checking grammar
Review of the sleep questionnaire indicates that the patient had a trend oximetry done 2 years ago and was placed on 9 cm of CPAP. The patient notes that he has not seen much change with the use of it. His father has a history of the same. He still continues to have daytime fatigue and sleepiness and some shortness of breath. There is also a history of seizure disorder diagnosed in the fall of 1997.
...He still continues to have daytime fatigue, sleepiness and some...
just separate with a comma
the rest I fine :)
Commas needed:
He still continues to have daytime fatigue, sleepiness, and some shortness of breath. There is also a history of seizure disorder, diagnosed in the fall of 1997.
Here's a good source for basic comma uses you need to know:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
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After reviewing the given text, I have identified a few suggestions for improvement:
"Review of the sleep questionnaire indicates that the patient had a trend oximetry test done 2 years ago and was placed on 9 cm of CPAP. The patient notes that he has not seen much change with its use. His father has a history of the same. He still continues to experience daytime fatigue, sleepiness, and some shortness of breath. There is also a history of seizure disorder diagnosed in the fall of 1997."
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