniels and Winborne have graduated. She started off as a secretary and is currently an executive producer. Shipp says that YBOT has taught her to communicate with finesse and tact and also helped her to be more flexible.
“Things don’t always go the way you plan when it comes to creating and watching them develop. It’s not easy, but it’s worth it in the end,” Shipp says.
As a fellow YBOT e-board member, Winborne says that Shipp always gave her best effort. She says one thing that stood out about Shipp is that she was always eager to learn and help where she could.
“She was very passionate about the organization and sacrificed a lot to help it grow.”
In regards to Shipp’s personality, Winborne describes her as upbeat, focused, friendly, and spirited
“She has a personality that lights up a room. It’s very hard not to like Pasha, she carries kindness and positivity everywhere she goes,” Winborne says.
Theresa Ghiloni, original e-board member of YBOT, says that Shipp is a team player. She says Shipp’s promotion of teambuilding is what makes YBOT a team, and also makes the working environment pleasant.
“She made sure there was the fun intimate aspect to what we do as an organization instead of just meeting up twice a week to shoot videos. We all really became friends and got to know each other and build relationships, which made our videos better,” Ghiloni says.
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"Shipp is the only remaining co-founder since both Daniels and Winborne have graduated. She started off as a secretary and is currently an executive producer. Shipp states that YBOT has taught her the importance of communicating with finesse and tact, as well as being flexible.
“Things don't always go as planned when it comes to creating and watching projects develop. It's not easy, but the end result is always worth it,” Shipp says.
As a fellow YBOT e-board member, Winborne mentions that Shipp consistently gave her best effort. One notable quality about Shipp is her eagerness to learn and willingness to help wherever she can.
“She was incredibly passionate about the organization and made many sacrifices to help it grow,” Winborne adds.
Speaking about Shipp's personality, Winborne describes her as upbeat, focused, friendly, and spirited.
“She has a personality that lights up any room she enters. It's hard not to like Pasha; she radiates kindness and positivity wherever she goes,” Winborne says.
Theresa Ghiloni, an original YBOT e-board member, characterizes Shipp as a team player. She highlights Shipp's emphasis on teambuilding, which creates a pleasant working environment within YBOT.
“She made sure there was a fun and intimate aspect to our organization, rather than just meeting up twice a week to shoot videos. We all became great friends, building strong relationships that ultimately enhanced the quality of our videos,” Ghiloni explains."
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